Abhay-Pia OS .:Exposed & Confessed:. - Page 3

Pavi tum ne kya likha. If only we had U as our writer then we'd have been very satisfied with the show.

Excellent writing Pavi...must say, did not expect it to be so good! You rock dear...and mind you I want more from you...Congos...You impressed me, and that's really not easy 😛 I loved the descriptions, everything...very real indeed!

That's good Pavi. it really is a good piece of writing. 

wow wow wow  amazing OS!!!👏
loved it!!
how i wish something like this could have happened in the show too😍
it was just superb!!!!

pavi that great update
remembering all scene of abhiya wow
great work yar

lovely...loved it hw u changed the situation from show 

It's awesome Pavi👏😍

Awesome OS!
I so much wanted all this 2 happen bt due 2 stupidity of CVs d confession which wud hav happened on 2nd feb itself was dragged 2 2nd april!

Originally posted by: Divya6696

RES.. quick Pavi..!

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YAY..!!!!!! Me First..!!!! I'm sooo happy..!!😛

Pavi..

AWESOME..!!! Brilliant Piece of writing..!!👏👏👏
Loved it to the core..!!😳
You described the POVs of both Abhay and Piya so well..!!

Yea.. It would have been great if we would've got something like this in the show.. rather than the runaway and the "Aatma Shuddhi Shower"..😆🤣

And.. awww... They Confessed..! aww... so sweet..!!😳

Too good yaar Pavi..!! ⭐️

OK.. now one suggestion.. something that I found out after reading the OS..

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You should write more frequently..!! You write so well..!!😃

P.S.: I loved the Khaali Post too..!!!😆😆 Bina kuch likhe kitna kuch likh gayi tu uss post mai..!!🤣

For You.. I made it just for fun.. Its not as good as your OS at all.. but still...

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

res

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awesome os pavi superb👏