"Innocently in love" Kriyaansh Short story (done) - Page 34

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sry for the late comment

as i m new to this ff..

Just readed all the parts..

Its amazing.. Beautifully written

they are so cute nd adorable

eagerly waiting for their marriage

update soon

Thnx for pm

p.s. Congras for half century
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

19TH PART

It was day when shhe had the most beautiful smile on her face...she looked herself in the mirror...

sm(smriti): u look beautiful...

kr: thanx mom...

sm: i gonna miss you princess...

kr: me tooo but i am just 15 blocks away...milna ho toh kabhi bhi aa jana...

she stood up and hugged her tight...

sm: i ill be waiting outside okay...(goes out)

sharon who was holding kriya wedding dress was waiting to see her in it...

sh: chalo chalo...jaldi tayaar ho jao..

kriya wore her beautiful white gown and came...

sh: wow..!! u shot me!!

kr: huh...?? its it bad??

sh: dumbo!! u look damn awesome!! now let me do ur hair

kriya sat in front of the mirror and sharon was combing her hair...and noticed that kriya hand wear trembling...

sh: u okay...?? y is yr hand all shaky??

kr: pata nahi...bas...dar lag raha hai...

sh: dar...?? kissse??...oh...ab samjhi...!! every bride hoes thru dis...dont worry its normal...waise rey koi bhoot nahi hai joh thumhai...mar dalega !!

both started laughing at this...

sh: well am down...with yr hairstyle...now i got to go as i am the maid of honour u see... ;)

kr: thanx sharon!

she took one last look at her in the mirror...and imamgined rey beside him...

kr: sharon u r right...rey koi bhoot nahi hai joh mujhe...mar dalega!!

she went of the dressing room and was ready to walk on the aisle...with the mistman...i e swayam...

swayam held out his hand so that kriya could take and both walked towards the priest and rey...and all the people seated stood up...

sw(whispers): look awesome yaar!!

kr: thanx swayam...waise thumhari shaadi mein maid of honour banugi ha..!!

swayam started blushing about it :P

they reached...she hugged swayam and swayam stood beside sharon...both wer standing holding hands in front of the priest who started the ceremony...

pr(priest): Mr. reyansh singhania are u ready to marry Ms kriya Ghai

r: yes..

pr: Ms Kriya Ghai are ready to marry Mr. Reyansh singhania...

kr: yes!

pr: u may kiss..

both kissed and that for the first time in front of everyone...but for them everybody disappeared and got lost in der own worlds...

after the ceremony...they cut the cake and everyone applauded...for them...
sharon went up to the stage and

sh: well i am not good at making speeches...but i just wanna say i am really very happie for kriya...and both of u live your life to the fullest and cherish every moment...

swayam neha vishaka nilesh vicky also went upto the stage and wished them luck for their new lives...

romantic music started playing and all the couples started to dance...kriyash never broke eye contact and der smiles never faded...they felt as if a dream come true...
after sometime a ship arrived at the shore and it was time for the couple to leave for their honeymoon...

kriya and rey hugged their friends and waved bye bye...and the ship started to sail...

wedding dress:
 
 
 
the cake:
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
shoes:
 
 
 
 
rey's dress:
 
 
 
 

and the aisle:
 
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hope u all like it :)
 
Edited by devilish11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story of every married couple is the same...where the husband is reading newspaper the wife is knitting and the kid is playing but here dats not the case...
A 13 year old girl taking on the phone...
??: yea...sure...i wud love to come..! pick me at 8 pm bye bye!! :) (cuts phone) hey dad can  i go out on a date with daniel??
rey: no reya!
   (rey+ kriya = reya :) )
rh: but...kyu??
r: cuz i dont want ur tiny delicate heart get broken!! what if hes a player??
rh: dad hes not!! mom dekho nah!!
kr: heres my adivice sweety! just be " innocently in love" u never know what might happen next?? (winks towards rey)
isse jaane do na rey!
r(got lost in his wifes sweetness): okay fine...
rh: yeashhh!!! woho!!! dad waise aap dono ki bhi love marraige thi nah...? how did u meet??
r: well dats a different story ! (smiles at kriya)
rh: sunao nah...
kr: well it started like this i was in the mall when he came up to me...
and she started naratting the whole story...to her sweet daughter and rey was just pehele ki admiring her...!! <3
 
 
 
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hope u all liked my SS!! ending it here!! will be back with a new ss! :) bye bye!!
Edited by devilish11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yuppieee. . . . . .
1st 1 to comment. . . .
Vaise 1st yeah bada vala hug(realy bada vala) tat kriyaansh got married. . . . . . . . .
M so happy 4 them. . .
Bt,nw m realy sad. . .
Realy vry sad,
tat dis ss ended. . .
Vaise awsome update. . . . . . . . . .Edited by Madhukumari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res !
UnRes !!

"The End" 😭 😭
Uahh... ! 😭
I am following this SS, since i was just a newbie !!
I would really Miss it !! 😭
It was really amazing... !!
Continue writing and Pls come up with the new SS soon..
Will be waiting !! 😊

Update was really awesome...
Loved it...
Finally Kriyaansh Married ! 😳
But what about that dream, u wrote about in last update ? 😕
Well, let it be.. I am happy that it was a happy-happy wala ending !! 👏

Epilogue was really cute !!
Rey+Kriya=Reya !!! Awwieee...
Loved it !! 😃

And as i said, i would really miss this SS !! 😊 Edited by hetalt29 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres...

awesome update...
finally kriyaansh ki wedding...😃
kriyaansh wedding dress was beautiful...😊

epiloge was so sweet ...
kriyaansh had a 13 yr old daughter...😊
rey again got lost in kriya's beauty... akhir kriya hai hi itni sundar...😉

loved it...😃
Edited by cool_star14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it...

such a cute ending...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update...
Nd a sweet ending...
Thankx 4 d pm