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Nice update...but how come you are using Abhijeet and Abhi sir and Daya and Daya sir in different places...you are usually consistent.
I usually refer to him both as Abhijeet and Abhi sir. Will try to keep an eye on this, alright. 😊
Also, where you have narrated the flashback, some parts are italicized, some are not...you seemed to have done it in a hurry or were distracted.
Nope, that was intentional because I thought it would be convenient for the reader to have the trailer portion distinct from the present events. I tried using a different colour, but it felt a little odd so just italicized them.
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