MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 61

Ravneet Kaur

@Fantasyangel

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Posted: 11 years ago

Navina update was gr8..waise tumhre sabhi updates awsm hote hain..nd wo chamiya nd chammakchallo wala joke superb tha..i was laughing crazily..nd manveer scene tho bs pucho hi mt i have no word for that scene our pagli M excitmnt mein kuch bhi bol deti hai..thanx for pm nd update keep it up..do cont soon

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: pia.raha
uday and manayata moments were creating sparks!!!!!!!! manyata's name suggstions were classic speically chaammiya😆 o god udya gt shot now wta will happen,i am also getng tensd!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Yes Pia - our Manveer are a very electric couple😉.

But we can't blame Manyata - it was the 1st time she had to name a hourse.

... Hopefully, when she has her baby - she comes up with better names.

Dear - don't worry😊 ,

... 2 bullets is not enough to get Uday down.

I will update as soon as I can!!!

THANX FOR COMMENTING 🤗

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi
it was an awesome update Navina...it was very clear..i could see the entire shootout happening in front of my eyes...now i want the update really soon..plz come back fast with the next part!!

Thanx Gargi. I am so glad u could visualise the whole attack. That means all my hard work didn't go in vain😆. The next part may take a while ... as I haven't written a single line of it yet .

... But I will post it as soon as I can!!!

THANK U 4 COMMENTING 🤗

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: zinayrules

awesome update navina!!👏

haha manyata was naming the horses soo cute!!😳

the s** scene was soo hot☺️☺️☺️

OMG! poor uday got two shots i hope nothing happens to him!😭

Thanx Zainab - u give the prettiest comments. Glad u found Manyata's naming session cute ... but, poor girl made a mess of it. The love-making scene was hot

; BUT IT WAS A NIGHTMARE FOR ME TO WRITE😡. Dear - it's gonna take a lot more than 2 bullets to get rid of Uday .

... FOR COMMENTING !!!

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791771

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thanx Zainab - u give the prettiest comments. Glad u found Manyata's naming session cute ... but, poor girl made a mess of it. The love-making scene was hot😳 ; BUT IT WAS A NIGHTMARE FOR ME TO WRITE😡. Dear - it's gonna take a lot more than 2 bullets to get rid of Uday .





                                ...   FOR COMMENTING !!!

navina dear no need for a thanks yar!!

for me all writers r doing great job and when we expect from u to give awesome updates which u give no doubt!

so these comments are ur right!

u people do alot hard work to write and think so in return u deserve more than this!

love u

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Hey Navina 🤗, the update was so amazing and eventful, loved it 👏👏. It had everything in it, hot manveer romance thanks to Manyata's baby making andolan😆, cute manveer nok-jhok on the foal naming ceremony😉😳😳, and dhamakerdar climax with my prince getting shot 😒

The whole climax scene was so magnificently articulated👏, they way he got shot, and still was only bothered about Manyata's safety was so AWWW 😳. And uv knows to fly too 😳😳😳I know mera hero mar raha hai, but I'm like a pathetic maniac still drooling on him , but kya karo yaar tumahar UV hai hi aisa.

Now Navina, who was that bas**** who first had to guts to spouil our manveer's private moment and see it😡, and secondly, he planned and shot the prince of Jaighad😲😲. I have a feeling it was Aryan urff that Akash/Pakash 🤢.

Please save my prince .

Was an amazing update Navina👍🏼, but felt it was smaller than ur other updates,thanks for the PM

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puggyy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

Outstanding effort !! 👏

Loved it , but felt sad for uday ..

Update was hot😉 Also emotional😭

U know I felt bad at da climax , y did doctor tell so

Pls navina can't see uday on bed , get him well soon

Next uday ka junior pls

Screw that majnu ...still I couldn't believe how could someone attack Yuvraj uday veer ..tht to in jaigad ...

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#608

hey loved d update..
loved d manveer romance..😳
who s dat "🤬" who was watching them😡
pls uday ko teek kar do😭😭
update soon😊😊

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: MsLuscious
oh God dear the updaye was very unpredictable. It had indeed a very big twist.
seriously i was hell shocked when uday got shot twice. Please navina i dont want hin to die or something cant bear that i know twists are necessary for the progress of any story but dont kill him!
the updated was really amazingly written i was actually picturizing it in my mind!

Great job deary eagerly waiting for next update now its your time to update very very fast:)

Hey Sarah ... Had to put in a twist, something which nobody would've expected. ( because I had to make sure that all my readers will come back for the next part😆😉).

I am not evil Dear - I'm not gonna let him die. I ❤️ him as much as all the girls here love him.

Thanx for the lovely compliment 🤗.

Will TRY to update soon⭐️.

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#610

reserve

sorry navi...fr late replying

will comment soon😳

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hey navina...😳

omg omg omg...this update was amazing yaar...truly rocking,,,,u did an awesum job👍🏼

it was very unpredictable update...u know why

becoz

the first half of the update wasy very hot, sweet nd cute update😳

nd

the other half was really scary nd shocking 😳

i mean..the update begins with manveer hot make out session...i mean i reallu loved how manyta was so eager to make a baby with uday😆 😉

thn how sweetly manyta made her understand tht she is serious about having a baby nd atlast uday follows his princess command...tht was really very sweey

thn the " naamkaran" of tht baby horse was so hilarious...😆

manyta suggesting names like" CHAMIYA,,,CHAMAKCHALLO... 🤣🤣🤣

nd uday vampire...😆

tht was awesum dude👍🏼

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thn came the most scariest part...

who was tht bas**** who was eyeing on manveers private moment,,, i m sure tht must be akash only...🤢

nd thn the gun battle...uday gt shot with two bullets,, now tht was really scary man😲

but i know u wont let happen anything to him...i trust you...😳

so all nd all...once again u did a tremendous job...really loved the update👏

now eagerly waiting fr ur next part...yaar

plz update soon...😳

Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 11 years ago

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