AbhIya FF - Yellow Peonies - Chapter V Page 13 - Page 4

what the ... arnab and his family is so rude and cruel yikes  i hate them everyone blame piya for no mistake of her own thats not fair and whoaa what will abhay do to maithili will he kill her or what ? btw very nice update one suggestion try to write a lil bit big letter hope u won't mind :) 

amazing update!!!!!!!!
so abhay finally got rid of yellow peony...n it worked too abhiya felt attracted towards each other...wow
pia thinks chand as hitler😆
hate arnab n misha for treating pia badly...crazy insane family
whats with maithili??? whay she is after abhay?? good that abhay didn't fell for her ...is he really going to kill her???

U r an amazing writer 👏 Brilliantly written n maturely executed is all I can say right now 👏 I am so glad Pia got rid of that peony n ur story is very intriguing 😊 Thanks a ton for the PM 🤗 Do update soon.

Edited by mandy1024 - 11 years ago

it was so amazing...m speechless...finally pia to started to feel something...

awsome ff😉 just loved the concept..its too interesting😛
so atlast the peonies are destroyed & abhiya felt attracted😳
i just loved the way u wrote⭐️& im dam eager to know how wuld u shape up this story😊
continu soon & do  pm me the next time😳


Edited by shria - 11 years ago

AMAZING UPDATE!!
Finally abhay got rid of that hideous(well hideous for him) flower nd that instant change of emotions was just amazing!
What can we expect from T?
She is just an original b***h.
Piya has always been a self sacrificing goat 4 everyone bt those morons don't deserve it!
OMG what are u planning for Maithili?
Excellently written!!
Thanks 4 d PM n continue soon!Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 11 years ago

This is superbly brilliant you are an awesome writer. I am loving the concept its fantabulous do continue soon

Freaking awesome yaar.C ppl love reading ur FF coz u r fab writer.Many writers come & write their piece of work but ppl recognize post,FF & SS of only brilliant writer & u r surely one of thm.I so loved ur concept.Its brilliant & unique & I jst wnt 2 read more & more.So cont.. this in double speed:P.Oh Walk 2 remember one of my fav.Thnk God finally tht f*****g Flower is out of Abhiya's way.I hate Yellow peonies:P.Oh Abhay will surely fry Metz.I loved the way Abhay wid his attitude told Pia he is the master in their relationship & Pia only uttered B*****d in hope he would listen:P.Thnx 4 PM.😛

i must say again awesm chapy...loved it...yeyy.uff my abhiya...t ko mat lao na abhiya k bich...feeling bad fr pia..bechari bt pia bhi attitude wali dikhao na...ye mish bhi na...metz omg!ab kya hoga?waiting fr nxt chapy n more abiya part..

Awsome.Abhay got rid of the peony.And instantly abhiya startd feeling 4 each other.Supercool.I'm so hating the dobrial family.Arnab is a spine less worm,he doesnt deserve 2 be pia's father.Misha is acting like a b***h.I hope we get some abhiya moments in next chappy.U r doing a fabulous job,keep it up.Thanx 4 the pm