Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 94

I remembered why this FF is my favourite of all your works 😆

Mohini's scenes, the spell etc was very well written. Her complex equation with Kol. Something BIG is going to happen and boy can I feel it :P
Abhay and Piya- aah! Their bits were beautiful. I loved the honeymoon and good Abhay knows that Mohini might have done something. But i wonder if he will discover anything.

Jeh- I hope Amber can help him.
And what's with the Arghasias people?
Its been so long you updated that even stuff which normally gets me worried is having me excited :P

PS. I told you that this would go to book 4. I told you! 😆

i am scared. Literally shaking of what mohini will do to Abhiya now. Eeeps poor Piya and Abhay. And who are these Arghasis fellows? Are they also Supernatural? Are Siddhartha and Abhay related? I guess will have to wait for next update.

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Mohini swirled the water inside the plastic bowl
with her finger and it was moving in snake shape
inside the bowl, looking extremely creepy for
something which has no color and no shape. Her
eyes were red, swollen. it's feels she cried after a
millennium. Every creature in this world has some
weakness they can't get over it, ever and THE
Mohini - even she has some. one her pride, her
family legacy and another Kol. There was nothing
more important to mohini than her family legacy
and her sister but she lost her. and there was Kol.
her love, her desire, her husband, her destroyer,
the deceiver, her worst enemy. She true equal
opponent who can match her in each and every
aspect but everything is ruined. She loathes him so
much. He not only left her but he also broke her
pride which is hates more than anything else. Why
can't she just get over it? and why can't he just
forget the past and move on? what was she
thinking? does she want Kol to forget everything so
that they can be together again? Never. she will
never go back to him. why can't she get over him?
because she can't forget what he did to her? or she
can't forget he hates her now and never want her
back or she wants to go back to him? and this is
one subject Mohini doesn't have the answer to her
own questions. she stopped twirling her fingers in
water. She needs to go back to India. her magic
wasn't as strong now as it should be because her
mind is completely unsettle and her emotions
aren't in control any longer. and she is NOT
supposed to be like this. she always has everything
under her control. so she needs to put herself back
together. She bring out the hair she has taken
from Piya and kept it in the box Pamona gave her
and she smiled finally. Before leaving she has
things to do. she wants to play her favorite game.
Game of Revenge as Mohini believes revenge is dish
best served cold. She smiled with satisfaction
again.

This is so so good tanzie! 👏 extraordinarily amazing! The way you have dug deeper into her skin--her character--her mind--it's terrific!! If there had been no Abhay piya then Mohini had been the central of action! No one i could imagine of picturising such as intriguing character like hers, except you! 👏

You have portrayed her layers so vividly that an entire write up could be written on her!

The way she reacts and the way her mind unfolds...gives us a glimpse of her desire and aspirations. And all i could feel is Mohini is craving for love. She too wants to be desired and wanted just like anybody. Only vengeance had made her blind!


Loved your portrsyal of Amsterdem. You made it so vivid n real with your description n well chosen words! Loved it. 👍🏼

Abhay Piya and their time off in the city was perfect picture of the freedom of a couple who had had little amount of peace and hence their joy n elation were quite apparent. And again so well penned by you! 👏

When it comes to Abhay and Piya and the limit of the extremities of their love--you are amazing! The way you have brought out Abhay's pain and Piya's sadness and the way she asks him not to torture himself was sheer beauty! Abhay was more real than just a fictional character! His concern--and his lovevwere splendidly explained. The blood sucking moment was very deftly written! 👏

Mohini i can see behind that hideous face--is a woman suffering! And i wish Kol had her brought out from the dark edge. She could have been different. There was chance. But i dnt think that will happen! Not with the resolve and hatred i see in her! Impossible.

And i fear for Piya! I hope she gets help before Mohini succeeds in her plan or before it gets too late! :(

About Jeh--what will he do now? Whose side is he?

Please update soon tanzie. Like i said--you are the soul of the forum! Don't ever leave. And keep writing...we are here always for you. 🤗

P.s. and dont please mind my being late. I will always come. As long as you write--i'm here to read. 🤗

P.p.s. this story has a flavour--and aura that lingers long after i have read it. Always it's different! A mystic feeling is what i get whenever i have read this ff! And kudos to you for infusing life in it with such beauty and precision. 👏 👏
overall i love the way you plot, and play your characters!
oh and i forgot to mention--your descriptions on magic are always incredible! keep writing. ..❤️Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 9 years ago

Awesome update dear but mohini's plans r giving me goose bumps. Abhiya honeymoon was sweet sum real quality time dey needed for them selves. The entry of siddharth's n his family causing Arnab fearful is defnetly a cause to worry . Eagerly waiting for da new twist 👏Edited by mahi4ever - 9 years ago

Loved Abhiya part. It was cute and awesome. Loved it.👏
Oh no now Mohini is after Pia. At the end she really got her way to take revenge. Who are those Arghasis? Are they after Vampires?
Edited by .rumki. - 9 years ago

Wow another amazing update
The curse is seemingly dangerous
Arent u planning   like vampire child stuff
U are gonna end mohini   character that soon

Mohini and Siddhartha seem to spell disaster for everyone. I think the days are going to turn pretty dark now 

Wao amazing update!
Abhiya scene was soo romantic
Wonder What will mohini do wid Abhiya now..?

Update soon

brilliant update tanzie.

Awsome Dear...Ur chocolate episode made me eat chocolate😛I know u change Pia as evil Mohini😭..plss keep a way Abhay get Pia again...plsss😭...& plss pm me Dear ur all old running & new Abhiya stories ..U r my fav writer..u change my many thought with ur stories,,I Love ur writing skill..Keep it up🤗