LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
Welcome back Nikki 

Loved the update & sorry for being super late. Thankfully khanak got his diary & got to know the true face of Tina. poor girl has cried so much & had almost decided to leave but destiny has its own plans & she found diary. Diary reading was ubber cute Shaan loves her so much but this tina is behaving in such a way which created misunderstanding between them. ab aayega majja as khanak had seen her real face & knows her intention. now khanak will show her peace of mind to tina 

exciteddd ...continue soon 

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi friends...thanks a lot for hitting like buttona nd thanks for commenting guys...
thanks a lot maneesha , jaisy, aasma , poo , sudha  and pranjal...thanks a lot for commenting guys...thanks for liking the story...

ch  18

khanak : O M G that b****...

khanak sat down on the bed...shit...how dare she...

shantanu is trusting her a lot...shit..last night i too believed in her talk na..

she acted ...i too believed...she is his childhood friend so he beieved her...

there is nothing wrong on shantanu...s...s ...there is nothing wrong on shanatanu...

a smile appeared on her face...s..s...tear rolled down from her cheeks and

she smiled ..a broad happy smile...

she went to washroom...she took a shower again..she changed in to

a beautifull white saree with light pink roses in it...she was looking very beautifull...

she came to the hall...she went to pooja room she closed her eyes

and prayed ...she took sindoor and placed it in her forehead partings...

she walked to the kitchen...she saw madavi was doing something...

madhavi : wat beta ur headache gone...(smile)

khanak : s mom...i am completely alright now...(broad smile)

madhavi : good...

khanak : wat r u doing ma...

madhavi : shaan told he is coming for lunch with tina...so preparing his

favorite dishes...nearly over...

khanak looked at the dishes...

khanak : uhh...mom shall i make kheer...

madhavi : ummm ...okay...(smile)

madhavi went out...khanka with a smile she started to make kheer...

khanak finally finshed the kheer and she placed everything in the dinning table

there was a knock on the door...khanak smiled...she walked towards

the door very happily...she slowly opened the door...

she saw shaan and tina were standing with bags...

khanak smiled at them especially at shaan...

shaan was standing in shock a happy shock...but tina was not smiling...

she just saw khanaks face she felt anger inside...

khanak : how was the shopping tina...

tina : it was very good...holded shaans arm...

khanak saw that and she just smiled at them...

they went in...shaan was still in shock...he was thinking oh man

wat is happening...she is looking gorgeous...and and she is smiling at me...

is it real r dream...he was still looking at khanak  who was going

near dinning table...but tina who was sitting near shaan was in full anger...

she saw shaans face who was looking at khanak...

ansh : ahh...papa...u also came...

ansh came inside with other kids with khusbhoo...

shaan : hey dude...hugged ansh...

ansh : papa i brought new psps games...

shaan : wow...lets play...

khanak : no shanatnu...first  u both  come and eat...(smile)

shaan was again shocked...he just looked at khanak

who was standing in front of them...

he thought wat...wat is happening...she called me with an authoritive and

caring tone...is it real r am i dreaming...please god..please it should be real...

khusbhoo : hey khanak u r looking beautifull...

shaan  thought its real..its not dream...his heart danced with joy...

but his mind said hey no..no..how come she can forgive she told...

she told she hate u...this all acting for family...

his heart no...no...i can see something in her eyes...

khusbhoo : wat devar ji...u cont take ur eyes out of ur wife...

shaan : uhh...i will fresh up and come...

shaan quickly went to his room...

tina was sitting there with full anger...

khanak : wat tina u did not fresh up...(smile)

tina : ha i am going...she went to her room...

shaan came down ansh called him and made him sit near him...

khanak saw tina was coming towards the dinning table...

khanak quickly went and sat near shaan who was sitting near ansh...

(shaan was sitting inbetween ansh and khanak)

shaan was shocked...he thought hey dude wat is happening she is sitting

near me that to her arms touching my arms...did she forgive me...

tina was shopped in her tracks...

khanak : hey tina come come...come and sit there (pointed the chair

opposite to them)

tina walked with anger and she came and sat opposite side...

they all started to eat the food...shaan was very happy and he was eating very happyly..

everyone r started eating...they all came to hall...

harilal brought the kheer in bowl and served to everyone...

shaan was sitting with kids in the floor...madhavi khusbhoo and tina r sitting in sofa...

khusbhoo : wat mom today kheer anything special...

madhavi : khanak made it...

shaan took a spoon and started to eat... oh man its delicious...

khanak walked from dinning area and she came and sat near shaan...

khanak : wat tina how is my kheer...

tina : umm its okay...

khanak : dont u like it i added lot of sugar na...

she moved a little bit closer near shaan took his spoon in the kheer and

she scooped a spoon and took it to her mouth...

shaan was shocked by her sudden act..she came and sat near hima nd then she

took the spoon and she tasted his...

khanak : it is very tasty...isnt it shantanu (with a broad smile)

shaan took that spoon and ate some kheer...

shaan : its very delicious...(looked very intensely at khanak)

khanaks cheeks burned red...she smiled shyly ...

but a pair of eyes looked at them in vengence...



sorry for small updates...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow lovely update niki...
superb...
Lol tina ko full on shocks!!
Shaan is too shocked with khanak's behaviour...bichara he is thinking that he is dreaming each time...
Loved it niki...
Aww cant wait for the next updateπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahahhaha 
poookr tina bechari 
love khanak 
shaan is defo spellbound hahahah
another update plz
xxx
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it di..😊 Khanak now know the truth that Shaan is innocent..All coz of this Tina.. 😑

Awww..She dressed up beautifully and prepared kheer!!!

Shaan is so pleasently shocked to see Khanak in the caring avatar for him!!! 😳 Tina is angry and fuming.. πŸ˜†

Kheer must be delicious as Khanak cooked it!!!

Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update di.. 😊
Edited by poo_j - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Niki superb update
Ha ha ha  tina full of shock and fuming with anger
Shaan thinking he is dreaming  and pleased with his caring wife
Khanak dressed up beautifully and prepared kheer and mission of giving shock to tina and suprise to shaan loved it
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow wow wow i just loved it
OMG i m loving watching tina's jealous face yesss
and shan he is in shock hahhahaa but thank god he listened to his heart and is not ignoring her 
hope this stays forever waiting for the night hope khanak talks to him and forgives him
thank u babe for updating soon plzz update again soon :)))
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Posted: 10 years ago
         

O Jee Dil Khush Kar ditta πŸ˜ƒ what an amazing Update Nikki πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘loved it to the core, 

Now our sharni is in real action πŸ˜ƒ Ab aa raha hain Majja. khanak understood How shaan is trapped by Tina πŸ˜‘ she is his childhood friend & she took advantage of his blind trust πŸ˜‘ but Ab khanak will not spare her. πŸ˜ƒ LOved the description of her Saaree. Khanak made Kheer for shaan & the way she welcome him with huge grin plus her caring attitude & ordering him to have lunch first πŸ˜ƒ she set besides him on dining table & now eat kheer from his bowl πŸ˜ƒsuch an adorable scene i am enjoying Shaan's situation πŸ˜† he is still in shock ...LOved the update dear already read it thrice ...Cant wait to read next part πŸ˜ƒ

please update soon

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
super like :)
update next part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow di it was supub... update

love it