Originally posted by: cookie_arsha
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m shocked need sumtym to recoverbaadme unres kardungibt if i frgtu need to send a reminder lolzz
My love
My second OS!!! kitna likhti hun aur tum logo ko paka thi hun na…but kya karu...likhna toh chodi gi nahi…toh tum log pakte raho!!!...
Sharons's pvo:
I was 15…..
I don't know since when I was lying on the hospital bed….all I remember I walked in to the ot with my dad..i asked the nurse that is this sumthing major?? She just smiled back..i was nervous cz I came in ot with out my love..i wanted to see at least once…but…my love was not there with me….after the operation…I think I came into senses after 2 days…as soon as I opened my eyes I saw my life , my love ,my kria….my sis…it was paining…my stomach I still didn't knew for wat I had been operated..& all I coud say was pa….& she got it!! This was our relation….if I was the heart she was my heart beat….i was so stupid then..i used to fight everytym she got a new coz…I thought her fren..could steal my place…but I was wrong..i never knew wat I was for her….shits….how could I never got her??? She had kept a different place for me which was above everyone …..i was hers & she was mine…only mine…
Sharon's pvo is disturbed by a little boy….
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B: hii masi…
Sh: hii…shivam…(Shivam was jill& kria's son he was 15)
S: masi…aaj mom ka b'day hai !! lets celebrate her style….
Sh: yaa…..come….wherz jiju?????????
S: mom ke photo ke aage roo rahe hai….
They was to kria's & jill's room
J: kyu kria ???????? y…… aaj bhi agar woh insane mile gaya jiske wajse…tum mujse duur hogayi toh main usse nahi choduga….i promise!!
Sh: jiju …
J: bol Sharon!!
Sh: chale????????????
this might turn into an ss...but i m just showing that love V/s sister main sharon kya select karegi?????????
Originally posted by: sweety-reylover
i knw m writing two ff...but jab tak demand nahi complete hoti tab tak njoy my 1st os
Marriages are created in heaven
Guyz this is my 1st OS plz leave ur comments' srry agar iss pe pelhe kisi ne likha ho'.no copyright intendeed
Vicky studied at Mumbai & his family was at dheradhun'.
Viha's marriage!! At dheradhun'the marriage was at their bunglow rey,amar& nil vicky's best fren'.swayum'vicky's big brother'kria vicky's bhabhi'Sharon'neha's fren'it was reception of their marriage '. Kriyam love each other a lot'they were mad behind each other'but a year back'swayum was dead'vicky's mother is finding a guy for kria'.
So viha's reception'.
At the stage ' viky's mum step up'
V: maa yeh hai rey, amar & nilesh
R: hiiee aunty
V'S mum: hiiee'rey , amar & nil step down'.
V: maa main sooch raha tha'ke bhabhi ke liye rey!
V's mum: aise kaise???
V: maa bhut aacha ladka 'hai'Mumbai mein iske dad bhut bade industrialist hai'.bhabhi khush rahegi'.
V's mum: soochte hai..!!
In mean tym'kria had a plate of sinner in her hand'she was walking in her on world'and suddenly she bashes into some one'.it was rey'.the food falls on rey's clothes'
K: srry'aaye main'aapko washroom tak le jati hun'.
R: its okay'ya plz washroom ka rasth'bata soko ge'???
They were on their way'while kria's sari cums in her way & she was about to fell but rey hold her'& rey started to stare'llhh (ONLY FRM REY'S SIDE, KRIA WAS UNCOMFRTABLE)'kria trys to get up'rey helps her to get back on her feet'.rey had already fallen for kria!!
They reached near the washroom 'kria left'.rey came back'he saw a little gal sitting alone'
R: hiie aapka naam??
g: shivaniR: hiie shivani aap kitne std mein ho?
S: main 5th mein hun..bye'was about to get up!!
R: hey,kya hua?? Mujse baat nahi karni?
S: maa kheti hai..anjaan logo se baat nahi karte!
R: lekin aap toh mera naam'waise yeh jiski shaadi hai main uska best fren hun!!
S: aap chachu ke fren ho'Mumbai wale???????
R: yes!S: Mumbai toh bhut bada hai na!
R: haan bhut bada hai !
S: aap ghum nahi jaate ho wahan??
R: nahi'.laughs'
S: frenz'.removes her hand
R: holding her hand: frenz
S: apne kahana kahaya?
R: nahi aur apne????????
S: maa lene toh gayi thi'lagta hai bhul gayi'chaloo main aapko le chalti hun'rey holds shivani in her arms'.on the way'shivani sees kria
S: maa'
R: maa'shocked to see kria'
K: aap yeh 'kya kar rahe ho??
S: maa yeh chachu ke fren hai Mumbai wale!
K: utro'isse pareshan nahi karte beta
R: noo'its fyn!
S: haan maa'yeh mere aur mere fren ki baat hai aap biiche mein maat aau!
K: shivani'she asks rey to keep her down'rey keeps shivani down' kria waits'
S: katti maa'.& runs away..out of the bunglow'kria was abut to follow her'rey holds her hand
R: main jau?? Usse khana khana tha'
K: main plate leke aati hun'
Rey follows shivani'she was sitting on a bench'.rey goes to the bench & sits near her'
R: aapki mum ko aapki chinta thi'.
S: papa hote toh maa ko kabhi gussa nahi karne dete'
R; hote toh'
S: ekk saal pelhe papa off ho gaye!
R: its okay'..
K: chaloo khana khate hai
S: muje nahi khana mein khaungi toh sif inke haatho se..points towards rey'.
K: khana he toh khao'warna was abut to hit her'rey stops her!
R: plate lao'aaj main aur shivani eek hi plate mein khaye ge!
K: plzz don't 'woh kha legi'rey takes the plate from kria..& gives a bit to shivani'all this is seen by vicky's mum'she asked rey if he wants to marry kria & kria if she wants to re-marry to rey'both said yes'shivani was also haapy with rey'.
It was 5 years later'.
Shivani had a small brother called arjun!
Shivani was in her room'.she was starring at swayum's photo'rey entres'he sees swayum's photo'n is shocked!!!
*FLASH BACK*
It was Mumbai 6 years before'.it was nite'some 9-10 the road was sum sam'rey was driving'& the car he was driving,had a break failure'& hit a guy'.swayum'.car..stoped & he ran to swayum'.took him to hospital'but he was dead'
*PRESNT*
Today is shivani's marriage'.with kabir'.son of the docter who failed to save swayum '
.it was all about marriges are made in heaven...hum nahi kar te ...bhgwan karvata hai
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