...Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ! [4] {Upd @ 01 Oct)

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Hi Guyz!!

                       It is rather unbelievable that V have started the 4th thread of...

...Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !

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Thank you for overwhelming response to this story. Your all words of encouragements have enabled us to start this 4th Thread.V do know that,this would not have been possible if you...our all dearest readers had not penned down those words of appreciation,encouraging us to write longer and better updates.


And a big thanx to Joseph,for letting us write this story.This very unconventional story is fun to write,each male lead wid a streak of 'Grey' in his character is out to get GUNJAN to be his,then any action is justified...B'coz,the theme of this story is...

" Everhthing is fair in Love n War "

V would like to thank all our readers who have supported us till date...those,who have commented n hit the 'LIKE' tab also...


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V present the Character Sketch n Look of the main characters of this FF...




CHARACTER INTRODUCTION
'n' LOOK :

*SAMRAT SHERGILL

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A self made, successful businessman, SAMRAT SHERGILL is the son of industrialist PRATAP SHERGILL and Late VASUDHA SHERGILL. A horrible childhood ensures that he dons the mask of a shrewd, harsh person, willing to manipulate to his benefit.

But, beneath that facade is an innocent person. A person who wants to live a normal life, but has his priorities... avenging his mother's death. For that, he is willing to marry RICHA SAXENA. Love does not exist for him, as this cannot get him what he wants...making his dad, who he blames for his mother's death, to pay.

What is love??

No such thing as Love... people only use others for their benefit. This is what I thought, till she entered my office and then my heart and life... my GUNJAN.


*RAHUL NANDA




A hardworking employee of SHERGILL INDUSTRIES, RAHUL NANDA is GUNJAN's childhood friend. His brilliance in academics is rewarded when he completes his MBA and gets a well paid job. Till now, he has hidden from GUNJAN his feelings for her. But now, he has made up his mind to tell her about his feelings.

What is love??

GUNJAN...N only GUNJAN !! My childhood friend... now my life...!!


*MONISH KHURANA




Living a carefree life, MONISH KHURANA has finally found the soul mate who will make his life beautiful. By hook or by crook, he will make her his. Till now, for him, girls are meant to be changed, but with the thought of her in his life, he has changed.

What is love??

The most beautiful creation of the creator above...GUNJAN... the other word for LOVE in my dictionary.




*GUNJAN BHUSHAN




Burdened by the love and care showered on her by her foster parents, the NANDA's , GUNJAN is trying to ensure that she is not disappointing them in return. Educated on a scholarship, GUNJAN is back in MUMBAI now and wants to do her bit to repay the NANDA's for their kindness. Simple and pure at heart, her only drawback is, she sees the world through her eyes.

What is love??

I had thought that love will be beautiful, with the person I am in love with making me feel special. But, that is not so. Now, I will not cross the boundaries society has made for me.


*RICHA SAXENA


Mistaking her infatuation to be love, RICHA SAXENA, daughter of BALDEV SAXENA wants to marry SAMRAT to be recognised in society as the wife of The SAMRAT SHERGILL. She is the owner of the company SAMRAT intends to take over after marriage to settle scores with his dad.



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STORY CONCEPT - This is an 'Experimental' Love Story. Its not a simple Love Triangle based concept. Here,all Male Characters in 'Gray' shade.they are totally practical persons. They can do anything for his LOVE. Its not a 'routine' or 'traditional' Love Story concept.This story is based on the very Old n Famous rule...


" Everhthing is fair in Love n War " .

Thank You readers for your overwhelming support for this FF.
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S3J ❤️





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 INDEX:

Part 01 to 23 : Thread 1
Part 24 to 35 : Thread 2
Part 36 to 44 : Thread 3

 
Part 45  :  Page 10                [10 Oct. 2012]

Part 46  :  Page 17
              
[10 Nov/05 Dec 2012]

Part 47  :  Page  28               [15 Feb 2013]

Part 48  :  Page  37               [01 Oct. 2014]

Part 49  :  Page  **               [** Oct. 2014]

Part 50  :  Page  **               [** Nov. 2014]

Part 51  :  Page  **               [** Nov. 2014]






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SAMRAT reaches KIWISH H.O. and directly goes to Mr. SIMON's cabin where he sees MONISH whom he ignores. This is where SAMRAT informs MONISH that he is not interested in taking over KIWISH. Words are exchanged as SAMRAT makes his intention clear... that he wants GUNJAN back and is not interested in anything else. MONISH loses his temper and harsh words are flung at each other by the two. SAMRAT  wins this war of words as he challenges a dumbstruck MONISH to try and stop GUNJAN from joining the SHERGILL's again.


When he reaches the conference room, SAMRAT sees GUNJAN sitting at the table allocated for the KHURANA's. Enough for him to lose his temper.  He asks her, very rudely, why she is disobeying him and when she does not reply, he gets even angry. Some harsh words later, when GUNJAN finally does reply and says that she is here with MONISH, SAMRAT completely loses control over himself and, holding her hand, drags a petrified GUNJAN out of the room. Both leave the KIWISH H.O.

When MONISH reaches the conference room, he is surprised not seeing GUNJAN there. When he finds out that GUNJAN has left with SAMRAT. he gets angry and calls her up. But she disconnects the call as she is with SAMRAT and she knows that SAMRAT would not like it if she accepted MONISH's call. She also remembers the incident at THE AMBASSADOR where, in anger, SAMRAT had broken her cell. Angered by this, MONISH calls up the commissioner and asks him to frame SAMRAT in a 'sexual harassment' case.

During the drive, when SAMRAT has accelerated the car, seeing GUNJAN's reaction he remembers her fear for speed and slows down. Slowly, SAMRAT SHERGILL seems to be allowing his heart to dominate. he asks her directions to her residence and drops her off at her place.

This is where he informs her about  her returns to SHERGILL's. She is worried as she says she cannot till she speaks to her family to which SAMRAT retorts that he will do the needful. A worried GUNJAN says that  she will talk to her family. She also says that she will ask MONISH not to ask her to work on the project which involves the SHERGILL's. This makes SAMRAT even more angry and he says that she is still an employee of the SHERGILL's as her resignation has not been accepted and he expects her in office the next day on time. As SAMRAT drives away, GUNJAN wonders how she will talk to the NANDA's about this. She checks her cell to see MONISH's missed calls and calls him back. replying to MONISH's questions about what happened, she tells him everything. This is when MONISH assures her he will deal with this matter his way.

On his drive back home, he receives a call  from MONISH and again, both have an argument. This argument also ends with both challenging each other about getting GUNJAN to work for them only. As he disconnects the call, he calls up the commissioner of police. Since he is not home, he leaves a message and then, angrily storms out of the house.

Meanwhile, when GUNJAN reaches home, she sees her uncle home and is  worried when he says that a serious matter has to be addressed. She thinks they have found out about the problem that has just been created. She heaves a sigh of relief when she hears that her uncle is in a jovial mood and is referring to visiting his in-laws place as a serious problem. A cute family scene helps GUNJAN momentarily forget  her troubles.

When she hears about the engagement if her cousin SUMIT  and their trip to PUNE, she gets excited. As her uncle and aunty are packing for the trip, GUNJAN receives a call from RAHUL. he tries to hide his worry from his friend, but is unsuccessful. Somehow, he manages to change the topic. He tells GUNJAN that he wishes he was with them. GUNJAN on the other hand is also trying to hide her troubles from RAHUL, her attempt failing too. And she tells him about the trip to PUNE.  RAHUL is happy for them and tells her that he wished he could join.

After disconnecting the call, he takes a decision to tackle the ALISHA problem, once and for all...as now, he cannot allow anyone to come between him and GUNJAN...  he will not allow anyone to hurt GUNJAN.

As she is packing, GUNJAN sees the anarkali that she had worn when she first met SAMRAT... unintentionally. She remembers all the incidents and then realises that she can never be close to SAMRAT SHERGILL. She decides to convince her heart not to beat for him.


 




As the phone continues with its shrill ring, GUNJAN runs to receive  the call. And she is surprised to hear SAMRAT at the other end.  he starts the conversation in a normal tone, which then turns to his normal, harsh one as he finds out that GUNJAN has not yet spoken to her family about resuming her job at the SHERGILL's.


GUNJAN informs him that it will  be impossible for her to be at work the next day and SAMRAT, as usual, yells at her. She tells him the reason...the trip to PUNE... but he is not willing to listen. Then, when he sees that she is not relenting, he tells her about the legal notice he intends to send her for breach of contract. She is petrified on hearing this. her pleading falls on deaf ears as SAMRAT orders her to be at office on time the next day.

SHARADA Jii, who was walking towards the kitchen, overhears part of the conversation and asks GUNJAN what the problem is... GUNJAN can never lie and so, tells the truth. SHARADA Jii is surprised to hear that GUNJAN has joined the SHERGILL's again. Even more surprised is she, when she hears that GUNJAN will have to report to office the next day.

Just then, MONISH calls and when GUNJAN tells him the problem, he pacifies her as he tells her not to talk to SAMRAT till he finds a solution to this matter and then, he requests her to let him speak to Prof NANDA. Happily GUNJAN asks her uncle to speak to MONISH and after his talk with him, he tells SHARADA Jii and GUNJAN that for this problem to be sorted out, GUNJAN needs to be in MUMBAI.

A soft, family moment as GUNJAN tries to find solace as she rests her head on the lap of SHARADA Jii. Prof. NANDA and SHARADA Jii come up with the idea of canceling the trip, when GUNJAN, in her gentle way, convinces them not to. They agree and are willing to leave her alone on the condition that she comes to PUNE  as soon as this problem gets sorted.

 At office, SAMRAT is upset. he never had a family life and so, does not understand GUNJAN's need to attend one. He vents his anger and frustrations on Mr.SHARMA and also plans to get rid of this menace called MONISH.

His father, Mr. PRATAP SHERGILL comes to his cabin and angrily, asks SAMRAT about his decision to cancel the new exclusive mobile range. SAMRAT refuses to humor his dad. An argument between the two finally ends with an infuriated PRATAP SHERGILL leaving the cabin and calling up Mr.SAXENA to talk about the wedding of RICHA and SAMRAT.

A visibly disturbed SAMRAT walks over to the new cabin that he is designing for him and GUNJAN. As he reaches the cabin, he gets a call from Inspector KAUSHAL, who warns him of MONISH's plan... involving GUNJAN in his talk. SAMRAT is hurt when he finds out that GUNJAN had agreed to file a case of sexual harassment against him. Then, his hurt turns to his uncontrollable anger as he decides to teach GUNJAN a lesson.


As teh NANDA's prepare to leave for PUNE, GUNJAN receives a call from SAMRAT and remembering MONISH's instructions, she refuses to speak to him. this angers SAMRAT even more.



Meanwhile, in SINGAPORE, RAHUL goes to meet ALISHA. She makes him   wait, where he recollects part of his past... how ALISHA had humiliated his best friend GUNJAN. The incidences of that day makes his resolve even stronger, that ALISHA has no place in his life. ALISHA makes him wait and does not meet him angering RAHUL.

 At home, in MUMBAI, GUNJAN is all alone and scared of being left alone at home. She makes herself comfortable when she receives a call from her uncle. A touchy father daughter conversation takes place after which, GUNJAN reminisces her  happy past with the NANDA family.


As she is about to serve herself some dinner, power goes out and the house plunges into darkness, scaring GUNJAN. She is about to search for candles when someone knocks at the door. She opens the door and is pushed in by someone. As power is restored, she sees  SAMRAT, drunk and in anger,  who has come over to the NANDA home and in his anger, he tries to molest GUNJAN...he wants her to know what sexual harassment really means.  But his resolve is broken, when he hears GUNJAN talk about dying after he succeeds in his plan. These words leave him shattered a she has seen the death of a person he loves and hates the thought of losing GUNJAN.

He backs off and asks her why she did what she did. A confused GUNJAN  asks him to clarify. He tells her about the sexual harassment case filed by her against him . She is shocked as she has no clue about this.

A heart to heart SaJan conversation dominates part of the update... and then SAMRAT SHERGILL apologizes to GUNJAN.

During their conversation, MONISH's name crops up and that is when GUNJAN realizes what had actually happened and she is embarrassed. She agrees to come to office the next day.

SAMART receives a call from DAI Maa and GUNJAN  overhears that SAMRAT has to visit a doctor the next day. She realizes that he may not have had dinner and after a lot of debate, finally,  asks him if he would wait and have dinner.

After freshening up, as SAMRAT is walking towards the dinning table, he sees the house and decides that GUNJAN will live in a better house than this.  Just as they are about to start dinner, the door bell rings...

 

    
  

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Worried as to who it could be at this hour, GUNJAN opened the door and was relieved to see that it was some one from the society's office. She walks back towards the dinning table to find SAMRAT looking at her, not eating. Upon realising that his plate is empty, she feels embarrassed and moves forward to serve him. His reaction surprises her  when he tells her he has been waiting for her. Powers goes out again, making GUNJAN hold on to his arm in fear.


Thoroughly enjoying himself, SAMRAT understands her fear and asks her where the candles are. She tells them where they are and both search for the candles in the kitchen. As they light the candles  positioning them in different places ...  SAMRAT  is mesmerized by GUNJAN's beauty. The smile on his face and the happiness in his eyes surprise GUNJAN.   Adding to her astonishment , SAMART serves both of them dinner.

Their first unofficial dinner date done with, SAMRAT decides to leave. Not wanting to, he tries to buy some more time, but ultimately has to leave. promising her that he will call, he leaves.

 The spring in his steps and the smile on his face is enough for DAI maa to understand his feelings. But she wants him to speak and asks him questions, to which SAMRAT  is unable to answer without fumbling. This cute DAI maa/SAMRAT conversation introduces to the readers to the innocent and childlike SAMRAT.

As SAMRAT walks away from her, DAImaa  thanks the almighty for indicating to her that the SAMRAT she knew may be back soon. She knows that she need to meet GUNJAN .

In his room, SAMRAT remembers GUNJAN ... her beauty... and he is very happy for the way things turned out. He realises that he is indeed in love with her. He decides to call her as per her request, but then feels that to know if she cares, he needs to wait... for her to call.


In conflict with herself, GUNJAN tries to refrain from calling SAMRAT. But her heart does not allow this and finally she decides to call his home number. SAMRAT who is waiting for his cell to buzz is irritated on hearing the landline scream. he yells at the person who is calling, unaware that it is GUNJAN. he asks her to disconnect this call and calls on her cell... and then, A cute, SaJan telephonic conversation...


The next day, an over enthusiastic SAMRAT is ready to leave for work. But DAImaa has decided that she wants more information about the person who has brought about this change in SAMRAT.  Over breakfast, she tries to get him to talk, but SAMRAT smartly avoids and keeps reminding her that GUNJAN is only his PA.

At her home, GUNJAN is lost in her thoughts. She is worried about her day at work. She wants to speak to RAHUL but is unable to get through.  Just as she is about to leave for work, her cell buzzes and she mistakes MONISH to be RAHUL. She speaks very informally with him, making MONISH very happy. But then, when she hears MONISH speak, she goes back in her shell. And then, when MONISH asks her when she will be reaching office, she informs him of her decision to re-join the SHERGILL's. MONISH is angry and tries to speak against SAMRAT, but, he is stumped when he hears GUNJAN defending SAMRAT. Somehow, he pacifies her and GUNJAN tells him she is late for work and disconnects the call.

MONISH is not the one to give up so easily. he calls up the NANDA's and informs them of GUNJAN's decision...  then he starts planning the next step.


At the office GUNJAN is worried about being late and facing SAMRAT's wrath. A cute SaJan moment... and then, SAMRAT takes her to the new cabin he has designed for them. GUNJAN is surprised  to hear that she will be sharing the cabin with her Boss.

 


 




GUNJAN starts the day off with checking the appointment Diary and is surprised to see an appointment for a meeting with THE RAHEJA's. She  is surprised as she hears SAMRAT speak very gently with her when she goes to talk to him about this.


When she speaks about the meeting, SAMRAT  refrains from telling her about the deal that had taken place and simply says that the presentation file was sent to the RAHEJA's and that they are keen to start with the project. He says that her presence is required at the meeting as she has prepared the Report.

When she hears the name of the MD, GUNJAN thinks she has heard it somewhere, but, is unable to place. Another SaJan conversation as SAMRAT  thanks her for re-joining the SHERGILL's.

When GUNJAN is about to go to her desk to make the call, SAMRAT requests her to use his desk phone to make the call. SATYAM RAHEJA  speaks rudely with her. Keeping her cool, GUNJAN replies back in a professional manner, impressing SAMRAT. When she hears SATYAM's voice, she thinks she has heard it somewhere, but it brushes the thought away.

Just then, DAImaa calls up to remind SAMRAT about his appointment with Dr BATRA.  SAMRAT refuses to visit the doctor and DAImaa hopes that GUNJAN has overheard the conversation. She prays that GUNJAN will convince SAMRAT to visit the doctor.

And that is just what happens. Though hesitantly, GUNJAN brings up the topic of the doctor and SAMRAT's appointment with him and manages to convince him to visit the doctor. SAMRAT agrees, but with a condition that GUNJAN accompany him. He asks her to tell Mr SHARMA  to take care of the meeting with the
SINGHANIA's.

A stunned GUNJAN simply nods her head as she has no option left and is about to go to her desk, when SAMRAT stops her and hand sover the exclusive mobile set to her. As expected, she refuses to accept that mobile, and this results in SAMRAT losing his temper yet again.

In her gentle tone, she explains her inability to accept the mobile and listening to her, SAMRAT cools down. With his mind cool, he thinks and then, he explains to her the reason why she should possess that cell.



MONISH on the other hand is working hard to get GUNJAN in his life. He visits his parents where a glimpse of his family justifies his behavior. equally arrogant and not at all bothered about their child, the KHURANA's are only bothered about their social life and money. MONISH blackmails them into talking to the NANDA's about his wedding with GUNJAN. Though initially refusing, they give in when he tells them that he will vote against his Dad in an upcoming meeting, making him lose.

Upon reaching office, he decides to speak to GUNJAN and calls her. She is waiting for SAMRAT to accompany him to the doctors's when she receives his call. He invites her for dinner and when she hesitates, emotionally psyches her. She agrees and disconnects the call as she sees SAMRAT walking towards her.

The drive to doctors is another SaJan moment. Listening to songs, SAMRAT is unable to understand the lyrics as they do not seem logical. GUNJAN is not surprised.Talking about the characters of the films,SAMRAT tries to get GUNJAN to speak her heart and is disappointed when he hears that she will marry the one her family chooses.

Meanwhile in SINGAPORE, ALISHA comes to meet RAHUL. She thinks she has succeeded   in sweet talking him to agree for dinner with her. What she does not know is that RAHUL is simply playing her to see what her intentions are.


As SAMRAT and GUNJAN reach the doctors, where he asks GUNJAN to wait outside as he visits the doctor. A worried GUNJAN waits out and the nurse attending to SAMRAT asks him if she is his girlfriend. SAMRAT has no answer.

To meet Dr BATRA , SAMRAT takes GUNJAN with him. After speaking to the doctor, as SAMRAT and GUNJAN leave, Dr BATRA talks to someone over the phone, informing him that their plan is in place.

As they leave, SAMRAT tells GUNJAN about the lunch he intends to have with her. She is absolutely stunned. Over lunch, he informs her of their official trip to PUNE.

 



    



  

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As an excited GUNJAN prepares to leave for PUNE, she hears her cell ring. Seeing SAMRAT's name flash on the screen, she realises that she is late and locking the house, she runs downstairs. Seeing her, SAMRAT forgets his anger. As she walks over to the car, SAMRAT realises she is finding it difficult to carry the bag and offers to help her.  GUNJAN , without saying anything allows him to keep her bag in the boot. After a chat, both leave for PUNE.

The drive is comfortable, with SAMRAT ensuring that he does not speed up unnecessarily as he knows GUNJAN's fear of speed. As they reached PUNE, GUNJAN was surprised to see them driving into the city away from her cousin's place. She asks SAMRAT and is surprised to find out that they have been booked in a hotel in the main city. Hesitantly, she says that she had thought that she would be staying at her cousin's place, which sends SAMRAT's anger flaring. He informs her that they are here for official work and not for any personal commitments.

She says nothing, but seeing the upset look on her face, SAMRAT changes his mind and tells her she can meet her family, but will have to accompany him later. She cannot stay at her cousin's place. The smile on GUNJAN's face says it all.

As they reach her cousin's place, GUNJAN is surrounded by the kids of the family who are elated on seeing their darling GUNJAN Di. But all this is something new for SAMRAT , who has never seen a normal family life. As the kids drag GUNJAN towards the house, she looks at SAMRAT who tells her to hurry up with meeting the family and that he will wait out for her.

Some time later, SUMIT comes to meet SAMRAT and asks him to wait for dinner. SAMRAT tries to avoid the conversation as he replies curtly, but when Prof NANDA who had joined them, requests SAMRAT, he is unable to say NO.




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As they enter the house, SAMRAT is very uncomfortable with what he sees. A crowd, noise... something he never expected. Prof NANDA asks GUNJAN and SUMIT to take SAMRAT to the dinner hall for dinner. When the 3 leave the living room, GUNJAN asks SUMIT to help her gain permission to leave with SAMRAT.

SAMRAT
is angered when he learns about the permission that GUNJAN will require and vents his anger, as usual on her regarding being late and this dinner. As is her nature, GUNJAN says nothing but only clears her side. An older woman gets dinner for the two and SAMRAT is surprised when GUNJAN speaks to her politely, when he finds out that she is the maid of the house. GUNJAN explains to him the reason.

Their second unofficial dinner date later, both walk towards the living room to meet SHARADA Jii. When SAMRAT informs her that they need to laeve, she asks GUNJAN to accompany her so she can talk to the elders. But the oldest member, BIJI , refuses to let GUNJAN go, resulting in a heated discussion. When SAMRAT hears the discussion and sees a frightened GUNJAN, he is unable to take it any more and storms in, asking GUNJAN if she is ready to leave. Prof.NANDA requests SAMRAT to wait and listen to him, but SAMRAT speaks rudely with him. GUNJAN also says nothing to defend SAMRAT when his character is questioned by BIJI.

An angry SAMRAT leaves the house and walks towards his car, venting his anger on the car as he bangs his palms on the bonnet of the car, wounding his hand in the process. When he sees GUNJAN walking towards him, for amoment he is happy, but when he realises that she is here to take her abg, he gets angry and, opening the boot of the car, he flings her bag towards her.

When GUNJAN realises that he is hurt, she gets worried and tried to get some first-aid done. But SAMRAT does not allow her to and also humiliates her by paying her some money for the dinner, and then drives off.

A shattered GUNJAN picks her bag and goes home. She tells no one about what has happened and goes to her room. She says nothing when her uncle informs her that she will be dropped at her office the next day.  In her room, she is thinking about all that has happened and how it has hurt her family, to whom she is indebted and decides that she will stop thinking about SAMRAT.

SAMRAT
reaches the hotel and instructs the staff not to let anyone disturb him. In the room, lost in his anger filled thoughts, he sleeps after taking some sleeping pills.

At her home, GUNJAN also falls asleep on the floor and is woken the next morning listening to commotion. She sees SAMRAT and SUMIT involved in a scuffle and is even more stunned when SAMRAT asks her in front of her family if she loves him... thankfully, she is woken from her sleep. Her early morning nightmare, which she hopes will never come true.   She leaves for work some time later.

At the hotel, SAMRAT realises he is running late and blames GUNJAN . When he finds out that GUNJAN was waiting for him, he blasts the receptionist for not informing him. he has to be reminded by the manager that his staff was only following SAMRAT's instructions. Not saying anything SAMRAT rushes to office and gets worried when he does not see GUNJAN . on being informed taht she is at the factory unit, he gets even worried and rushes there.

After the meeting with the team members is over, he tries to talk to GUNJAN but realises she is avoiding him. Before he can vent his  his anger on her, Mr WADIA, the manager interrupts them. GUNJAN leaves for the record room to get some files.

SAMRAT reaches his cabin and decides that he must have a talk with GUNJAN . He asks Mr WADIA to tell GUNJAN to come to his cabin so they can have lunch and is agitated when he is informed later, that GUNJAN has refused to have lunch.

he goes to the store room and what follows is a SaJan conversation with SAMRAT  going back to being the innocent one that he actually is...when the facade of harshness is moved away.


    [To Be continued...]




        

NOTE :We are posting the summary of the story so far. However, if you could spare some time, we request you to read the story from the beginning. This will help you understand the emotional turmoil that each character had undergone  at some point of their life that has connected them with each other.

   

   

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[A]

GUNJAN
shut the door behind her as she walked over to the bed and flopped on it. She leaned back as she massaged her forehead... ((Oh God ! Main toh sach mein paagal ho jaaoongi. Pehli baar, aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi terrorist place par aa gayi hoon. Kab kaun sa dhamaka kahaan ho jaayega ?? kuchh pata nahin. Shaam[Eve.] mein toh kisi tarah situation handle kar li, lekin, Next time kuch...))

 She was startled as she heard the door of her room open. She looked up and was shocked to see SAMRAT enter the room...



He took no time in slamming it shut behind him... GUNJAN got off the bed and walked over to him as he stood against the door... she looked at his right hand which held the handle of the door as he kept looking at the door. She walked up close to him, as she asked..." Kya hua?? Aap... aap iss tarah mere room mein ?? Aur... aur apne darwaza kyun bandh kar diya??  She completed her sentence as she pointed at the door...

 

SAMRAT looked at her and GUNJAN was surprised to see the look on his face. The usually grumpy look was not there. Instead, he looked at her with excitement on his face. The eyes which were filled with hatred were gleaming... he looked like a kid who had just be up to some mischief and was now hiding in order to avoid the punishment. Still holding the door handle with his right hand, he moved his left hand towards his face as he made a fist and kept his index finger on his lips... " Shhh " !! and then looking around the room, he said..."Sab batata hoon. Pehle main..."  and he walked past her, towards the wardrobe...

 

GUNJAN  followed SAMRAT as he walked briskly towards the wardrobe... asking him... " Aap kya dhoondh rahe hain ?? Just then she stopped. She quickly turned around and walked over to the door... Aur... aur yeh bahar shor kaisa hai?? Main... main abhi..." and she was about to open the door, when the door slammed shut... she looked at SAMRAT who had done so... he looked at her as he held the door closed and said...in a soft tone... " Thodi der chup nahin reh sakti?? Kaha naa batata hoon. Pehle mujhe kahin chhipne ki jagah toh batao. "

 

GUNJAN kept looking at him as she asked him..." What?? Aapko chhipna hai?? Par kisse, aur kyun?? Coffee-Mug wali baat toh sambhaal li thi... ab kya hua??

 

SAMRAT  moved his hand away from the door as he stood in front of her and looked downwards... then looking at her sheepishly, innocence generously loaded in his eyes and tone, he said..." Kuchh nahin... Wo... woh bas tumhaari BiJi ki Chhadi (stick) tod di...

 

GUNJAN was shocked to hear this... she kept looking at SAMRAT, her mouth slightly open in shock... but SAMRAT had a smile on his face


as pride took over innocence when he said, rather relaxed... " Don't worry ! I don't think unhone mujhe unki chhadi[stick] todte hue dekha hoga...and saying so, he turned around and walked towards the window...

 

GUNJAN looked at him as she followed him, asking him...her tone indicating her fear... " What..?? Aapko pata bhi hai?? BiJi ko sab dikhta hai... aur... "


SAMRAT stopped and turned around as he cut her off..." Dikhta hai.. !! agar unhone apne specs... wo kya kehti hain woh...haan 'Chashma...'!! agar unhone 'Chashma' pehne hon toh...

 

GUNJAN also stopped as her eyes widened in surprise as she asked... " Matlab?? "

 

SAMRAT smirked as he walked over to the bed and sat down... totally relaxed as he kept his hands on the bed a bit behind him and leaned back... he then said..." Matlab ,  yeh ki, humne pehle hi unke specs I mean unka 'Chashme' ko chhipa[hide] diya tha... aur bina specs ke toh wo kuchh dekh hi nahin sakti naa... phir, unhein kaise pata chalega ki, maine hi unki stick todi hai?? " he raised his eyebrows as he asked this... his tone excited...


And then he stood up as he said... almost ordering her..." Ok, Now tell me, Main kahaan chhipun??  CHINTU aur BUNTY toh terrace par bhaag gaye. Main toh unke saath hi jaa raha tha... lekin,unhone kaha,  agar kisi ne mujhe unn sabke saath dekh liya toh unhein shaq ho jaayega aur hum sab pakde jaayenge...

 

Phir, AASHU ne kaha, Main tumhare room mein chhip jaoon. kyunki,tum par koi doubt nahin karega. thodi der mein jab BiJi shant ho jaayengi , Hum unka specs unhein lauta denge  he said very innocently as he kept looking around, searching for a place to hide...

 

A dazed GUNJAN  sat on the bed...  as she held her forehead in her palms...resting her elbows on her knees...(( GUNJAN ab toh tu gayi... agar inhein save nahin kiya, toh Ofice mein meri khair nahin... aur agar BiJi ko pata chala ki, maine inhein save kiya hai toh , phir jo hungama hoga,  woh toh soch kar hi darr lag raha hai...


She looked at SAMRAT who was looking at her... waiting for her to reply...Oh God ! Kaun kahega ki, yeh wohi SAMRAT SHERGILL hain jinse saare log darrte hain... Kabhi sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ki, bachhon ke saath milkar ye itni badi-badi shararat karenge. 

CHINTU, BUNTY, AASHU, RAVI... Sabhi ko jaanti hoon, woh aisi shararatein kar hi nahin sakte. Yeh saare master-plan inhin ke honge. Lekin... lekin, main kya karoon?? Kab tak inhein bacha paaoongi?? Yeh aur BiJi toh ek dusre ko dekhna bhi nahin chahte...))

 

SAMRAT looked at her and walked closer to her as he asked very innocently...looking around... " Aise kyun dekh rahi ho?? Batao naa kahaan chhipun..?? and then, as if something had struck him, he looked at her again and said... his tone a bit stern... " Wait...!!...wait !!! Kahin tum meri 'Chugli' karne ki  toh nahin soch rahi?? and then he threatened her... as he pointed his index finger at her...


 

"Don't you dare tell all this to your BiJi or other Family members. Don't forget...I am your Boss... he glared at her... Mere against BiJi yaa Uncle-Aunty se kuchh bhi kaha naa ... toh... 


...toh... Office ke saare New projects tumhein hi handle karne ko de doonga... aur sare Presentation-work bhi... phir pata chalega, SAMRAT ki 'chugli' karna kitna mehnga padta hai...

 his expressions clearly showed that he meant business. Startled and fear writ large on her face,  GUNJAN looked at him... as she gulped in fear...


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[B]

Unable to control his anger, RAHUL , for the first time perhaps, yelled at his parents... " How can U do like this ?? Aap logon ne GUNJAN ke bare mein itna bada faisla lene se pehle Mujhse 1 baar baat karna zaroori nahin samjha ?? "

 

Startled at hearing her son's sudden outburst,  SHARDA Jii stifled a sob as she wiped her tears... and after a pause, said... " Bete ! Hamari baat samjhne ki koshish karo. Hamein bilkul bhi pata nahin tha ki tum... Tum GUNJAN ko...

 

RAHUL  cut her off, his eyes teary and his voice chocked as he said...



" Toh what's the difference Mom?? Ab toh main keh raha hoon naa... he wiped his tears... I love GUNJAN. Main uske bina nahin reh sakta. Uske bina jeene ke baare mein kabhi socha hi nahin... Main...main SINGAPORE se aate hi aap sab ko batane wala tha... after a pause, as he thought about something, desperation in his voice easily heard, he said...Aap...  aap iss rishte ke liye mana kar dijiye. 'Uss se' kahiye ki, wo...  woh sirf 1 misunderstanding thi. Aur... aur woh GUNJAN se rishte ki baat ko bhool jaaye.

 

Silent until now,  Prof. NANDA spoke up... his tone rather serious... "RAHUL !! Tum samjh kyun nahin rahe?? Yahaan Engagement ki Date announce ho gayi hai. Marriage cards printing  ke liye jaa chuke hain.  Unki Society mein 1 reputation hai. Media ne waise hi iss marriage ko 1 hype de di hai. Aise mein, Hamara iss tarah se rishte ke liye inkaar karna ?? Log kya kahenge?? Tum soch bhi nahin sakte ki, 'Unki' kitni badnaami hogi... aur...

 

Once again, RAHUL lost his temper and yelled..." Aapko 'Uski' badnaami ki fikr hai. Lekin, apne bete ki khushiyoon ki parwah nahin ?? Society kya kahegi?? Aaj aapke liye yeh zyada Important ho gaya. Aapke bete ki zindagi tabah ho jaayegi, kya yeh sochna aapke liye important nahin??

 

SHARDA Jii knew this war of words would continue and things would get even more messy...so she spoke up, trying to calm her son down... " RAHUL!! Hamari majboori ko samjho.  Iss tarah se Rishte ko mana nahin kiya ja sakta. Tum khud kyun nahin samjh rahe. Kya..."

 

But RAHUL was in no mood to understand... he interrupted his mom as he said... his tone totally disheartened... " Nahin samajh paa raha tha Mom !! Lekin,ab sab samjh raha hoon.  He took a pause as he braced himself to speak the harshest words any son could speak to his parents. Angrily, he said... Ab achhi tarah se samajh raha hoon ki, aap logon ke liye suddenly Woh insan aapke bte se bhi zyada important kaise ho gaya?? "

 

 Little did Prof. NANDA know what was coming as he asked his son, his tone serious... " Tum kehna kya chahte ho?? Kya tumhein lagta hai ki, hamein GUNJAN ki khushiyon ki parwah nahin ??  Tum... "

 

RAHUL interrupted his father once again...as he taunted... " GUNJAN ki khushiyaan?? Ya aap logon ki khushiyaan?? Come on DAD !! Be honest, aap iss tarah sachhai se nahin bhaag sakte... jo ab mujhe saaf dikh rahi hai.

 

The sarcasm in RAHUL's tone angered  Prof. NANDA ... " RAHUL !! Tum kehna kya chahte ho?? Jo kehna hai  Saaf-saaf kaho. Tum kaun si sachhai ki baat kar rahe ho?? "


RAHUL retorted..his eyes blazing with anger...


" Sachhai !! Sach sunna chate hain Aap?? Toh suniye. Sach yeh hai ki, Yeh rishta aap logon ne GUNJAN ki khushiyoon ke liye nahin balki, apni Khushiyoon ke liye kiya hai...


Iss rishte ke liye 'Haan' karke. Aap logon ne GUNJAN ki parwarish ki keemat wasooli hai. Sirf apni desire ko pura karne ke liye, 1 ameer Businessmen ke haathoon bech diya hai usse. Kyunki, aap donon acchi tarah se jaante hain ki, agar GUNJAN ki shaadi uss ...

 

Prof. NANDA angrily disconnected the call. His eyes brimmed with tears as he heard his son's allegations. He looked at his wife, who had be unsuccessful in holding back her tears. She was sobbing...  all the love that they had showered on GUNJAN was from the bottom of their heart. Like they would care for their own child, they had cared for her. And now, listening to their own blood blame them for something as low as this, was not easy on this couple. ... they were just thankful, that GUNJAN had not heard them...


But unkown to them, behind the door, stood GUNJAN. Her tears flowed freely down her cheeks as she heard the conversation... she turned slowly and walked towards her room... closing the door behind her, she walked over to the window... and looked outside. The cloudy sky deprived her of the only solace she could have got as she saw her parents looking at her as the stars twinkled.



She turned around and sat down near the bed, bringing her knees close to her, crossing her hands across her knees as she hid her head in her hands and sobbed...RAHUL's words as yet echoing...


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[C]

Wiping her eyes, GUNJAN turned to her table and started walking slowly towards it. As she reached her table, she picked up the files and the stationary and then, picking up her bag, she walked towards the door. She looked at RICHA who was still glaring at her... Just as she was about to reach the door, it opened and SAMRAT entered  the Cabin. He looked at GUNJAN in surprise. She looked at RICHA. SAMRAT followed her gaze and was surprised to see RICHA...

 

RICHA exclaimed as she saw SAMRAT... " Hi ! Love !! Kahaan the tum?? Pata hai, Main kab se tumhaara hi wait kar rahi thi... aur tum ho ki, apni unn stupid meetings mein lage hue ho."

 

SAMRAT glared at RICHA and then turned to look at GUNJAN. As she saw SAMRAT looking at her,


she moved her gaze downwards... but,  SAMRAT  had seen her tears...and he asked her... " Where are U going?? Aur yeh Files?? Yeh sab kya hai...?? "

 

GUNJAN said nothing, but kept looking downwards... he knew, she was hurt, and he also knew who had hurt her. But he wanted her to speak up... as he moved towards GUNJAN and was about to ask her again,  RICHA replied ...her tone very rude ... " Usse maine yahaan se jaane ke liye kaha hai "

 

SAMRAT clenched his fist in anger. But before he could turn to face RICHA, GUNJAN looked at him. He looked into her eyes as he released his clenched fist and then, turning to face RICHA, he said... " Excuse-me !! Kya maine tumse kuchh poocha?? "

 

Glaring at her, he looked at GUNJAN and said..his tone stern..." I am waiting for your answer. Where are U going ?? " GUNJAN looked downwards...

 

RICHA lost her temper at this behavior and she yelled at SAMRAT...


" SAM !! What is this?? Maine tumse kaha naa, usse maine yahaan se jaane ke liye kaha hai . Kyunki, yeh mujhe tumhaari meeting mein jaane se rok rahi thi. Toh, isse batana zaroori tha ki, Meri iss office aur tumhaari zindagi mein kya importance hai, aur waise bhi main nahin chahti ki tum apna Cabin kisi  giving GUNJAN  a look of contempt... mamooli staff ke saath share karo... " 

 

SAMRAT  shut his eyes in anger as he heard RICHA speak. Then, he slowly opened his eyes and looking at GUNJAN,  he ordered..."Take your seat and continue with your work"... GUNJAN looked at SAMRAT  her eyes unable to hide the hurt that she was experiencing with RICHA's behavior...

 

RICHA walked over angrily towards  SAMRAT and turning him to face her, she yelled..." No SAM !! This is enough. I can't tolerate this... Tum ek mamooli staff  ke liye iss tarah meri insult nahin kar sakte. Agar yeh yahaan rahi toh main yahaan 1 pal ke liye bhi nahin ruk sakti " arrogantly, she put forth her condition...

 

GUNJAN  was unable to stop her tears...she wiped the tears that were trailing down her cheeks as she started to walk towards the door... and then, she stopped...as she felt the strong grip of SAMRAT's fingers on her delicate wrist... she turned to look at him... his anger reflecting in his eyes... he spoke..." Maine tumse kuchh kaha hai. Aur mujhe meri kahi hui baat repeat karne ki aadat nahin. Take your seat n continue your work... he looked at RICHA angrily and then again at GUNJAN as he said...



Tum yahaan mujhe aur sirf meri kahi hui baatoon  ko hi importance dogi. Koi aur kya kehta hai, Iss se tumhein koi farq nahin padna chahiye.  "

 

GUNJAN was shocked to see his possessive behavior for her... his grip on her wrist tightening... Just then...





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SAMRAT was grief stricken as he saw GUNJAN's condition. He could not bear to see her like this...



He was yelling hysterically at the Doctors and Nurses... "Aap log kuchh kar kyun nahin rahe...? Aap logon ki der ki wajah se agar usse kuchh ho gaya...toh main tum sab ko nahin choodunga..."
His grief...His anger...spilling out of his eyes as he spoke... 
 
A Doctor spoke in a worried tone...He was scared seeing SAMRAT's anger...,"Sir ! Please,try to understand,Her situation is very critical...Unka kaafi blood ja chuka hai...Hum abhi kuchh nahin keh sakte ki..."
 
But, before he could complete his sentence, SAMRAT clutched his collar and almost threatened... "GUNJAN ko kuchh nahin hua hai...aur naa hoga...aur,agar usse kuchh ho gaya toh uske baad tum logon ke saath kya hoga...tum sab yeh soch bhi nahin sakte...

One of the Doctors rushed to his colleagues aid... He freed his colleague from SAMRAT's clutches... SAMRAT let go of his collar...pushing him back... The other Doctor said in a calm tone... "Sir ! Please hamari baat samajhne ki koshish kijiye...Humne unhein OT mein shift kar diya hai...Operation ki saari preparation bhi complete ho gayi hai...Hamare Hospital ke saare Senior Doctors operation ke waqt OT mein hi rahenge...but,jab tak unke kisi Relative ki permission nahin mil jaati...Hum yeh Operation start nahin kar sakte.

         

S - What...? Uski aisi condition dekhne ke baad bhi aap log kisi aur ka wait kar rahe hain...?? Main keh raha hoon naa...Aap operation start kijiye...
 
D - Sorry Sir ! Par,aapko pehle papers sign karne honge...Waise,Aap patient ke kya lagte hain...? Humein other formality puri karne ke liye yeh information chahiye hogi...
 
Now SAMRAT was quite. This question was unexpected...He had no answer to this question. Who was he?? How was he related to her??? He sat on the bench... lost in his thoughts,when the doctor asked him again...
 
D - Sir,Papers par unke kisi relative yaa...
 
 Just then,A strong n confident voice came... " Husband ka sign chalega...?? "
 
A familiar voice shook SAMRAT out of his thoughts. He looked towards the direction of the voice and was shocked. What was 'HE' doing here?? 
 
The Person rushed towards the doctor, worry writ large over his face. He spoke in a concerned tone... "Aap bataiye mujhe,Kahaan sign karne hain...? I will sign...B'coz,She is my WIFE... I M her HUSBAND...and I think,Yeh rishta kaafi hai aapki saari formalities puri karne ke liye."
 
This statement by him and most importantly his presence had shaken SAMRAT. What was happening?? ((This can't be true...Aisa nahin ho sakta...Yeh jhooth bol raha hai.))
 
            
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[B]

GUNJAN was upset... mighty upset. She entered the kitchen and picked up the chopping board. She took the knife and was about to cut the onions when she mumbled to her self...waving the knife as she spoke.....(( Samajhte kya hain woh khud ko...?? Yahaan,bhi koi unka intezaar nahin kar raha...Mujhe koi farq nahin padta... woh jiske saath chahe Dinner par ja sakte hain...mujhe kyun bura lagega...?? Mere paas aur bhi kaam hain karne ko... suddenly remembered evening incident

...aur,woh SHALiNi...kitni besharmi se...par,uski bhi kya galti... yeh bhi toh usse kiss karne se rok sakte the...par nahin,Yeh kyun rokenge...? show toh aisa karte hain,jaise pata nahin meri kitni parwah hai...Aur,1 baar phone kar poocha tak nahin ki,ghar pahoonchi hoon ya nahin...aur Phone kiya bhi toh,sirf ZOYA ko...woh bhi Dinner Date ki information dene ke liye... Ok...Fine...ab main bhi koi parwah nahin karoongi...jiske saath jaana hai jaayen...mujhe kya...Main thik hoon...Kuchh hi dinon ki toh baat hai...yeh din bhi guzar jaayenge...))
 
And she started cutting onions...her mumbling continuing. She knew this was 'The Reality'... though hard to face, the earlier she realised It the better It would be for her. Her eyes brimmed with tears as she remembered the incidences of the day...
 
ZOYA entered the kitchen and was surprised to see GUNJAN cutting onions and muttering to herself. She walked towards her... and tried to look at GUNJAN's face... trying to catch her expression.But, GUNJAN was totally lost in her thought. She did not realise when ZOYA stood next to her and stopping her from cutting the onions, She turned GUNJAN towards her and asked her...  R U Ok...? Kya main kuchh help karoon...?
 
GUNJAN was startled. ZOYA... she quickly wiped her tears and smiling fakely, she said... "No,I'll manage."
 
ZOYA gave a smile...which indicated that she had understood what was bothering GUNJAN. She asked in a caring tone... "Tumhein bura laga...ki woh...?? Tum uss se keh kyun nahin deti ki...?
 
G - KYA ?? Kya kahoon...? aur,Mujhe kyun bura lagega...?
 
Z - Yeh tum mujhse better jaanti ho...Tumhaari aankhon mein yeh aansoo sab bata rahe hain...Tum hurt hui ho...
 
G - (smiled fakely) Nahin...aisa kuchh nahin hai...Pyaaz kaatte hue aansoo aa hi jaate hain.. Mujhe really bura nahin laga...
 
ZOYA wiped her tears, that were resting on her cheeks... and looking at her, she said in a caring voice... "Main samajh sakti hoon yeh aansoo Pyaaz kaatne ke wajah se hain yaa kisi aur wajah se...Achhi tarah janti hoon tumhein...tum mujhse kuchh nahin hide kar sakti...kyunki,tumhaari aankhein sab kuchh bata deti hain...Tum pyaar karne lagi ho uss se... Uski life style tum par asar karti hai... Woh jab tumhaare paas nahin hota...tum usse miss karti ho...bas yeh accept karna nahin chahti...
 
Ok...Fine..mat karo accept...par,main abhi usse call karti hoon...woh kahin nahin jaayega...Jab bataoongi ki,aaj ke dinner mein tum 'Biryani' bana rahi ho...Dekhna woh kaise aa jaayega...aur,hum sab aaj ka dinner saath mein hi karenge...
 
As ZOYA turned to leave, GUNJAN stopped her by holding her wrists... her delicate fingers holding ZOYA's wrists gently... "Nahin ZOYA...tum aisa kuchh nahin karogi...Kyunki,aisa kuchh bhi nahin hai...Really,aisa kuchh nahin hai...Main unki life-style mein interfere nahin karna chahti...main khush hoon...agar upset hoti toh room mein jaakar ro rahi hoti... (smiled fakely) Yahaan aap sab ke liye 'Biryani' nahin bana rahi hoti...waise AATiF Bhai kahaan hain...? Woh time se aa toh jaayenge...? 
 
She hoped that ZOYA would leave it at that... the topic would get changed. But ZOYA knew better... she came closer and said... "AATiF se kahoon...? Woh 1 bar uss se baat karke dekh sakte hain... Woh donon kaafi achhe dost hain...
 
G - Nahin...Kisi se kuchh kehne ki zaroorat nahin hai...Kyunki,really aisa kuchh hai hi nahin...tumhaari imagination ko agar unhone sach maan liya..toh,mere liye nayi problem create ho jaayegi...(smiled) aur main ab apni life mein aur koi complication nahin chahti...so,forget it...aur chalo ab thodi help kar do...Kyunki,agar yeh 'Biryani' kharab bani...toh at least hum proudly keh toh sakte hain...ki,isse hum donon ne mil kar Kharab kiya hai...
                           

She smiled at ZOYA. Amazing... thought ZOYA... How does she manage to hide her pain behind that bewitching smile??? ZOYA returned the smile... 
 
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An angry RAHUL stormed into SAMRAT's cabin. He had with him the bouquet of red roses and pieces of what was once a card. Flinging them angrily on the floor, he looked with blazing eyes at SAMRAT. His voice in the highest decibel he thundered... "Mr.SHERGILL How dare U...?? Tumhaari himmat kaise hui yeh sab cheezain mere ghar par bhejne ki,woh bhi sab kuchh jaanne ke baad...?? Lagta hai seedhi baat tumhari samajh mein nahin aati..."
 
SAMRAT looked up as he heard RAHUL speak. As his eyes traveled from RAHUL's face to the Bouquet and Cards pieces flung on the floor, He lost his temper and he yelled back..." Aur, tumhaari himmat kaise hui iss tarah bina meri permission ke mere Cabin mein aane ki...aur mujhse itni unchi awaaz mein baat karne ki...? "

 

RAHUL walked closer to SAMRAT's desk and menacingly waving his index finger in SAMRAT's face , He said in an angry tone, his eyes spewing venom as his words did...
  "Abhi tumne meri himmat dekhi hi kahaan hai...Jab main khud par aaoonga...tumhaara pura SHERGILL Empire bhi tumhein mujh se nahin bacha paayega."
 
S - (made a scared expression) Oh Really...?? Main toh darr gaya... smiled and said in a teasing tone... Don't worry,Tum jaisoon ke liye main akela hi kaafi hoon... (saying this he leaned backwards in his chair and relaxed, looking at RAHUL sarcastically...he said in a calm tone...) kyunki,shayad tum bhool rahe ho ki,main kaun hoon..? SAMRAT SHERGILL ko kabhi kisi sahare ki zaroorat nahin padti...Yeh tum kabhi mat bhoolna...
 
R - No...I have not forgotten, forget that who U R...? Lekin,lagta hai tum apni hadhh bhool gaye ho...warna,yeh harkatein nahin karte.
 
S - (smiled teasingly) Oh ! Par maine toh yeh harkat kar di...ab tum kya karoge...? By the way,for your kind information...Main yeh 'harkatain' ab roz karoonga...toh, tumhein jo karna hai kar sakte ho...I don't care.
 
R - I know it...Tum jaisa gire hua insaan aisa hi kuchh karega... Main kya kar sakta hoon...? yaa,kya karoonga..? Yeh tumhein bahot jald pata chal jaayega...par,kuchh bhi karne se pehle...tumhein 1 last warning dena chata hoon...woh yeh ki, Mere aur GUNJAN ke beech aane ki koshish mat karna...tumhaare liye yeh zyada better hoga...Kyunki,GUNJAN mere liye yaa meri Family ke liye kya hai...yeh tum soch bhi nahin sakte...toh achha hoga tum uss se door raho.
 
S - (said with smiling face) WoW ! same opinion...!! Believe me...Main bhi tumse same yehi lines kehna chahta tha...par,koi baat nahin,tumne bhi kaafi good tone use ki... par,agar main GUNJAN se door na jaaoon toh...? Toh,tum kya karoge...?
 
R - (Glared to him very angrily) Wait n Watch...!!  RAHUL banged his fist on SAMRAT's desk and turned to leave. But he did not even reach the door of the cabin when he heard SAMRAT's voice stop him..."1 sec. Dude...! Meri Cabin mein aakar...mujhe itna kuchh kehne ke bad bhi agar tum yahaan apne pairon par khade ho...toh sirf aur sirf GUNJAN ki wajah se ...warna,Itna kuchh kehne waale ko main sirh apne Office se nahin...iss Building se dhakke maar kar nikalwa deta...Par,nahin...main aisa nahin karoonga...Tumhein Kuchh sochne...kuchh karne se pehle...tumhein kuchh dikhana chata hoon (smiled evily) ...I think,uske baad tumhaari kaafi 'Misunderstanding' clear ho jaayegi...
 
Slowly RAHUL turned ariund to face SAMRAT who had the smile of victory on his face. He flung a envelope on the desk and said... "Kuchh kehne ya karne se pehle...isse 1 baar dekh lo...tumhein iski zaroorat hai..."



RAHUL looked at the Envelope, his face expressions changing from anger to worry... He looked at SAMRAT who smirked and nodding his head asked RAHUL to pick up the envelope. A dazed RAHUL walked slowly towards the desk and his hands shivering, He picked up the envelope and opened it. His face was drained of color as he saw what was in the envelope...
 
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[D]

SAMRAT turned to GUNJAN side and said in very caring tone, "Arre,Tum aaj kuchh bol kyun nahin rahi...? Koi problem hai...? Kuchh hua hai kya...?
 
G - Nahin...nahin toh...
 
S - Good...toh phir chalo pehle,mere liye Suit select karne mein meri help karo...Mujhe coloring samajh nahin aati sabhi 1 jaise hi lagte hain (smiled)
 
GUNJAN smiled back and said gently... " I'll try...B'coz,mujhe bhi Gents new Fashion Trend ka koi idea nahin, kabhi kisi ke liye aisi shopping nahin ki...toh..."
 
S - Koi baat nahin... (smiled) dheere-dheere habit ho jaayegi (little-bit whispered) Ok..tum sirf yeh bata dena ki,kaun sa color aur design mujh par zyada suit kar raha hai...I mean,tumhein sirf yeh batana hai ki,Main tumhein kaun se suit mein zyada achha lagta hoon...Main wohi select kar loonga ,simple naa... (asked with smiling face)
 
GUNJAN was getting more tensed... but she nodded in positive... one thought worrying her... ((WHAT ?? Kya yeh meri choice ka suit pahnenge ??))
 
S - (smiled) Yes...tum bilkul sahi soch rahi ho...Main tumhaari choice ka hi suit pahnoonga.
 
GUNJAN looked at SAMRAT... with a baffled look. How did he know what she was thinking ??? She smiled and lowered her gaze, but the blush that tinged her cheeks to a perfect shade of pink was not missed by SAMRAT. After a lot of trials, discussions and changes... GUNJAN zeroed down on 3 Suits... SAMRAT was elated to see the suits chosen by GUNJAN... exactly the ones He had wanted...

SAMRAT looked at her...she was looking at him, hoping that SAMRAT would also have liked her choice and say something. The look on SAMRAT's face said it all. His smile answered her questions. She felt relieved. SAMRAT was enjoying these moments with her...  As she started walking towards the exit of the store...she heard a familiar tone...that of an order...
"Wait...where are you going?? Now,Its my turn naa ..."
 
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SAMRAT said in very normal tone... " Ok...As U wish...well...tum mere Suits ke Bill ready karne ko kaho...aur jaa kar 'CAFE' mein wait karo...main bas abhi aaya...
 
G - Par...Main...?? Aapke bina...?
 
S - Don't worry... (smiled) Tumhein ab chod kar kahin nahin jaaoonga... Bas,Kuchh 'Personal' shopping karni hai...bas thodi der mein aaya...
 
He left from there without waiting for her to say anything. For a moment, she stood looking at him. SAMRAT had changed so much... but for the better. She was glad. She went to the billing counter and asking them to prepare the bill, she obeyed her BOSS's order.
                                              
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Just then...
 
S - How sweet...!! Kitne pyaare lag rahe hain donon 1 saath...SAMRAT's sentence broke her thought process. She glared at him and simply started walking away from the CAFE. SAMRAT picked up the shopping bags and followed her. When they were out of the cafe, SAMRAT stopped her... He held her wrist... and in a very soft and casual tone, he asked her...
 
S - Hey...! Wassup...? Kya hua...? Naraaz ho...? 
 
G - Haan...aur bahot zyada naraaz hoon...Mujhe aap se baat hi nahin karni... (and again turned)
 
S - What...? Par,maine kya kiya...? (asked innocently)
 
G - Aapko nahin pata...? Aapne abhi andar kya kiya...?? (asked angrily)
 
S - Oh...! Woh...!! Woh toh main waise hi joke kar raha tha...Tumhein mera joke pasand nahin aaya...
 
She did not why, but when she heard the word 'JOKE' she felt bad... She should have expected this, but still...It hurt her. The hurt reflecting in her voice, she said... 
 
G - What...?? sirf 1 'joke'...? Yeh sab aapke liye ek joke tha...? Par,aapne 1 baar bhi socha...ki,woh kya soch rahi hongi...?
 
S - (Innocently) Kya...? Kya soch rahi hongi,woh ?? Ab humne aisa bhi kya kar diya...?
 
GUNJAN gave him a disgusted look as she started walking away... but, SAMRAT was not letting her leave so easily... He stopped her again...      
 
S - Wait...wait...Par,apne suits ke bag toh le lo...Main all ready apne suits ke bag carry kar raha hoon naa...Yeh kaafi bhaari hain...mere haathon mein dard ho raha hai... SAMRAT SHERGILL ne kabhi apne bags nahin uthaye...aur tum...tum mujhse kitna kaam karwa rahi ho... (said like a poor guy with puppy face)

She turned angrily...
 
  

  


** These parts R not posted in sequential order (B'coz, V don't want to reveal story,so easily.😳) Which TEASER preludes which... to know, Wait n Watch.😳 Hope V have managed to kindle curiosity among our readers.


** V would like to remind our readers here that as mentioned in the 'Character Sketch' N 'Story Concept', all 3 characters R in the Gray shade.None is the conventional 'HERO '  and none the obvious 'Negative Character'.So, what each will do to out do the other to win the girl of their dreams is unpredictable. Please ! Do not read this story with a preset mind..😳


Edited by SIZZZLER - 11 years ago
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Congo Shongo on new thread guyzz! The teaser was very interesting! Can't wait for the update now! Continue soon! :D
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Thank You Nila for your wishes. 😳 Will be updating soon, after APHG.