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Uff maan ka chup...

Doc didnt tell maan to treat geet wid watevr she wishes to eat...

lovely part 

awesome dear

Originally posted by: drrose31

lovely part 

maan is caring 

geet always like that 

thanks for pm

cont soon 

wanna see their fights 😆
thanks dear that you liked  the update
maan  is like that he will care, but he wont express
will continue

Originally posted by: maneet4afreen

nice story yaar... i loved it... now fights jus wow...plz add me to ua buddy list...

thanks dear that you like that
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amazing update...

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Edited by rsusmita - 11 years ago

NOTE:  FRIENDS  IN THIS PART THERE WILL BE A LIFT SCENE, ACTUALLY I PLANNED IT   IN EARLIER,   UPDATE BUT ONE OF MY FRIEND HAS INCLUDED THE LIFT SCENE IN HER UPDATE  IN HER   EARLIER UPDATE    SO I DELETED MY PART AT THAT TIME , NOW I INCLUDING THIS PART NOW ,

This part is necessary

IAM SORRY IF I HURT ANY ONE FEELINGS

SORRY

 

 

 PART-39

Chup '''.chup bilkul chup ( my fav dialogue )

You eat calmly or I know how to make you eat

Geet calmly started to take  her sandwich

Cribbing  to her babji 

SHE DID UNDERSTOOD WHY HE IS BEHAVING LIKE THIS

Why he is taking care of her, he believes me ,

He did not believed in that letters, ,

Why he doing like this , she want s to ask him

But she could not get that courage to ask him

What to ask him , if he tell something, can she bear that

If he does not believe in that letters, why he  not taking her to his home

She is so lost in her thoughts

She did not hear that maan was calling her

Geet'.geet'.geet

Hmmm

Geet stop your daydreaming , I do not have full day for you

I have to go saying that he immediately   was going towards his car

Geet quietly followed him and sat in the front seat

Both were quite thought out the journey

She wants to ask about dadima but how to ask him, if he get angry on this,does dadima knows that she is pregnant

But before,  that  they reached their destination

Maan' vo'.

Maan did not heard her murmuring

Seeing geet getting down, he  quickly reversed the car and went away

geet saw the car going back

ravan '

he did no let me finish my words

at least I would have asked how dadima is

okay chado''

kal puchulungi

next day when  geet  went to the office, she did a mental note that whe will going to ask maan about dadima , she saw lift was  about to  close the door

she immeditaly rushed  towards the lift to go inside before it going to close

 she entered so fast that she tripped her legs and was about fall

at the same time she saw the protective hands around her stomach holding her from not falling

maan'..a slight whisper escaped from her mouth

maan made her to stand properly ,

vo  sir'''..

she stopped suddenly seeing maan  eyes fuming with anger

geet do you have any sense what you are doing'.

Do you think you are a pt usha running like this

Vo sir  I want to enter into life before it going to close'

So I just walking fast'.

You are walking or running , it not looking like walking , you are running as if you you are on marathon

Vo' she could not complete her words'..seeing maan angry glance'.

She presses the   LIFT button in order to avoid the topic'.suddenly lift   light went away'.. lift did  a jerk and suddenly stopped in th middle. Seeing this geet quietly sat  in one corner of the lift

Geet''.geet' maan immediately switched on his mobile to locate the geeet,

Ha sir '.

Tum tehko ho'

Ha sir bilkul'..

With the slight light flashing from his mobile he saw geet  on the coner of the lift  sitting comfortably  keeping her back rest

Geet 'you are  not afraid of dark

No sir' why should i

Vasie 'bhi app idhar haito kisskekliya darna hai

Maan  immediately  presses the alarm in the lift and wa wating for someone to open the life

Sir' vo

Kya hai geet

Geet took some courage ..  and asked maan

Sir vo dadima kaise hai

Kyo' why you are asking that question now'

You did not think about  her when you left the house'.

Vo'

Geet I did not asked you leave the house,  then why you left the house

Sir' I thought you believed those letters

Geet  did I told you that I believed those nahi na'.

But you did not tell any thing, I thought you believed in those letter so

Then  how could think about your self and leave the place '.

Geet could feel his anger in his voice

She was happy that maan did not believed in that letters

She thanked the stars for helping her in '

Achahua  ki lift was stopped atleast I  could talk to maan and cleared my doubts

She saw maan was standing keeping back to  her

She quietly stood up and came near  to him

Sorry maan' iam sorry .. that I left the house

Sorry'.

He suddenly turned back and held geet hands

 

Sorry'

Geet with your sorry ' it will not change'..

You know what happened after you left

 Dadima got attack, by god grace, we could able save her

Dadima ' ab dadima kaise  hai

There is no need of your concern geet

Geet felt shiver with his cold behavior

Tears are flowing from her almond eyes

 It soon turned into hiccups,..

Maan heard geet  crying, but did not care to look at her  nor try to pacify her

But soon the hiccups turned   into breathlessness

Her breathe became very short , she not able to breath now, her face  was becoming very pale

Maan heard the hiccups and came near her and  saw her position

He understood what happened

He immediately made her lay down and  took the  duppata which was covering. so that she  may not feel suffocation  because of no air

But  ..her breath was  becoming  very short  now

He immediately tried to press the alarm again

He heard the  voices  of security guard '

Sir we are are tying to open the lift , but  it will take little time

 Be fast

I want the lift to be open in 5 min

He came near geet ,   he saw her

 She is not able breath..now because of suffocation he immediately tried took her sandels and try to rub her feet

pre cape:    can you guess guys

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Edited by rsusmita - 11 years ago