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                                                         PART !

    k hurna Mansion , it justs looks like a palace.Early morning maan woke up with the phone call.
   happy birthday maan iam wishing you first so you must give me part asked nita.ok he told, but she did not stopped there, she is going on prasing him,"how husky your voice"maan got irritated and told to stop prasing and he cut the call, again the phone rang, maan lifted the phone , this type niharika"hey maan happy birthday"
thank you,"where is the party"
    I gave the responsibility to adi , he is taking care.

He put the phone and again slept , enjoying the sleep, again the phone rang, but he didi not took the phone, he is not interested in taking that, he is enjoying the sleep, the birds chirpping sound from the windows, he just loves that music

nakul came and waked him up, he had paper in his hand he told today your bitrthday ,"ya i know atleast ,10 people have remembered me this" ok kaka i am giving lunch to freinds, iam going out, but nakul told she will be calling lawyer uncle for lunch today. " But you are going to tell her"

   he is thinking to day he has turned into 28 years still unmarried , but i can enjoy this life, if i marry, wife , kids, , i donot want that , i do not want take that resposnisibility , i am happy with this,
   coming out of the wash room while sipping his black coffee, he was attracted to the caption un the news paper
                      "oprphan women pleading "

    "my name id geet, id not have parents, i have one brother, he is suffereing heart disease,please save him, ido not have any one in this world other than him,doctor told if he is operated , he will be fine, please anyone seeing this coloum,please donate, give life to 2 persons, please help me " this the address.
           since child hood man was habit of doing something good one his birthday, this was taught by his mom
    he immeadiately took the letter pad and the tored the from address and wrote
    "geet i have seen your add , iam sending the whole amount , i hope your brother operation will be sucess annd you will be happy"
             maan singh khurana

he called nakul and told him send this check along wiht this letter and post them and said that to post that under care of post office .

he do not want further comunication from her

   but he do not desinity has other plans



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Wow superb cncept dear lovd it
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its amazing! plz continue :)

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   PART :2
Man was thinking about geet and her brother , for him dadima was the there,after his parents passed away, dadima looked after him, she is a strong lady,even though her husband died at her young age, son and daughter-inlaw passed away, she looked after himvery well,eventhough she is a lady, the khurana industries is in this place because of her, he adores her very much,he can do any thing for her.

                      He cme down after freshing up, he saw savitridevi (dadima) sitting in the living room,he immediately came and took her blessings, "man atlast this year you have to marry atleast for me ".No dadima"please do not ask again that, today is my birthday and do not fight wiht me"
              at the same his freinds came wishing him. all are in his agegroup,girs and boys, he immediately took the keys and was going with his freinds
              "man please come back atleast at dinner time, we will have dinner together,i called lawyer uncle also".hearing these words ,maan replied "i will see dadima" and went away".

                seeing this dadima was feeling bad,she knows ,she is reason for him to behave like this,after his parents death she could not devote much time to him,she was busy with business and itsexpansion,left him under the guidence of servents , mainly nakul and hisfreinds,and they became very close to him, he cannot tolerate any word against them.she could ,not give that love and care he needs which he needed.may be the girl can come , in his life , to fill this vaccume,

    she at any cost wants him to marry
    she does not knows that , her wish will coming soon, she plays a major role in this

please encourage me with your like, it will help me to motivate to write any sugeestions also .pleaseee

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Mishti Patel

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Wow, we both share same title of fiction, but its different and I love it

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rsusmita

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Originally posted by: MistiofMistz
Wow, we both share same title of fiction, but its different and I love it

ya i know there a lot of stories based on the plot of marraige , but this plot is different , thank you for liking it

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Loved it

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rsusmita

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PART: 3

Dadima was waiting for maan for the past 1 hour , it is already 9.30. a car came and parked in the portico, she thought maan,had came, but seeing K.D pathak Lawyer ,her face color has changed.(I love this character in this serial so i introduced him in my story) what ma are you waiting for your maan , still he has not come from friends , ya k.d. , but how come you know that , simply ma even when i came you are not happy, so you are waiting for maan , and he not yet reached home, may be he is busy with his friends

              Seeing pathak dadima rembered the past ,after her husband death, she started a orphanage under his name, when she used to go there ,she saw him,different from others,when all other playing, in his age group of 10.-15 years , he is seriously studying something , seeing this , she felt very happy,she had seen some spark in his eyes,she immediately asked him,whether he wants to study ,he immediately replied that "i want to become a lawyer." She immediately talked to orphanage people and joined him in big school, and sponsored his studies, after wards, because of his studies and rank he got scholarships and started studying law course, because of hard-work he became a famous lawyer,whenever, she see him,she feel very proud.

      Pathak came,and took her blessings she is just like a maa to him, he calls her like that only. savithri devi again started "pathak at least
you marry ,seeing this, maan will marry,why you did not marry, until now"
" ma who will marry me now, i am already above 40 years , see already, my hair has becoming grey, and why you are back of me, you ask your grand son and leave me now"

even though there is a age difference of 15 years ,maan love and respects pathak as a big brother.
       It is already 10 ,maan has not et come, today nakul had prepared all maan favorite ,all Chinese,continental,dishes,pasta,noodles,black forest fudge ,everything but still he has not yet came.
   " ma ,we eill start eating see,it is already 10 ,and i am feeling hungry and it is not good for your health". he knows ,if he does not pressures her ,she won"t take any thing
   " pathak you tell him,to marry,see i became very old, i cannot take the responsibility of industries, even though you are helping me, he should also must know his responsibility".

   " ma i know your worries, i can give you only suggestions, you look after some good girls."
" pathak i have see that, it is not that much useful. seeing girls, he will keep them far away."
   "ok let us see maa , see one nice girl. we wil make them marry."
K.D this all ok. will he agree to marry, that easily.
   "first you search, then i will give you an idea.

        Late night in one of pub of the mumbai maan was with his friends, they all are dancing. Nita was dancing with maan, "maan today , i wished you first, so you should give me a present."
      "ya! you ask me ,already i told you 10 times"
       "really maan "
      "you ask and see,nita"
"ok! i will ask you"
      "ask fast"

    nita then suddenly took maan hand, and asked" if I ask anything, you will give me ?"
    "nita you are my friend ,even you ask life also,i will give you".

" maan i---I----- want you only"

     "what"!
Nita was keeping her head on his shoulder and closing her eyes "maan i love you, i want to tell you, but every time i want to tell you, there are lot friends around you, today i got time, you are free and alone."
    Maan was feeling irritated now , and getting angry now , but he is controlling himself
   "maan my heart is full of you, i cannot live without you, i am also rich like you, my daddy will do marriage, whichever way you want "
      "marriage !"maan was shocked he immediately pushed her from his side
   'see nita ,i hate this marriage, i consider you as my friend, more than that nothing, now please leave me."
     seeing this side of maan, nita immediately left him."
    seeing nita going away , yash and niharika. who were dancing came near to him, yash asked maan , why she went away .
     "she is having headache, that is why she left, , we can continue our party" maan replied
   seeing this niharika felt very happy, ' maan , may i dance with you." both were enjoying the couple dance   , the dance steps were slow according the slow music, seeing this romantic atmosphere niharika asked
    "maan , i love you, please will you marry me "
    "niharika !" maan shouted like any thing
pushing her away
    all others stopped and saw them, yash and adi understood why nita went away,
    maan is very good at heart. he can do anything for a friend, if any lady comes and proposes him, he becomes very angry and violent , and ends up doing something
    seeing the situation, yash immediately stopped maan giving slap to niharika, and stopped the party, and told adi to take maan to house , he knows, if he rides a car in this anger , he will end up with the accident, told adi drive the car
   after he went away, he caught hold of niharika " why you did like this niharika, why you talked about marriage with him, do not try to bring this topic with him, if you have any hopes on him leave it now only, do not bring this topic again
with him"
why yash why he is behaving like this, please niharika do not ask anything about his past, he is trying to forget this.





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