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Posted: 11 years ago
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VERY NICE! Please continue..! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ kamlapushpa thanks alot dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ nyzahida96 thanks alot..m updating the next part in few mins
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So here's the next part

                                       Part 2

Annie: (frightenedly stood up) ye..y..yes.m..ma..ma'am..

Princi: is everything ok?? (same attitude which she always gives to Suvreen)

Annie: (in one breathe staring at princi) yea ma'am everything is perfect..actually I remembered something..that's y i..but m sorry ma'am..

All class looked at Annie in shock..

Princi: alright…sit!!

Annie: (sat and after sometime she slowly turned) bukhar???

UV: tujhe samjha nai kya? Itni der se utha rahi hai..(tensely)

Rathi: abh?

UV:Annie sun..(he told her to talk to princi)

Annie: kya?? Nai yaar mujhse ya nai hoga..

UV: oyye, kse dost ho tum log?? Ye topper (he pointed towards her) tum logon ke liya kya nai karti hai haan?? College mein admission dilaya..ragging se tum logon ko bachaya..hegde ko bachaya..gogoi se ladi..sirf naro k liye..aur aage jake bhi woh tum logon k liya bina apne baare mein soche tum log ka saath degi..tum logon ke liye ladegi..tumhare saath kade rahe gi..bina apni parwa kiye..aur tum log…sada Princi se ye kehene se dar rahe ho ke Suvreen theek nai hai? (damn angrily)

Rathi n Mannu were hell shocked..did their bhai just supported Suvreen?? They couldn't believe it..

Annie n Naro looked ashamed..

Annie: m sorry UV you are right..

UV: theek hai..jaa baat kar..

Annie: hmmm! (and confidently got up, all classstarted to stare her n she looked back at UV loosing hope..but to her surprise UV supported her..

Princi: ms. Amarpreet!! What happened now?

Annie: umm.woh..ek min..(she went near princi) actually ma'am  Suvreen ko tez bukhar hai..woh uth hi nai rahi hai..hum sab try kar rahe the..par abh hume bahot dar lag raha hai..(she said in very low tone so that only princi could listen it)

Princi: what??? (loudly and went near Suvreen she checked her) isse toh sach mein tez bukhar hai…ms. Guggal..(she tried to wake Suvreen) tum logon mein se ek kaam karo, isse dr. shekhawat ke pass le jao..

All looked at each other, UV stood up. lifted Suvreen and went out of the class

Nannie n Mathi too tried to leave but princi stopped them..

All sat there in tension..

Princi: ms. Amarpreet please inform ms. Guggal's parents after the lec gets over..

Annie: yes ma'am..

Naro: Annie, Suvreen theek toh hogi na?

Annie: pata nai! Bas yeh lec khatam ho jaye..(worriedly)

Rathi:yaar Mannu, bhai ko kya ho gaya hai?

Mannu: pata nai..

Here,

UV made Suvreen lay on the bed at the college's clinic

Doc: kya hua hai ms. Guggal ko?

UV:bukhar hai..

Doc: let me check.

UV: ji! (and went and sat on the near by chair)

Aft checking Suvi,

doc: mr. yuvraj!

Yuvi: doc. Sab theek hai na?

Doc: suvreen ko 103 bukhar hai

UV: kya??

Doc: yes! Lekin ase mausum mein ye jayas hai..barish aa rahi hai, ja rahi hai..aur waise bhi Suvreen ko Delhi k climate ki aadat bhi toh nai hai..is liye shayad bukhar hua rahega..tension math lo isse 1-2 ghante mein hosh aa jaega..!

UV: kya mein yahi rukh sakta hu?

Doc: sure! (and left)

UV: oyye topper, tune toh dara hi diya tha ek pal k liye….pagal!! (and shook his head)

Nannie n Mathi along with hegde reached at the colg's clinic

Annie: suvreen ksi hai?

UV: 103 bukhar hai, toh bhi lec mein bethi thi..ajib ladki hai…kher doc ne kaha hai 1-2 ghante mein hosh aa jaega…so tension math lo!

Naro: thankyou Yuvraj, tumne suvreen ki kitni help ki..lekin ab hum aa gaye hai na..toh tum jake aaram kar lo..aur waise bhi suvreen k mamma pappa aa rahe hai…toh its better tum sab abhi k liye yahan se jao..baad mein mil lena suvreen se..

Rathi: (shook his head) chale bhai?

UV: (didn't wanted to leave suvreen, he wanted to sit beside her, talk to her, fight with her, scold her, make her smile…but Y??? he didn't understood and unwantedly said yes) chal

(and UV, mathi and hegde left)

annie: naro, chal suvreen k pass beth te hai..!

naro: hmm

Here,

UV made an excuse abt forgetting his mobile and went to see suvreen again..

UV: annie!

Annie: UV, kuch kaam tha?

UV: topper k parents aane tak uska khyal rakhna..

Annie: yeh bhi koi kehne wali baat hai??

UV: (hesitently) jab topper ko hosh aa jayega, toh inform kariyo..!!

Annie: sure!

UV: mein chalta hu..!

Annie: ok! (and went and sat near suvreen)

UV: (left from there) oyye cheeteh, tujhe kya ho gaya hai? Tujhe topper ki itni chinta q ho rahi hai?

Aft few mins

Suvreen's parents reached her college and her mother being over emotional ran towards suvreen and hugged her..

Mumma: hayye mera bacha!

Pappa: oh ho! Kya aap bhi..aate aate rona shuru kar diya? Annie bete,

Annie: ji uncle??

Pappa: suvreen ab ksi hai?

Annie: told them everything

Pappa was worried but didn't showed it and lovingly carcassed suvreen's head) suvreen, dekho beta aapke pappa aur mumma aaye hai…aap se milne..chalo beta ab uth jao..!!

Suvreen: (blinked her eyes)

All were shocked n her mother smiled happily

Annie: oyye naro! Ye suvreen dekh na..hum log ne usse uthane ki kitni koshish ki lekin who nai uthi aur uske dad ne ek bar kaha aur isse hosh aa rahaa hai..nautanki!!

Naro: (agreeing) I swear!!

Here

UV (was tense now..it had been more than 2 hrs..but annie never called him…) rathi time kya hua hai?? (he asked for the 100th time in the past 2 hours)

Rathi: (was full confused..) 6:30 bhai..

UV: kya? 6:30?? Suvreen ko toh 5:00 baje tak hosh aa jana chahiye tha..he said to himself..mujhe hi annie ko call karna chahiye..

I'll end this part here..will update tomorrow..n plzz 4give me for spelling mistakes I made..n I hope u liked this part too??

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
This is really good...:) Continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
nice one 👍🏼
continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
wow !! wow !! wowww!!!
it was awesome to read ...waiting for the nxt update ...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Nice one yaar!!!
Do cont!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
awesomly written...just loved ...
plzz pm me when u r dun wid the next part

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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
hehe..yuvi concernd abt suvi was superb...tanx 4 d pm...continue soon