~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF - Page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update

waiting for next update

Pls PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx a lot for pm, so, again very fast and furious update... great job..
loved this update.. ramu kaka and swaron convo was sweet and teasing.. but the magical kiss was not possible this time.. so hope best for next time..
the interior scene of room was awsum and swaron's bursting out their feelings to each other was intense and awsum...
picturization was commendable.. as always..
so, i am happy that i will be known about that person in next update..
thanx
prateek
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Posted: 11 years ago
Here is my comment πŸ˜‰. Well Kaka continues to amaze us with his dialogue. I liked how this time Sharon was also along with Swayam to face the teasing of Kaka. Now I am seriously missing Swayam sis and his parents :( But any way it was amusing. I liked how you described Sharon in Swayam's clothes. She must be looking like a cartoon no doubt but in the mean time I am certain she would be looking awesome too. This reminds me it would had been awesome to see Sneha in such weird wardrobe on the show. But ab kuch nahi ho sakta. Now coming to the last part. Just marvellously penned. Sharon's fear, pain and some sort of insecurites everything marvellously written. In the mean time beautifully depicted the mental state of Swayam on seeing Sharon like that. Awesomely done.

P.S - I liked how you have not used their real name in their convo ever since they had came to know about the truth about other. Well done.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update like always...
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the pm and awesome update :D cant wait to now about Sharon's past

Nikki <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sooo sorry for the late comment...
The realisation and flour fight  was just magicalπŸ˜†
The pure love and concern really touched my heart...πŸ˜ƒ