YMGGK Re-Written #1 (Part 6- Page 14)

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As Albeli leaves the house, everyone is happy that Abha is finally back and re-united in the family. Vimal then suggests if they organize a Masquerade ball in Swarn Bhavan itself to celebrate the happiness in the family and everyone agrees. As they all are discussing, Raj and Lata enters and Lata runs and hugs Abha saying 'I'm really sorry Abha that even i could not recognize my sister' and Abha says 'Its alright Didi' and they both hug each another. Karan comes and says 'This two ladies always get sentimental everytime they meet' and everyone laughs 😆

Vimal says its good that you have came Raj and Lata, we were just discussing about having a Masquerade ball in Swarn Bhavan itself. How does it sounds? A modern ball in the traditional Swarn Bhavan? Raj says wow, that's great. At least i would get to only see Lata's eyes and keep falling in love with her while Lata gets shy and everyone teases them. So everyone, the Masquerade party can be held tomorrow night. So there is a lot of work to do and lets get started 😃

Everyone starts decorating Swarn Bhavan and while the decoration work is going on, the phone in Swarn Bhavan rings and Pratibha who was walking by picks it up and her dialogues is not shown and she ends the call by saying, sure and this would remain as a secret. Sheetal mami hears this and wonders who was it that Pratibha was talking about secrets with. Now is the next day where Swarn Bhavan is decorated with the Masquerade theme and all the ladies are in glittering sarees while the guys are looking charming in their suits.


Pratibha is keep looking at Swarn Bhavan's door and keeps looking at her time and Jagmohan comes to Pratibha and asks what is it Pratibha, why do you look like you are waiting for someone? Pratibha brushes off saying its nothing and just then Raj and Lata enters and Pratibha says that i was waiting for them and they are here now and greets Lata and Raj. Raj looks around Swarn Bhavan and says wow! Swarn Bhavan looks so beautiful, isn't it Lata? Lata smiles and nods. Karan then announces that the party is about to begin and everyone start wearing their mask and the show begins now. Suddenly someone says 'Not without me!' and everyone turns to see who is it. Pratibha turns and smiles and the person slowly enters.

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Sanskar and Saaniya enters Swarn Bhavan while Saaniya is holding the hands of her son Mayank who is 3 years old. Karan and Abha are surprised to see them and says 'Sanskar? Saaniya? After so long! Only now you have remembered us? You both didn't even bother to keep in touch with us. I'm not going to talk to you' and Abha walks away. Karan signals Sanskar to to and calm Abha down and Karan goes to talk to Saaniya. Sanksar says 'Im so sorry Abha, i got really busy back in UK with work and i know that we have not kept in touch with all of you for so long. But we are now back here na? We will be staying here and not leave anywhere else. I will consider this Swarn Bhavan as my own house and looks around Swarn Bhavan and everyone smiles 😊 while Saniya doesn't looks too happy with what Sanskar had said.

Precap : Saniya is speaking to Sanskar saying, look at how happy are all of them. Lets leave and not spoil their happiness and Sanskar says, just listen and follow as i say. As Saniya turns, she sees Karan looking at them and both Sanskar and Saniya gets scared.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Visha,you have changed the actors that played Sanskar and Saniya.That is so nice and you have done a wonderful job,well done.Will be waiting for the next episode.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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But why isn't Saniya happy??? Nice start dee. Pls continue soon na... 😛
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Yes, i was finding a way to incorporate Iqbal Khan and Samiksha and knowing Ankur and Preeti doing other shows, so i decided to change the cast 😆
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That's fine Visha,i just couldn't stand Sanskar's role when he turned negative and started causing problems for Abharan and when he became good i was still not convinced that he had truly changed and then suddenly they went MIA and i just forget about him.But as for Saniya,i really liked her and she was Karan's true friend and she always helped Karan,but hope he doesn't turn negative again.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Visha. Great job 👏 Waiting for next episode.
By the way can you tell me where in UK Sanskar and Saniya are living as I am from UK also 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice start😊...sanskar turning negative again...then wat abt nilanjana(samiksha singh) who gave abha shelter n her mystery(for us) husband cuz of whom she was worried before d end of albeli track?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Karsuh dee : Even i didn't like him once he changed 😕

@Shobhi : I will need to cook that up in the next part 😆
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Originally posted by: karsuh

That's fine Visha,i just couldn't stand Sanskar's role when he turned negative and started causing problems for Abharan and when he became good i was still not convinced that he had truly changed and then suddenly they went MIA and i just forget about him.But as for Saniya,i really liked her and she was Karan's true friend and she always helped Karan,but hope he doesn't turn negative again.



wat is MIA?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Missing In Action 😊

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