Just these Bars in between... A poem.. chk pg 7 - Page 3

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

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Awww awesome maris ,loved each and every line

Tearful eyes tearing me apart

Painful  face piercing my heart

 

 Love will ease all that's wrong

Lets hold to it and just be strong.

  These i loved more but you know each line is so thoughtful and perfectly potrayed RAYA feelings , i wonder how could you penned down such an easy way and should i say anything more .

Each line is better than the before one ,i loved it to the core , i just read just these glass in between also ,done great job dear .

thank you somuch for this fabulous update ..

i felt better after reading this ,they are showing such a crap in the show and missing RAYA  scenes.

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It's  for you

Thanks Neel😳. I love both the pics of Raya..None can resist falling for this couple..😃⭐️

Originally posted by: mem1

Awesome, Maris. As always a most beautiful poem saying so much, in so few words... great work. 

Originally posted by: -Mayu-

Oh! So you like Barun?😳

Cool, I hope the forum is not locked yet😳

Hatts to you again!👏👏

You are a Rock⭐️!

Love,

Mayu

Mayu, BHPH forum has been locked long time back. Its been more than a year since that show went off air.. I like Barun but was never crazy about him.. Liked the pairing of Ankita with Barun..They were awesome just like now I love Sakshi and Ram..,

Thanks for your kind words..😃

Originally posted by: Nancy_NUTS

Wow Maris Di. that was a wonderful poem👏..couldn't help but read again n again😳

every line fits RaYa's situation to the T

and read the earlier poem on one of my most favorite RaYa scene.that was beautiful too❤️ Nd now i can make out the diff. b/w the two situation too!!

Waiting to read smthing soon from u

Originally posted by: PunyaS

Maris,

You are on a roll!

I have become a fan of your poetry. You have touched a chord here.

Reflective of their turmoil.. this poem is indeed a mirror, penned down beautifully.

Kudos!

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Thanks Punya😳..Am a fan of your writing too..The feeling is mutual..😃

Originally posted by: keaun

Lovely peom