Tainted (removed) - Page 55

Hey,

I loved the chapter! Shyam and Lavanya's 'banter' was hilarious- I love their relationship in spite of what they each have to do in this world. The references to twitching and constipated faces had me in stitches.

Lavanya's story was painful to read...especially the part at the end of her assault where she is beaten up and span on. You did a brilliant job of writing it.

Shyam helping her out shows the beginnings of this wonderful relationship and Arnav as a kid was also quite funny.

The plot is thickening, and I loved how you show just how scary and dangerous Shyam can be when he asks Khushi who the hell she is as a sharp and sudden contrast to the lightheartedness with Lavanya.

I love how you can slip in your wonderful sense of humour into even this FF which is dark and dangerous to say the least.

Thanks for the PM and the double update with Cafe too:)

Anaya xxx

what a brilliant update...

The way they greeted each other was pretty cool :D

Wow!
They are so comfortable...only if he didn't belong to a crime group and she didn't run a house of women entertainers things might would have been different!!!
I didn't understand their reaction to khushi's confession...
I need to read the next update soon!!!

just read all the parts!! wow.. Quire a story you have here..

I just love Shyam-Lavanya's relationship. I had no idea that Lavanya was such an old lady 😕 And He calls her "Volcanoji" because she said her name was "Lava" 😆 That was cute! Very cute relationship they share!

i love the lavanya shyam bonding!! poor lavanya has gone through alot to become a sadist!!
hahaha shyams line 'who are you' was amazing!!!
loved the update!!!!

Love a side story, the nice camaraderie between the two! I wouldn't have thought that.

Hey ... Still in the process of reading the earlier chapters ... Thanks for the PM ... 

Who is Khushi? Really? That girl/woman amazes me and she is sure wired different, very different.