MY WOMAN, MY LIFE..A story in 5 parts... :) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!! another wonderfully written story..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

What i should say marisπŸ‘
its just beautiful ,awesome stufff...
<font color="#0033FF">i just want to tell what happen when i opened it :::</font>

<font color="#996600">i opend it and went to attend call, my hubby who was sleeping heard the song ..
when i too heard it ,i was surprised bcoz its one of my fav too
plz neel put your headphones ,:im confused:
i said i haven't played anything and searching in my lap how this song is playing while talkin in the phone, he literally shouted at me to off the song don't disturb my sleep ...
now really confused ..i cudn't find anything ,i just muted off my speaker ...</font>

<font color="#0000FF">when i started reading it ..i found how the song came and i was utterly surprised ..aswell as nice day started of to ...really .hmm you made my day .
it was early morning freshness by hearing the song ,and not one part together 5 parts and a nice start to great ending ...and one of the cute convo between me nd my hubby. encounterd by the song ...
really loved it ...the way you described their feelings for each other ..
romance in the first part ,pareting hood of ram, pari thoughts , the first day of meeting ..
just awesome stuff ...thank you very much ..treat to read your stories..</font>


brillient comment for brillient story.. Superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!! Superb story! πŸ‘ Your writing is just fabulous! ⭐️ Loved it ❀️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kaash mein EK hothi... Kaash meri bhi ek production house hothi... I will make this come true!!, Beautiful !!!  Maris ... Hats off!!, Loved it!! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVED IT!

The way everything flowed was so smooth. And I really love the way you place your words. Impeccable!

Maris, you are too good!

The Janus Man, My Family and then THIS!

I have bookmarked all of them and read them many times.

Thank You So Much For Writing.

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Posted: 11 years ago
ok so m absolutely speechless...! thudthud I hv always been bad expressing myself... can't describe in words how beautiful this write up is😍😍😍  felt  like I was in a dreamland... your words create such a magical world😍 n the song... the song...love0046 love0046 so so sooo perfect... seems lyk it is just made for my princess In LoveIn Love  I salute you my friend... Not Worthy Not WorthyNot Worthy I can't just thank you enoughπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
so here's a lil nothing from my side to one of the best writers of IF
drumplaydrumplaydrumplay

You Simply Rockkk...!!!





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Posted: 11 years ago
Its sooo beautifully written, i bow down to ur writing.
Standing ovation for u. Clap...clap...clap...clap...clap...clap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow !!     πŸ‘
superb...
luved ur writin... πŸ˜
 

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Posted: 11 years ago
woah maris..!!! im shocked...my mind is not working...i still am busy dreaming..!!!😍
adding song to it...wow...and the song was so apt...it fitted in perfectly...
a zillion hugs for you dear...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
5 parts back to back...awesome...you made my day dear...
 --- nanni...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nandinimp

hey maris


lovely lovely paean to womanhood man... and who better to say it than the big man... Love the way you have woven the past and the present... and i am imagining how Ram must have won Priya over... oh oh oh if only this comes alive on screen... the two will blow our minds away i'm sure...and the constantly simmering passion that you showed...muah muah... this is the Ram Priya that we looked forward to before the shit hit the fan on the show...

have read it more than 3 times and all times the feeling is wow wow wow!!!
and you brought out the fact that love wins despite all hurdles..it does and how!!! 

thank you for making my sunday!!!!

Thanks NadiniπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ...Rombha nandri. πŸ€—Moonu dadavai padichingala? Yes Love is strong, provided its mutual between the right couple..Ram and Priya are great,inspite of all their shortcomings and follies..Thats why they are so endearing to us..