New FF: A New Beginning - Chapter 1 Pg 13 Updated - Page 2

this is awesome...
u left me misty eyed yet again...
i knew u had da talent in emotional stuff too...
but this one my love exceeds my expectations...

love u gal...🤗

res Edited by -Grace- - 11 years ago

Fari,it sounds so intersting...u must continue it...but pls...ibadat n then ur health come first...we can wait 4 d updates patiently😊...BTW...Where is Ashum...i m missing her SCREAMS OF JOY...YE YE  ...I M 1ST 2 COMMENT😃

Oh wow, I loved the start! Interesting new story :) Cant' wait for you to continue!

awesome,interesting...
continue soon...

Wid dis start...i cant wait for long...it has raised a hell lot of ques...where is ARNAV here...is khushi alone...was payal married to aakash???...

Oh god!! Curiosity grl...
Update soon

Btw loved it...

amazing start!!!! refrehing, but saddening at the same time... i'm waiting for more of this!! :)

awesome... plz continue soon.. Happy Ramadan :D

Reserved😳

Will edit on Tuesday!

 

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Fari, a new FF!!!😳 I enjoyed reading the prologue, heart-touching!!! So, Khushi is alone with Payal's child! So sad that Payal and Akash died!

 

Can't wait to see how things slowly evolve and how your characters are shaped!!

 

Waiting for the first chapter😳

Edited by tash10 - 11 years ago

sounds interesting
was Payal married to Akash?
and is Arnav Akash's brother??
I'm waiting..!!!