thanks a lot sweetheart...🤗Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
Thanks dear for such a lovely update... I love u for this.
thanks a lot sweetheart...🤗Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
Thanks dear for such a lovely update... I love u for this.
thanks dear 😊awsome part
thanks a lot sweetie...loved your comments as usual... lov u 🤗Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
bhot bhot acha tha di, chotta cmnt h, but dil se likha h..
bar bar padhoge tho bada lagega..mom , plz sachi main chandini sachh kah rhi h...plz uski baat ko mano..chandini is pathetically scared..sp sad..evn meenakshi noe abt dat granpa dairy..hmm, one more secret..plz reveal soomn.dis is t bestst way veer cud tell his stry to her..''u saved me frm death!!''- vry touchy line ..i lovd veer here...vry sweet ud di, thnx fr it..sry fr shrt cmnt.. ..but i lovd u dheer saara
thank you so much sweetie... oh no i will make sure to give longer update next time... love you for your imagination...😉Originally posted by: swati_prithvi
hmmm...
thanks for giving d ud...
as I was waiting eagerly..
now what happened?
what does Veer wants to tell to Chandni?
now Chandni shud tell him abt that ghost..
finally we saw more luv frm Chandn's side...
it's really luvly...wen Chandni gives importance to Veer & shows her luv for him..
aur janah tumne ye Ud end kiya...ye to bahut galat baat hai yaar..
ab hum nxt ud tak kaise wait karenge?
it's so interesting..
plz yaar intzar mat karwana jyada..
tumhare ud k dose k bina to achchhe se neend hi nhi aati..
jabtak nxt ud na mil jaye..
yahi sochti rahti hu ki aage ye hoga..phir lagta hai..nhi waisa hoga..
to plz giv d nxt ud soon..😊
thank you darling...you know why i call you darling cause i love your sweet comments and i feel so good...you are a sweetheart... thanks a lot 🤗 luv u too...😊awww yeh bhootni fir a gyi wo bhi chandni bankar...kya superb update tha di😃
u know what i like the most...veer n chand conversation...😊so romantic na...i think first time they talk to each other without any fight😳my fav scenedono ko apne secrets share karne the wowacchi baat h relationship start karne se pehle sach bta dena chahiye👏accha kiya veer love u👏last scene is so romantic😳...chand uski baat par beleive jarur karegi kunki uske saath bhi aisa hi kuch ho rha h😲aajkali loved it when she hugged him n told him that he was not alone...they look cute with each other...hope everything is fine now...bas us bhootni ko mein dekh lungi😡love u dii for a wonderful updateupdate soonlove umuahhh for awesome scenes😳
thank you so much sweetie... i am so glad you liked Shikar so much...let see how the story takes its turn...anyhow your comments made me smile...lov u too baby...🤗Originally posted by: Arpimugfan
Hi Dhanvi di i am Arpita new member hu but RTMC ki purani fan hu apke tum mere ho ff aur o bhoot wali ss too good ha di love them and Shikaar to haye kya kahu di meri har ek tarif apke shikaar k saamne choti paregi anyway di mujhe lagta ha ki jab veer ko pata chalega chand ki drunkerd dad ki gandi harkat tabse o drink karna chor dega mera tukka lagta ha ya apne kuch aur soch k rakha ha janne k liye apke update ka intezaar rehega update soon di bye love u
thanks dear 😊Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909
its awesome
loved it
no problem sweetie...you don have to be sorry...anyways i loved your comments...thank you so much...luv u too 🤗Originally posted by: sonalimurat
sorry di itna late latoof banne k liye
sorry chorrynow about updateupdate was very nicelove it as I always likes your all updateuwritten it very nicely ...perfectlyohh chandini sawghost looking like herself in white dress but noone belived her aweewhat difficu;ty of that ghost .what she want 😡Here Veer's imrovement ...that's awesomehe wanted to tell all to chandinin last part I loved it at the mostupdate soonn Dhanvi di I saying sorry for my would be late next comments also ...vo kya hai na I can't able to comment on time but I will do whenever it possibleplease forgive me 4 thatI really wish that I can able to read atleast coz it being my addiction to read Ur n other writters stories on Rt MClove u
thanks a lot dear...was waiting for your comments... will try and update soon...😊Originally posted by: sweetshera
Part 44 -
Lovely updateomg! Veer actually confessed his love for her n that 2 infront of every1Pyar kiya toh darna kya! Lage raho!oops mysterious woman again.update soon
thanks a lot my dear...will continue soon with a long update...😊superb update!!
y thth bhootani was exactly looking like chand?
is she wanted to predict her death!!
meenakshi quickly read n diary of ur father!!
we are waiting!
thank god he decided to tell her abt curse!
loved tht scene!!
but y u stopped there?
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