Just these Bars in between... A poem.. chk pg 7

Posted: 2012-06-09T07:45:04Z


A few months ago(Dec 7th to be precise) I wrote a poem about the HM episode of Raya..

For those of you who have joined here later here is the link for the poem titled..

 " Just a glass inbetween" : the link is given below 
At time love was just budding but never felt by Raya..Those were days of shyness and awkwardness giving away to easy friendship and camaraderie.. 


But things are starkly  different now..

The last scene of thus's episode(7th June) stuck with me..And hence this new poem.
Its suggested that you  read these 2 poems;
 "Just a glass in between" and "Just these bars inbetween"..
The similarites and differences are so striking on comparison..

Now without further ado, lets get on with this poem..



Just these bars in between!! 

 Just these bars in between us

Mere barriers and nothing else
Lines that seemingly dividing my face

Yet indicative of the lines of fate


Bars and barriers looking like abacus

Counters of time and distance between us.


These bars are never a  barrier

For charges levelled are all absurder


Leaps of faith and trust was never a suspect

Leap into the future a resigned prospect.


Tearful eyes tearing me apart

Painful  face piercing my heart


 Love will ease all that's wrong

Lets hold to it and just be strong.


Adversity and hardships for testing times

Happiness and miracles  to relieve us sometimes.


 Months and years soon to separate us

Blissful  togetherness; all cherished moments.


Don't cry my love

For I love you more than ever

Don't hate me my love

For I love you more than myself.

PS: Please leave your valuable comments and hit the like button if you like this poemLOL..Thanks.Big smile
Edited by maris08 - 2012-06-14T19:28:42Z
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Posted: 2012-06-09T07:50:24Z
Beautiful poem! Heart
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Posted: 2012-06-09T07:51:28Z
Maris, awesome dear, the abacus part with counters of time and distance between us was an amazing line. Totally khoob dear 
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Posted: 2012-06-09T07:54:54Z
Very touching didi...thanks a lot for this beautiful postSmile...really lovable Embarrassed...keep rocking with your beautiful and unique posts..ClapClap
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Posted: 2012-06-09T07:58:58Z
wow this is awesome ClapClapClapClapClap
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Posted: 2012-06-09T07:59:40Z

Amazing poem! Jst WOW!~ClapClapEvery line just oozed the essence of RaYa's love for me!

Its your creation? Then I am your fan!

Missing those RaYa moments now:(

Thanks for such a great Post! Do keep making more!Thumbs Up

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Posted: 2012-06-09T08:03:39Z
woot woot... Well done poetess...! :)

Loved these lines to the core...

Love will ease all that's wrong Lets hold to it and just be strong...

Aha... I'm always amazed at how much effect RaYa have had on me!
M on d go... Will come back 2 say more... Jus couldnt wait 2 tell u dat loved it...
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Posted: 2012-06-09T08:04:08Z
Originally posted by naznin17

Beautiful poem! Heart
Thanks Nazin..Embarrassed
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