MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 59

beatuful i mean the first part ov it ... uday shot im damn sure its no one else than that stupid majnu (akash) ,, :):)

nice update. uday got shot hope nothing happens to him.

Wow! That was well written and scary too!

Superb update .poor uday is shot .i hope the person who did it is hanged to death .continue soon pls

it was an awesome update Navina...it was very clear..i could see the entire shootout happening in front of my eyes...now i want the update really soon..plz come back fast with the next part!!

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva

beatuful i mean the first part ov it ... uday shot im damn sure its no one else than that stupid majnu (akash) ,, :):)

  Edited by ...navina... - 11 years ago

uday and manayata moments were creating sparks!!!!!!!! manyata's name suggstions were classic speically chaammiya😆 o god udya gt shot now wta will happen,i am also getng tensd!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Awsomeee...and scary update navi dear...hume toh title dekhate hi dar lagane laga tha...lolzzz...manyata is too much kya kya naam suggest kiye...chamiya and chammakchallo...
Hawww...woh kamina ok ntha jo manveer ko dekh rha tha?hum toh fir bhi padh rahe the...kamina kutta kahin kaa my poor uday...kahin ye sab majnu ka karnama toh nahi hai?ush majnu ki toh me...update soon and thanx for PM.Edited by swetsurati - 11 years ago

superb...just cant wait to read moree...

oh God dear the updaye was very unpredictable. It had indeed a very big twist.

seriously i was hell shocked when uday got shot twice. Please navina i dont want hin to die or something cant bear that i know twists are necessary for the progress of any story but dont kill him!

the updated was really amazingly written i was actually picturizing it in my mind!

Great job deary eagerly waiting for next update now its your time to update very very fast:) Edited by MsLuscious - 11 years ago