i'll post my os/ss here..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i knw m writing two ff...but jab tak demand nahi complete hoti tab tak njoy my 1st os



<p align="center">Marriages are
created in heaven
</p>

Guyz this is
my 1st OS plz leave ur comments' srry agar iss pe pelhe kisi ne
likha ho'.no copyright intendeed


Vicky studied at Mumbai & his family was at dheradhun'.


Viha's marriage!! At dheradhun'the marriage was at their
bunglow rey,amar& nil vicky's best fren'.swayum'vicky's big brother'kria
vicky's bhabhi'Sharon'neha's fren'it was reception of their marriage '. Kriyam love
each other a lot'they were mad behind each other'but a year back'swayum was
dead'vicky's mother is finding a guy for
kria'.


So viha's reception'.


At the stage ' viky's mum step up'


V: maa yeh hai rey, amar & nilesh


R: hiiee aunty


V'S mum: hiiee'rey , amar & nil step down'.


V: maa main sooch raha tha'ke bhabhi ke liye rey!


V's mum: aise kaise???


V: maa bhut aacha ladka 'hai'Mumbai mein iske dad bhut bade
industrialist hai'.bhabhi khush rahegi'.


V's mum: soochte hai..!!


In mean tym'kria had a plate of sinner in her hand'she was
walking in her on world'and suddenly she bashes into some one'.it was rey'.the
food falls on rey's clothes'


K: srry'aaye main'aapko washroom tak le jati hun'.


R: its okay'ya plz washroom ka rasth'bata soko ge'???


They were on their way'while kria's sari cums in her way
& she was about to fell but rey hold her'& rey started to stare'llhh
(ONLY FRM REY'S SIDE, KRIA WAS UNCOMFRTABLE)'kria trys to get up'rey helps her
to get back on her feet'.rey had already fallen for kria!!


They reached near the washroom 'kria left'.rey came back'he saw
a little gal sitting alone'


R: hiie aapka naam??

g: shivani


R: hiie shivani aap kitne std mein ho?


S: main 5th mein hun..bye'was about to get up!!


R: hey,kya hua?? Mujse baat nahi karni?


S: maa kheti hai..anjaan logo se baat nahi karte!


R: lekin aap toh mera naam'waise yeh jiski shaadi hai main
uska best fren hun!!


S: aap chachu ke fren ho'Mumbai wale???????

R: yes!


S: Mumbai toh bhut bada hai na!


R: haan bhut bada hai !


S: aap ghum nahi jaate ho wahan??


R: nahi'.laughs'


S: frenz'.removes her hand


R: holding her hand: frenz


S: apne kahana kahaya?


R: nahi aur apne????????


S: maa lene toh gayi thi'lagta hai bhul gayi'chaloo main
aapko le chalti hun'rey holds shivani in her arms'.on the way'shivani sees kria


S: maa'


R: maa'shocked to see kria'


K: aap yeh 'kya kar rahe ho??


S: maa yeh chachu ke fren hai Mumbai wale!


K: utro'isse pareshan nahi karte beta


R: noo'its fyn!


S: haan maa'yeh mere aur mere fren ki baat hai aap biiche
mein maat aau!


K: shivani'she asks rey to keep her down'rey keeps shivani
down' kria waits'


S: katti maa'.& runs away..out of the bunglow'kria was
abut to follow her'rey holds her hand


R: main jau?? Usse khana khana tha'


K: main plate leke aati hun'


Rey follows shivani'she was sitting on a bench'.rey goes to
the bench & sits near her'


R: aapki mum ko aapki chinta thi'.


S: papa hote toh maa ko kabhi gussa nahi karne dete'


R; hote toh'


S: ekk saal pelhe papa off ho gaye!


R: its okay'..


K: chaloo khana khate hai


S: muje nahi khana mein khaungi toh sif inke haatho
se..points towards rey'.


K: khana he toh khao'warna was abut to hit her'rey stops
her!


R: plate lao'aaj main aur shivani eek hi plate mein khaye
ge!


K: plzz don't 'woh kha legi'rey takes the plate from
kria..& gives a bit to shivani'all this is seen by vicky's mum'she asked
rey if he wants to marry kria & kria if she wants to re-marry to rey'both
said yes'shivani was also haapy with rey'.


It was 5 years later'.


Shivani had a small brother called arjun!


Shivani was in her room'.she was starring at swayum's photo'rey
entres'he sees swayum's photo'n is shocked!!!


</p>
<p>*FLASH BACK*


It was Mumbai 6 years before'.it was nite'some 9-10 the road
was sum sam'rey was driving'& the car he was driving,had a break failure'&
hit a guy'.swayum'.car..stoped & he ran to swayum'.took him to hospital'but
he was dead'


*PRESNT*


Today is shivani's marriage'.with kabir'.son of the docter who
failed to save swayum '


.it was all about marriges are made in heaven...hum nahi kar te ...bhgwan karvata hai

        ~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


index:
marriages are made in heaven (os) : page 1 (scroll up😛)

my love (ss) : part 1 : page 4 
                    : part 2 : page 8

pyaar (ss)   : intro/cs : page 8
                   : part 1 : page 16
                   : part 2 : page 17
                   : part 3 : page 21 

the night (os) : page no : 21  

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res

unres

Nice one...

Kriyam as a pair!!!!

Edited by kaba3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That means... Rey caused Swayams death...?
This was awesome, shivani is damn cute!
I happy ends and wrote so well!
Love your work.
Edited by BrunoMars - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres

shivi... tu mujhe pagal kardegi...
its awesome... KriYam were a couple🤢 and ReMarriage Rey-Kria😆

chaljaldi continue...
Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

res

unres

shivi... tu mujhe pagal kardegi...
its awesome... KriYam were a couple🤢 and ReMarriage Rey-Kria😆

chaljaldi continue...




cont?? one shot hai...khatam...itna hi...it was all about marriges are made in heaven...hum nahi kar te ...bhgwan karvata hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: BrunoMars

That means... Rey caused Swayams death...?

This was awesome, shivani is damn cute!
I happy ends and wrote so well!
Love your work.




thannxx...yes rey ki wajse swayum maar gaya 😭😭😭 😆
Edited by sweety-reylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaba3003

Res

unres

Nice one...

Kriyam as a pair!!!!





ya...i knw gr8 na...kria swayum...swayum kria
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update

loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jeez... rey by accident killed swayam...
kriya & rey got married at vicky's marriage..nyc...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kya concept hai . . . 😃

kriya is a widow . . . . . But atlast got married to rey 🤗