Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Hey Iqra! Thats ur name i guess...am I right?
Fari has to be of some help!!!!! 😆That was a beautiful OSThe way u described Arnav...it was touchingHis feelings, emotions, everythiingI dont know what to say about itI'm speechlessI guess for the 1st time someone has tried to bring out Arnav's emotions n succeeded immenselyI Loved every bit of the OSFari's right, u should write more, u r a wonderful writer😃Cheers!
Originally posted by: SmileyStar
Res 😃 First page!! Woohoo 😆
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OMG!! That was sooo AWESOMELY written!! I fell in love with it!! Arnav's emotions, his pain and his desire to have a shoulder to lean on sometimes... It was all so brilliant!! 😃 esp love the part when he thinks of his childhood, running with abandon in his small jeans... That was such a cute touch!
Thats it! You make me update ASR Jr, now I'm gonna keep bugging you till you give us such Awesome treats! And you're free these days Anyways so might as well write 😳 Take lessons from Ashum! Ever since she's gotten free she's been on a Roll 😉 Hehehe!
I want more! More! Mooorreee! Do ya hear, missy?? 😆
And when did you write this thingy? I mean, I've been talking to you all day today 🤣
Originally posted by: OnlyHope
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EDITHayeee main sadke jaoon tumhari writing pe main qurbaan jaoon aapke comments pe😉*nazar utarofying Iqra*Ok seriously..that was utterly beautiful! THANKYOUUU🤗The way you captures the little moments in our daily life was amazing.So many times we overlook the little joys life has to offer..and our happiness lies right in those moments...we just take them so much for granted!urgghh IKR those stupid ungrateful people *rolls eyes*Beautifully described and written, Iqra!tanks tanks😉Arnav's part of great..the way he just needed someone to depend on..not because he lost, but because we all have that need at some point in life..and just need another to lean on...ahhh the way he realized choti choti khushiyan was beautiful..and the hug <3 eeeks.You made my night ;)exactly how can one not be frustrated after going to Harvard and owning AR and a brother like Akash who fully depends on him and then not to forget not so shaant Shantivan😆
Originally posted by: IPKKNDForever
Very nice
Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic
Aww... Beautiful! Loved it!
Originally posted by: lakraj80
Tht was really beautiful!
The way you described Arnav's emotions is superb. Lovely OS. Thanks
Originally posted by: -tanya96-
Amazing!
This is awesomely written! :)
Originally posted by: yashi_arnav
Amazing..Superb..
Originally posted by: sneha0504
lovely !!!
Thanks!Originally posted by: monalisa1234
Beautiful
Thank you for reading!Originally posted by: peppygeek
Awww...that was so lovely!
Update soon
You should continue
Thanks tina!Originally posted by: tina_1234
awesome os
Originally posted by: chavvi16
wasnt khushi just the cutest here
glad she was able to make him happy and see that there is someone who cares for himjust beautiful
Thanks!
Wonderful!
that was beyond sweet! the way you brought out Arnav's emotions... that was sooo beautiful! loved it😊
aww that was beautiful! lovely how arnav suddenly relied on khushi and now she is his best friend!
So cute, and thanks for the update😊Sim
Simply beautiful dear.
Really loved it .Awesome work 🤗Thank you soo much i always a comment by u on my OS and i really appreciate that thanks!
[QUOTE= Fan_ipkknd1] This was beautifulll!Loved how you've explaineed arnav's lifeee and how u've explained khushi's natureeeLovedd ittt😃thanks you sooo muchh!
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Yes thats me😆Awwhh fari told u about me?? that girl😳and thank you sooo muchhh! im SO glad i was able to impress you and have one more reader on my list hehehe😆Yeah i really wanted show his exhaustion i mean he went to harvard and all kuch frustration to honi chahiye na😆And yes i will deff write morethanks again!
Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
*GASPP* u stalker! lol jk arent we all stalkers lol and OMG im SO touched! and im glad i got read ur OS just read/commented on Picture perfect heheI practically stalk Fari's thread n come to know abt the people she loves here😃 u r one of themLol am glad I got another wonderful writer to read aboutBechara Arnav...poor soul...having gone to Harvard, owning AR and having a very shant family...he has to get a break...😆and haha i feel bad for him sometimes but his messed up personality deserves it! hahahaanand
Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
</div><div>🤣 I was surprised myself!I saw the post n rushed to reserve...later I realised I didnt even let Iqra reserve a spot for her own index😆That was my What the...moment😆Iqra is a lazy bum? Ahem...look whose talking🤣Queen of all lazy bums🤣
Originally posted by: SmileyStar
Hahahaha 🤣
I'm not queen of all lazy bums! Hmmm... Or maybe I'm am! But Its not my fault that you're so over efficient 😆 I gave you the punishment of writing an OS and you wrote it on that very day! 😉 and yep! You're so over efficient that you didn't even let iqra res a post for her index 😆
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