FF: A Silent Prayer pt 10(last) pg 15 updt 5/10/12 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

great one aditi...
infact this theory of ram getting to know the truth and how much priya suffered was awesome...
waiting for the next super final part

Thanks for reading.. gald that you liked it!😊
Even I am super excited about the final update.. hope I can pull that through.. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow ram has known the truth finally misunderstanding cleared 😃

Ram.. ek waqt tha..jab hum dono mein sirf samjhote ka rishta tha'.phir bhi Ashwin ke mamle mein aapne mujhpe trust kiya. Aur aaj ek waqt hai, jab hum dono ek doosre se bohot pyar karte hai.. lekin phir bhi aapko mujhpe trust nahi hai!(luved this dialogue)👏👏👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing way of disclosing d truth infront of ram...wht a bad painful past priya has.wht she went through to keep pihu alive...priyas last line bfr leaving hospital was very much true...thnx updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aditi di a big hug...!!! Wonderful Update! Chalo 1 MU to dur hui... Rajat calling Priya di and Ram Jiju🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Siacutie

wow ram has known the truth finally misunderstanding cleared 😃


Ram.. ek waqt tha..jab hum dono mein sirf samjhote ka rishta tha'.phir bhi Ashwin ke mamle mein aapne mujhpe trust kiya. Aur aaj ek waqt hai, jab hum dono ek doosre se bohot pyar karte hai.. lekin phir bhi aapko mujhpe trust nahi hai!(luved this dialogue)👏👏👏



Thanks for reading.. glad that u liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

mindblowing way of disclosing d truth infront of ram...wht a bad painful past priya has.wht she went through to keep pihu alive...priyas last line bfr leaving hospital was very much true...thnx updt soon


 
Thanks for your comments😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: love4raya

Aditi di a big hug...!!! Wonderful Update! Chalo 1 MU to dur hui... Rajat calling Priya di and Ram Jiju🤣


Hey thanks for reading! Rajjo is anyways the universal bhaiyya.. isnt he 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Dear Friends,

As I come to the last update of this FF, I would like to thank all of you for reading this so far, and also for leaving such lovely comments. As is expected, in this last update RaYa unite forever. With my limited capability of visualization and expression, I tried my best to do justice with the update, hope you all will like it. This is a bit lengthier than the earlier ones, because I just could not stop once I started writing! Thanks again to all of you for reading. Wish all of you a RaYacious life ahead..

Cheers,

Aditi.

 

RaYa unite forever…

Hello, This is Mrs Priya Kapoor. Just wanted to know if Mr Ram Kapoor is back.

Receptionist: No madam, this is the tenth time you are calling in last 2 hours. Please try and understand, as I told you the moment he is back I will inform him to call you.

Priya: Ok…. I am sorry!

Priya cut the call and sat on the couch thinking: Yeh Mr Kapoor bhi na.. pata nahi kyun achanak ….

The doorbell rang, and Priya ran towards the door in anticipation: Zaroor Mr Kapoor ki koi khabar aayi hogi..

She looked through the peephole to find none other than Ram standing on the other side of the door. She opened the door and even before Ram could utter a word she clasped Ram's shirt near his chest and released all her tension on him.

Priya: Ram.. kaha chale gaye the aap! Aap ko pata bhi hai idhar meri kya halat hui thi? Hospital se nikal ke hotel jaane ke wajay Abu Dhabi gaye the aap? Ek din aapka business tour cancel nahi kar sakte ? Mr Khan ko bhi nahi bataya kaha ja rahe hai? Abhi kal hi aapki tabiyat itni kharab thi..abhi kuch ho jata toh main…

Priya broke down as Ram placed his hands softly on her shoulders.

Ram: Priya .. relax ! Kuch nahi hua hai mujhe. Ab andar toh aane do.

Priya controlled herself immediately, removed her hands from Ram's shirt and allowed him to come in.

Ram: Main business tour ke liye nahi gaya tha Priya..I had gone there to meet Dr Dsouza.

Priya (looking at Ram apprehensively): Aap Dr Dsouza ko kaise jaante hai?

Ram : Main sab kuch janta hoon Priya. Woh har ek dard jo tumne jhele Pihu ko is duniya mein lane ke liye….mujhe sab kuch pata chal gaya hai Priya. Kyun tumne akele saha yeh sab? Kyun mujhe ek bar bhi nahi bataya Priya?

Priya (with tears swelling in her eyes): Maine koshish ki thi aapko batane ki.. lekin aap ko contact nahi kar payi. Aapke saare numbers try kar liye.. phir bhi koi jawab nahi mila. Aur jab mujhe pata chala ke meri pregnancy mein complications hai, maine jan bujhkar kisi se contact nahi ki. Sab toh yehi kehte ke is bachche ko jaane do.. Par main kaise jaane deti?

Ram (coming closer and holding Priya by her shoulders): Lekin Priya.. Tum ne itni badi risk li.. apni zindagi ka?

Priya: Toh main aur kya karti Ram.. mere paas aur koi raasta nahi tha. Main kanoon ki nazaron mein mujrim thi.. agar India wapas aati to mujhe 14 saal jail mein rehna padhta tha. Agar Pihu ko kho deti thi toh main aur kabhi bhi ma nahi ban pati thi…

Ram: Oh Priya.. tumne kaise soch liya ke main tumhe 14 saal jail mein rehne doonga? Aur phir Pihu ke janam ke baad bhi  toh tum mujhse contact kar sakti thi na?

Priya: Maine woh bhi kiya tha Ram.. lekin mujhe tab Rohan ke baare mein pata chala. Main hamesha chahti thi ki aap zindagi mein aage badhe. Jab mujhe pata chala ke aap sach much aage badh gaye hai toh main aap aur aapke wife ke beech main…

Ram: Ek minute Priya… Kis wife ki baat kar rahi ho tum? Rohan mera beta zaroor hai.. par I have adopted him…

Priya (looking into Ram's eyes in a state of utter shock): Adopted? Phir aapne dubara shaadi nahi ki?

Ram (nodding his head) : Nahi Priya .. kabhi nahi.

Priya unleashed herself on Ram's chest, embracing him tightly with both her arms and crying uncontrollably: Maine socha aapne dubara shaadi kar li hai… aur isi liye maine aapne aap ko aur Pihu ko aapse door rakkha.

Ram held Priya in his arms, as she broke down completely and continued to speak out whatever she had kept locked in her heart for last 5 years. Priya went on explaining how she had survived the landslide, why she wished Ram should move on with his life, how she came to Dubai, how she tried to contact him during her pregnancy, what happened when she tried to reach him after Pihu's birth and finally how she came to know about Rohan and assumed that Ram had married again.

Ram listened to Priya silently till she finished, as tears started rolling down his cheeks as well. He lifted her face gently with his hands and said softly: Tumhare aane se pehle 40 saal tak mujhe koi nahi mili, toh tumne yeh kaise maan liya Priya ke tumhare jaane ke 40 din ke andar mujhe koi mil jayegi?

 Priya : Mujhe pata nahi Ram kyun maine..

Ram: Priya.. tumhari maut ki khabar sun ne ke baad bhi main har pal sirf tumhari yaad mein jalta raha .. Ram's voice broke as he took Priya's hands into his. It was his turn now to pour his heart out to Priya.. how he had searched for her in the accident spot and how all had concluded that Priya was no more;  how he had been after Sid , how he had switched off all his numbers to keep his mission a secret, and finally how Sid got arrested and Priya's name was cleared.

Priya: Aur Rohan? Woh kaun hai phir?

Ram fumbled as he looked at Priya, he knew Priya was already in a state of turmoil, so he decided to hide the news of Ayesha's death from her: Woh to Sid aur uski girlfriend ka beta hai! Uski ma guzar jaane ke baad maine use adopt kiya..

Oh Ram.. bohot badi galti ho gayi mujhse .. bohot badi galti…exclaimed Priya as she dug her face into Ram's chest, with fresh tears rolling down her eyes.

Ram held her close to himself, slowly caressing her hair with his hands as he gently kissed her forehead.

Ram: Priya.. please sambhalo aapne aapko. Is mein tumhari koi galti nahi hai. Jab hum kisi ko pyar karte hai, toh uske baare mein bohot sensitive ho jaate hai. Abhi dekha na, maine bhi toh tumhare baare mein ulta seedha socha.

Priya: Lekin meri ek galat decision ke wajay se..

Ram (cutting Priya's words): Priya.. maine shuru se dekha hai.. hum dono ko milane mein kismat ka bohot bada haat raha hai. Tumhe yaad hai na kaise humari shaadi tai hui, phir tuti, phir wapas tai hui? Kaise humari honeymoon plan hua, phir cancel hua aur phir hum ultimately Australia gaye? Yeh sab kismat ka khel hai Priya.. Is mein tumhari koi galati nahi hai

They stood in each other's arms, with Priya sobbing silently and Ram consoling her. Finally they broke the hug, Ram wiped Priya's tears with his fingers and smiled:

Ram: Main driver ko phone karke jaane ke liye bolta hoon.. aaj raat yehi ruk jata hoon

Priya: Aap raat ko idhar.. lekin Ram aapke kapde…..

Ram: Arre ek hi raat ki toh baat hai, manage kar lunga. Aaj raat main akela hotel mein  nahi so sakta..

Priya smiled : Thik hai. Main bhi Rajat ko phone kar deti hoon.. pareshan hoga bechara..

They finished their respective calls, and sat on the couch in the living room..

Ram: Pihu  so gayi hai kya?

Priya: Haan….Bohot mushkil se sulaya hai. Aap ke baare mein hi pooch rahi thi..

Ram: Hmm.. maine bhi bohot miss kiya use aaj poora din..

Priya: Ram.. main bhi gharwalon ko bohot miss karti hoon. Mummy, Papa, Krishu ma..sab kaise hai?

Ram: Sab thik hai Priya..

Priya: Aur Nutz , Kartik, Rishab aur Ayesha.. woh sab..

Ram (trying to avoid Ayesha's topic): Haan Priya.. Sab thik hai. Hum kal subhe baat karte hain na.

Priya (looking at Ram's face) : Haan.. sorry aap  thak gaye honge na…chaliye phir hum bhi so jaate hai.

Ram: Woh toh hai.. par .. hum abhi so jayenge?

Priya (looking surprisingly at Ram): Haan.. matlab .. aap ko kuch aur kam tha?

Ram (hesitatingly) : Nahi.. actually Priya .. mujhe bohot bhookh lagi hai.

Priya: Bhookh lagi hai? Itni raat ko? Kyun aapne dinner nahi kiya?

Ram: Nahi .. matlab hospital se nikal ke seedha Abu Dhabi gaya.. aur wahan se tumhare paas aaya.. Raaste mein thik se khana nahi kha paya toh..

Priya's eyes moistened as she got up from the couch: Mere wajay se aap thik se khana bhi nahi kha paaye. Jaiye abhi fresh ho ke aaiye main aapke liye jaldi se kuch banati hoon..

Ram (following Priya towards the kitchen): Arre nahi Priya.. itne raat ko kuch bhi banane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Fridge mein kuch bhi rahega toh chalega..

Priya turned back and pushed Ram gently: Maine bola na aap fresh ho ke aaiye? Bedroom mein cupboard ki left side ki upar ki section mein towel hai… abhi jaiye jaldi.

Priya finished arranging for dinner and came to the bedroom to find Ram lying on the bed, looking intently at a sleeping Pihu and playing with her tiny fingers.

Priya (coming from behind and whispering into Ram's ears): Khana taiyar hai.. uthiye..

Ram: Pihu se toh baat hi nahi ho payi.. use jaga doo?

Priya : Arre Ram.. kaisi baatein kar rahe hai. Kitni mushkil se toh soyi hai woh..kal subhe baat kar lena. Please aap chaliye khana khane..

Priya pulled Ram by his arms to the dining table.

Arre.. aloo ke paranthe? Woh bhi dahi aur extra ghee ke sath? Exclaimed Ram in an excited voice as he sat down to savor his favorite dish, and Priya sat down at the adjacent chair, looking at Ram.

Ram: Priya.. itni raat ko tumne yeh sab kaise manage kiya?

Priya: Is mein manage karne ki kya hai? Har roz subhe yehi toh banana padhta hai aapke beti ke liye! Aapne itni aadat bigadh ke rakkha hai na uski..

Ram: Arre.. yeh kya.. maine kya kiya? Main toh scene main bhi nahi tha…

Priya : Aapko maloom nahi Ram.. Aap scene mein nahi rehte hue bhi har taraf sirf aap hi the. Aapki Pihu ki har choti choti aadat se hi pata chalta hai ke woh aapki beti hai. Bas main hi use woh sab kuch nahi de payi jo Ram Kapoor ki beti ko milna chahiye tha…

Ram : Priya .. please aise mat socho. Mujhe pata hai tumne kitne pyar se pala hai humari Pihu ko. Aur ab dekhna hum dono milke use is duniya ki sari khushiyaa denge.

Priya nodded her head and leaned onto Ram's shoulders.

Ram : Achcha.. Yeh apple kyun cut kiya? Main paranthe ke saath apple nahi khaunga.

Priya: Woh aapke liye nahi mere liye hai..

Ram: Tumhare liye? Toh tumne bhi khana nahi khaya?

Priya: Kaise khati? Aapne itna tension diya aaj..

Ram: Ok baba.. chalo ab kha lo.

Priya smiled and picked up a piece of apple from the plate.

 Bas ho gaya.. aur nahi khaunga said Ram after finishing off two paranthas.

Priya: Bas do ? Maine to char banaye the..

Ram: Nahi.. bas itna hi kha sakta hoon… Kitne dino baad tumhare haat ka khana khaya..

Priya smiled as she got up to clean the table.

Priya: Aap  pehle se kafi kam khate hai.. Isi liye shayad aapne thoda weight lose kiya..

Ram: Tumhe kaise pata chala ke maine weight lose kiya hai?

Priya: Mujhe pata hai..

Ram: Arre par kaise? Tum ne mujhe paanch sal baad dekha na.. toh phir..

Priya (looking at Ram teasingly): Abhi maine aapko hug kiya na.. to pata chala. Pehle jab aapko hug karti thi toh mere do haath ek doosre se milte bhi nahi the… par aaj somehow ungliyaan touch toh hui

Ram (getting up from the chair with a naughty look in his eyes): Oh ho.. toh madam mera weight check kar rahi thi. Par maine toh check hi nahi  kiya ke pichle paanch saalon mein mere biwi ne put on kiya hai ke nahi..

Ram quickly ran round the table towards Priya.

Priya: Ram.. yeh kya kar rahe hai aap..

Before she could say anything further Ram had gathered her tightly in his arms, and was looking at her eyes intently. In a mock attempt to stop Ram, Priya uttered softly.. Aapne haat bhi nahi dhoye..

Ram (bringing his lips closer to Priya's ears and whispering): Ab toh sab tumhare kurte pe lag gaya..

Priya was in no position to answer back, as Ram's lips had already started moving down her cheeks until they finally rested onto hers. She closed her eyes as her lips quivered in response to the familiar touch. Both cherished their precious moment of togetherness which the destiny had denied them for last 5 years. Even as their lips parted, they stayed glued in each other's arms as complete silence reigned in the room.

Priya broke the silence after a few minutes: Woh… Pihu akeli so rahi hai.. Side ka pillow hat jata hai na toh ekdum bed ke edge pe a jaati hai woh. Aap please uske paas jaiye na. Main kitchen ka kaam khatam karke aati hoon..

Ram released Priya from his arms and smiled: Haan pehle haat toh dho loon…

Priya (blushing): Jaiyye.. mazak mat kijiye..

Ram: Jata hoon…. Par tum jaldi aana..

Priya finished her chores in the kitchen and came to the bedroom to find Ram and Pihu cozily sleeping inside the duvet, both snoring away to glory.

Baap re.. kharatein lene ka competition hai yeh toh.. She smiled to herself as she pulled out her nightdress and went inside the washroom to freshen up.

 Ram and Pihu had occupied the whole bed, together with Tiger and Happy, and there was hardly any place left. Priya tried to remove Tiger and Happy from Pihus's arms, when suddenly Ram opened his eyes..

Ram (in a sleepy voice): Priya.. kya kar rahi ho.. Soyi nahi ab tak?

Priya : Kaise soyu? Aaap dono ne toh poora bed pe kabza kar liya.. mere liye kuch jagah hi nahi choda hai toh..

Ram (in a teasing tone, pointing out to the vacant place beside him ) : Arre kitna jagah toh hai.. Tum manage kar logi. Maine note kiya hai.. tum ne zara sa bhi put on nahi ki..toh..

Priya (blushing): Hawww kuch bhi! Aur waise bhi mujhe Pihu ke side sona hai...

Ram: Kyun.. nahi nahi mujhe beech mein sona hai. Mujhe ek side tum aur doosri side Pihu chahiye…

 Priya: Uff .. samjha kijiye.. Pihu kabhi kabhi raat ko uth jati hai. Tab agar use darr lage, ya paani peena ho, ya bathroom jana ho toh...

Ram: Arre.. toh kya hua?  Tumhe kya lagta hai mujhe aadat nahi hai? Rohan bhi toh kitni baar uthta hai raat ko..

Priya (leaning on the bed on her elbow beside Ram): Aap Rohan se bohot pyaar karte hai na?

Ram : Haan … Tumhare baad.. apart from him.. there was no reason to live Priya..

Priya (curling up closer to Ram and running her fingers through his hair): Hmmm… Aur usi ke wajay se aaj hum mile…

Ram: Rohan ke wajay se? Kaise?

Priya: Aapki ek interview mein aapne uske bare mein bola tha… uska clip mere phone mein hai. Woh dekh ke main hamesha aapne aap ko tasalli deti thi ke aap aage badh gaye. Usi clip se hi toh Pihu ne aapko pehchana bookstore mein….

Ram: Oh.. isi liye phonewale uncle?

Priya: Hmmm..

Ram: Waise Rohan bhi tumhe pehchanta hai. Bedroom mein har jagah tumhari photos hai na. Aur  cupboard mein tumhare kapde bhi hai toh ..

Priya: Kapde? Mere kapde ab bhi hai cupboard mein?

Ram: Haan Priya.. Humara kamra waise hi hai jaise tum paanch saal pehle chodke gayi thi. Rohan ko pata hai.. yeh sab Priya aunty ki hai. Usko jab pata chalega ke Priya aunty God ke ghar se wapas aa gayi toh..

Priya: Aunty nahi.. mumma…

Ram looked at Priya lovingly as she drew herself even closer, bent down to plant a light peck in Ram's cheeks and secured herself into Ram's arms. Ram encircled her with one arm, and gently placed the palms of the other hand over Pihu's tiny palms. Both Ram and Priya closed their eyes, treasuring this wonderful feeling of belonging, as their hearts vowed to stay together forever…..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lalmadhu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW... wonderful story thank u very much for ur ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
supper  loved this.. u  write  so awesome.. 

please  start another   ff