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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
awesome...i just read  all the 4 parts...and wanna read more...plz update...as soon as possible..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ shimolina , shiplatv , sahashrabadi22 , zenia , muneera_badar n nancyB  thanks alot guys..m updating the next part today.. i hope u guys njoy it..FC
 
 
 
                                                                                         

                                      part 5

Suvreen: (cuts him) ek min, tumhe mere ghar ka pata kse mila???

Yuvraj: woh darasal meine Annie se pucha

Suvreen: kya?? (shocked) Annie ne tumhe mera address diya??

Yuvraj: Haan, q?? (and aft few sec he realised wat he had done) (oh teri!!!!!!!!! Cheeteh ye tune kya kar diya?? Pagal, ghada, bevakuf!! Tune khud ne hi annie ko mana kiya tha topper ko batane se aur khud ne hi bol diya?? N was hell shocked n somewhere even afraid)

Suvreen: annie n tumhe mera address?? (annie asa kse kar sakti hai?? Kahi woh yuvraj aur mujhe phirse?? Nai usne mujhe promise kiya tha..usse pata hai mere mumma pappa ko agar pata chala k raat ko mere kamre mein ek ladka aaya tha toh..nai nai suvreen jarur is gadhe yuvraj ki hi galti hogi..annie asa nai kar sakti..ya phir??)

 

N she looked confused

 

Yuvraj: oyye, tere dimaag mein kya chal raha hai ye mein bahot ache je janta hu..lekin asa kuch nai hai…!!

 

Suvreen: (matlab annie ne hi isse mera address diya hai?? Lekin q?? woh toh meri best friend hai na, toh phir usne asa q kiya?? ya phir koi aur baat hai..ye yuvraj mujhe confuse karne ki koshish kar raha hai..)

 

Yuvraj: kya ho gaya??

 

Suvreen: tumhe kse pata mere dimaag mein kya chal raha hai?? ( curiously)

 

Yuvraj: q ki tere feelings tere chere pe saaf dikhayi deti hai..

 

Suvreen: acha??

 

Yuvraj: hmm..aur sun…annie ki koi galti nai hai..woh darasal..(agar topper ko meine bataya k mujhe usse milna tha, is liye meine annie se iska address liya toh acha nai lagega…aur usse galat fehemi ho gayi toh? Cheeteh kuch soch,soch,soch,soch,soch,soch kya karu?)

 

Suvreen: kaha kho gaye?

 

Yuvraj: umm..ab..woh..darasal meine umm..nai, (stared at suvreen) woh doctor ne..haan, haan woh apne shekhawat sir ne mujhe tere family ko inform karne kaha tha..toh isliye meine annie ko kaha inform karne k liye..jab woh tere pappa ko call kar rahi thi..toh hum sab saath mein the..aur jab naro address column bhar rahi thi toh usne annie se pucha aur annie ne gad badai mein jor se tere address bola…joh meine sun liya.. (he then blinked his eyes n wiped his sweat n said) haan..(and smiled confusly)

 

Suvreen: kya??? (confusly) lekin ase kse ho sakta hai??

 

Yuvraj: (ab kya ho gaya??) kya??

 

Suvreen: peheli baat colg mein address, naro ko address bharne ki kya jarurat thi?? Aur dusri baat naro mera address janti hai..infact annie humesha bhul jati hai..tum jhoot bol rahe ho na??

 

Yuvraj: nai mein q jhoot bolunga?? Woh darasal..(ab kya batau??) colg mein naya rule start hua hai..ki students ka address shekhawat sir ko dena hai..aur naro dari thi na..toh is liye shayad tera address bhul gayi hogi..

 

Suvreen: matlab annie ne tumhe jaan muchkar mera address nai diya??

 

Yuvraj: (na bol de, na bol de)

 

Suvreen: yuvraj (with questioning face)

Yuvraj: na..usne mujhe tera address unknowingly de diya..

Suvreen: (suvreen tu ghadi hai, stupid hai tu, idiot!! Tune apne hi best friend pe shak kiya?? Kse??)

Yuvraj: tu galat nai hai..toh khud ko gali q de rahi hai??

Suvreen: (SHOCKed) tumhe kse pata?

Yuvraj: woh sab chod…bas ek baat yaad rakhna..Annie teri best friend hai, thi aur humesha rahegi..samjhi??

Suvreen: (had tears in her eyes) hmm..

Yuvraj: oyye tu ro q rahi hai?? (worriedly) ro math!! (and wiped her tears [ofcourse not intentionlly])

Suvreen: ( was still crying) meine..(hiccups)…uspar..(hiccups)..kse??(hiccups)..

Yuvraj: (sat besides her) shh! Topper meri taraf dekh!!

Suvreen: (looked at him) hmm..

Yuvraj: (ye tune kya kiya yuvraj?? Tujhe topper se milne hi nai aana chahiye tha..ab sach bol de cheeteh..phir topper ka faisla joh ho..tu mane ga..lekin 2 doston ko alag nai karega!!)

Suvreen: yuvraj??

Yuvraj: topper woh darasal..annie ko meine hi tera address pucha tha..usne toh mana bhi kiya tha..lekin..mujhe tujhe sirf ek bar dekhna tha..isliye..mein

Suvreen: (shocked)  kya?? Tumhari himmat kse hui yuvraj?? Tumne annie aur mere bich galat fehemi paida karne ki koshish ki..

Yuvraj: nai topper..

Suvreen: abhi issi waqt yahan se chale jao..

Yuvraj: topper meri baat toh sun..

Suvreen: aur kabhi bhi mujhe apna chehera math dikhana..chale jao..

Yuvraj: topper please meri baat sun le..

Suvreen: (dragged him out of her room n opened the main door) just go away..

Yuvraj: topper, me

Suvreen: (with tears) I hate u yuvraj..(and closed the door on uv's face..)

 Yuvraj: topper!!

PS: plzz guys dont be angry on me aft reading this part..i know most of u will be in shock...but just wait till the next part is updated..n guys tomorrow or day aft tomorrow whenever i update the next part is the last part..then my ss will get over..so have patience..tc

Edited by Pradnya55patilP - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
d ss was a bit shocking
But I knoe ther is sumtin gr8 2 cum up 😉
Dekte hai ki ab humara cheetah apni princes ko kaise manata hai 😳 🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
guys do comment yaar acha toh acha bura toh bura..i'll not mind..if u r angry shocked happy sad anything then plz tell me..ur comments boost me..n tomorrow this ss will get over..i hope u guys like the end..gn guys tc and plz do comment..tc
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Itne jaldi kyu khatam kar rahe ho 😔
I liked all ur ss n wanna read more n more of this
So do continue aft prt 6 😊
Waitin 4 d next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
nice part. 👏...
plz continue... dont stop  😭plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Not fully satisfied. The earlier parts were so interesting and this was just ok ok type...when i saw, the 5th part was updated, i feel like...oh !! wht's gonna happen now, i thought it would be even interesting than the last 4 parts, but it just didn't  reache my heart. Plz as the next part is gonna be the last one, so make that interesting plz, coz the happiness we readers get after reading is indescribable. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
dont worry guys last part is very diff i mean some of u will find it as an end and some may not..so just have patience..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
nice one yaar...
waiting 4 the last part...i hope everything will  be fine
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Pradnya plz dont do dis... Ur ff is realy nyc dear... Its little bit shocking but its really nyccc... Uv ka confess krna k use suvi s milna tha...