OS: Breaking the Ice - Page 2

Originally posted by: polly2312

Beautiful!!! I could feel their pain. Loved it. You write beautifully.

this was awesome!!! I loved the line about 'duniya mein meri ek hi khushi hai'!!

Ah!Beautiful OS.Emotions were so well protrayd ..I am so touched.

Originally posted by: warriorprincess

this was awesome!!! I loved the line about 'duniya mein meri ek hi khushi hai'!!

 

this absolutely begs for another part... pleease PLEASE PLEASE do consider it?

 

naina

Originally posted by: -Gautami

Ah!Beautiful OS.Emotions were so well protrayd ..I am so touched.

Beautiful...soo touching
You should continu dis nd turn it in2 an ss or ff
Thanx foh da pm

Awwwhhhnn this was beautiful... 😳 Edited by ArhiAbhiya - 11 years ago

awww sooo emotional !!!

asmuuu u r back !!!! 🤗

hi there...u write awesome thing...so i dnt want to stop because then you will be stopping yurself frm doing awesome stuff like us..
keep it up =D

OH... I felt a tear come to my eye reading that! Cute and sad!