~!!SwArOn OS!!~ last part page 5 pm's later..!! - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Nammu u really moved me with this one, teh last part was emotionally so touching...culdnt control the tears, awsum concept and Sharon's POV made it even more mindblowing...kept writing more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Awesome ending Namrata. I loved it. I had never expected this to end this way. The way you had started it off it seemed like a very cute and sweet OS but the ending you gave was really good. A very heart-touching story.

Thank you for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Hey that was awesome OS the 1st part was sooo cute!!!
and the last part was very touching.
Great work :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
I'm speechless! nd crying! 

cant say anything else!! 

sorry but it was far too emo for me to b able 2 say anything!! 

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Oh God dat was so touching...i was crying like hell while reading dis...😭 πŸ˜­
Beautifully written...i cant stop my tears...😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
hey guyz i was really worried for d feedback bt loved it..!! thnkz guyzz fr liking my os thnkz a lot..    :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
It was just great!!!!πŸ‘
really had tears in my eyes while reading it!😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
don't know what to say hell loads of emotions are running through me!
swayam's death and sharon being a responsible mother and wife!
she is very well keeping her promise made to swayam!
and swayam in her imaginations making her sleep or i should say ordering her to sleep..was just so awesome!
writing much will not make any sense so..i'm ending it with:
a single word LOVED it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
amazing ss...d 2nd part was very touching and it did make me emotional...really sum ppl who go away frm us still always remain with us...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Ha ha update dho nah plz...