AbhIya FF - Yellow Peonies - Chapter V Page 13 - Page 8

Wow this is amazing. I just couldn't stop reading. U are a breath of fresh air Raphaellla. I have come across this name before in Novels i used to read. But its a beautiful name "God heals" Your parents chose wisely. I believe names should have meanings to suit the person. Edited by matwamango - 11 years ago

awsome update  raffaella😉 im just in love with ur story😍😆
the way u write is just marvellous👏⭐️
abhay killing danesh after piya said to him was fab😳
just loved the lake scene😍
will something happen to piya in the forest😉
continu soon...

amazing update yar
loved ittt
every part of fight to angry abhay
awsome yar
cont soon

Freakingly awsum update rapz!!
I luvd the way pia's words became a powerhouse 4 abhay..the fight was quite lively..i cud feel it playing b4 my eyes..pia z so selfless n abhay a way stubborn..PanDa r soulmates..oh!i wonder if abhay vl heal her or not..but pia's pleadings vl surely make him do that.isnt it?update soon..

Hey since I don't remember the names easily, so in-short I'll call you Raph, as that's the easy way to remember your name. 😆

No doubt you are an amazing writer. 👏 Sorry yaar to comment so late, I was bit busy.

Anyways coming to the chapter. I must say your writing is very creative and the fight scene was brilliantly taken over. I could visualize that scene very well. And yeah loved Pia being selfless and want Abhay's to save Panchi. I hope he saves her. Even though I don't like Panchi's character, but for Pia, surely Abhay will do it. 😉

plzz continu soon 😃 eagerly waiting 😳

Unfortunately this is not an update but an important note.

oh its ok...we understand because of cousins they want masti..ok we will wait

it's ok.update wen u can

We understand Raffaella.It s totally OK with us.Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 11 years ago