wao sound intresting and based on true story great it be fun too read start was gud lets see what happens nxt as u said its a simple story with no villans so it will be a great experience to read it bt 1 question why u always make sajan elder than mayur its really hard to believe their dont look elder than them bt its fine its ur story and ur characters i like the story do say to shaffy to pm me also
Originally posted by: --unknown--
ok actually problem yeh hain ki sajan ko soft aur mayur ko shaitani charecter suit karti hain is kahaani main bhi nupur puri tarah se paagal hain jitni boli dikhti hain usse dus guna chaalak hain wheras gunjan ki shaitaani ki had hain woh todhi bevakuf hain par nupur aisi ladki aaj tak nahin dekhi hogi so wait for story to reveal its gonna be big story for proper ending
Originally posted by: --unknown--
ok actually problem yeh hain ki sajan ko soft aur mayur ko shaitani charecter suit karti hain is kahaani main bhi nupur puri tarah se paagal hain jitni boli dikhti hain usse dus guna chaalak hain wheras gunjan ki shaitaani ki had hain woh todhi bevakuf hain par nupur aisi ladki aaj tak nahin dekhi hogi so wait for story to reveal its gonna be big story for proper ending
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