Tainted (removed) - Page 53

Edited by arisai - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

oh wow 

Why did u stop there???????? "pouting"

Originally posted by: khusiarnav

Why did u stop there???????? "pouting"

 well great update dear... its getting more interesting and fascinating  with each update... every character is more clear...

want more... u shud update soon!!😉

Originally posted by: arisai

IT'S BEEN SO LONG SINCE I'VE SEEN YOU AROUND ON IF, I COULD METAPHORICALLY WEEP.

Aah I'm not back but saw you updated and thought I just have to write something.

Great update. Like the Shyam/Lava relationship. Shyam seems like a really 'cool' person.

"Because you get angry a lot and whenever you're angry, your face does the Zoolander and then it twitches. It's too funny to handle."
Even in a intence ff such as this u don't fail make me lough .
Lavanya n shyams relationship is brilliantly potrayed
Love the chapter

I'm stalking you lol. Loved the update. Lavanya and Shyam are best fren, that's amazing. :)
"Shyamujaam" , "Volcanoji" , that's some funny nick names lol 😆

Wow, this chapter was pretty deep! 

Awesome story...keep on writting