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Auroni.92 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
That ws beautifully written..
Loved their first convo nd dnt know why i feel this is their rebirth..lol..but he indeed knows a lot abt her...can wait to know how!!
Cont soon...
Zehnaseeb thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
the update as usual is fantastic👏👏 you have still managed to keep the mystery intact without making it even the least bit boring which is huge👏👏😃 the first convo between the two couldnt have been better👍🏼👍🏼 you struck the right cord there, theres a hint of attraction from both sides without it being a love at first sight thing which i hate😆 I love the way you're developing mayank's character; its mysterious in a good way👍🏼 the bonding between the three is already fantastic😃 mona doesnt even need to come nupur fits in better🤣🤣🤣 the paintings i can guess what you'l write there since i know you really well😆 
thanks for the pm🤗 keep up the fab work its amazing😃
crazymayurian thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is going to be really interesting
--Ruchi-- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update shubhu...why Mayank does not want to show his paintings?
he is making himself mysterious...continue soon. 
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am back with the update guys!!!😃

i would like to make it clear that i have never visited any tea plantation so my

 account of it may have some mistakes. 😆😆 i request all of you to take it as  literary licence & bear with me.😉😆

again the bit in pink is Nupur's dream.
  



                                                        Part-4



          *  They stood on the deck of a house which opened up to the beach. 

  She looked at the diamond on her finger shooting sparks in the light of 

setting sun.yes!!! she was engaged & was so happy that she felt giddy . She 

looked at him ,he stood at the table that held a champagne bucket & the 

bouquet of blush pink roses he had brought for her.though he gave his full 

attention to popping open the champagne ,she could see joy in his deep 

eyes,his body language. the cork opened with a muffled pop & he poured 

the champagne in two flutes. he offered one to her & they toasted each 

other saying *to us!!!* 

she sipped a little champagne then put it aside , then put her arms around 

his neck. hugging him she put her head on his chest, he held her close with 

one arm. 

"you know ,i really don't need this champagne , i am drunk with joy." she 

said. He smiled at her words ,sipping a bit from his flute.

" how do you manage to do it every time?? how did you decide on this 

setting ,this place ?? how did you know i will love it??" she said in a muffled 

voice as her face was hidden in his chest.

He put aside his flute then & holding her closer raised her face to look in her 

eyes.  " i plan on doing this only once in my life,so it damn be perfect. " he 

said in an amused voice. her eyes widened & she scuffed him on his chest.

now he laughed out aloud," were you expecting some filmy,cheesy reply 

princess?? sorry to disappoint you."  " no my lord!! " ,she teased back," i 

know you are incorrigible."  They held each other close & laughed .*

their laughter rang in Nupur's ears ,she smiled in her sleep & hugged a 

pillow close.        

Nupur came down to the dining room & saw Mayank ,Shilpa aunty were 

already there.                

 
 She greeted them & settled down to have 

her tea. she was feeling strangely euphoric ,*may  be it is the effect of that 

dream *she thought.Nupur stole a glance at Mayank & saw he was 

watching her with those deep intense eyes. she could not bear the  intensity 

in them & looked away. 
            
 " what are your plans for the day Nupur beta ?? " asked Shilpa. " i 

am going out for the day for a fund raiser committee meeting & will be 

back by evening. you can either stay here or go with Mayu . he will show 

you around our tea plantation."  Nupur perked up at that. " i would love to 

visit the plantation ,if its alright with Mayank." she said . Mayank gave a 

little shrug & said " by all means. you can come with me . we will leave in 

another 30 mins . wear your most comfortable shoes.as we will have to 

walk quite a bit."
                              They started driving towards the plantation in a spiffy 

SUV.Mayank pointed out various things to Nupur. The awkwardness 

brought on by the eyelock on breakfast table was forgotten.Soon they 

reached the plantation. its was spread over a vast area , grown on slopes 

in neat rows. Mayank explained to her that the plants were kept waist high 

for easy plucking. he plucked a bud surrounded with two leaves . 

"this is what makes the tea leaves. These buds and leaves are called flushes. 

A plant will grow a new flush every seven to fifteen days during the 

growing season, and leaves that are slow in development always produce 

better flavored teas." informed Mayank." There are two major objectives in 

the processing of tea. The first is to preserve the tea by driving most of the 

moisture from the leaves. The second objective is to bring flavor out on the 

surface of the leaves so that it can transfer quickly to the water during the 

steeping process.  After picking, the green leaves are spread out  to wither 

between 12 to 18 hours. During the withering process, the leaves lose most 

of their moisture, becoming soft and pliable. This allows the leaves to be 

rolled without tearing. Rolling breaks the membranes of the leaves 

releasing the natural juices to collect on the surface of the leaf. After rolling, 

the leaves are kept into large, cool, humid rooms to ferment. The 

fermentation process produces essential oils from the natural juices. The 

essential oils give each black tea it's characteristic aroma and flavor. The 

fermentation process must be stopped at the point where the aroma and 

flavor of the tea have fully developed. This is done by firing the leaves in 

large ovens. The essential oils dry on the surface of the leaves and remain 

relatively stable until exposed to boiling water during infusion. 

now i will stop ,before you go cross eyed with all this information

overload." said Mayank laughing.

" no, no!! its really fascinating . " said Nupur smiling at Mayank.

" want to walk down the slope ??" asked Mayank. " sure !!" said Nupur.

the women who were plucking the flushes gave them both curious glances.

           Nupur turned around to look up the slope as they reached the 

bottom  & gasped ,it was a beautiful sight . rows upon rows of  lush green 

tea plants interspersed with women in colorful clothes plucking the leaves. 

she clicked several photos . after a while they walked up the slope & 

Mayank took her around to show rest of the operation.

" we employ 50 people ,and hire more on temperory basis if needed". said 

Mayank. " these are their quarters ." Mayank pointed towards a group of 

cottages with sloped roof. some children were playing outside them . As 

soon as they spotted Mayank they shrieked with joy & ran towards him 

shouting ," Mayank bhaiyya!!!" 

 Nupur moved away to avoid the stampede. soon Mayank was surrounded 

by the children ,all of them talking to him at once. they were sharing their 

day at school with him , each child was vying for Mayank's attention. He 

too patiently listened to every one of them. This apparently was a routine 

occurence thought Nupur smiling at the group. Mayank then reached in his 

pocket & took out chocolates & started distributing them. 

Nupur was startled by a distressed cry & turned around to see a chubby 

little girl of about 4-5 years running towards the group ,afraid that she 

might not get her share of treat. suddenly she missed a footing& pitched 

forward ,starting to fall. Nupur immediately rushed to save the child ,she 

caught hold of the girl but twisted her ankle in the process. " ouch!! " she 

cried out. she had badly twisted her ankle & the pain was so sharp that she 

sat down where she stood. The girl whom Nupur saved got scared & started 

 crying. 

this got the attention of the group & they rushed towards them. some body 

picked up the girl from Nupur's lap . " whats wrong Nupur ?? " asked 

Mayank in a concerned voice. Nupur held  her hurt ankle ," i hurt my 

ankle badly ." she clenched her teeth against the pain. Mayank sat besides 

her & took a look at her foot removing her shoe. He moved it slightly 

earning a  gasp from Nupur. " i don't think its fractured Nupur. just badly 

twisted ." replacing the shoe on her foot. " can you get up ?? i will take you  

home ." Nupur tried to put weight on her leg & gasped in pain.  Mayank 

then asked one of the kids to get a chair , who ran away to comply.

Mayank helped Nupur to the chair. with in a few minutes Mayank brought 

the SUV where Nupur was & helped her in . they waved bye at the kids & 

started back home.
Edited by .SA. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update.I read it even before pm.You said u have never visited any tea plantation bt u described it very well.It shows u have done alot of research.Thank u for update
GOD BLESS U.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update Shubu😊..
Nupur's dream sequence was really beautiful and fascinating..Luv the way u maintain the mystery surrounding the connection between Mayur..
And the part on tea plantations..u have quite done some research on it..I learned something new today😆..The first chapter gave me an impression that Mayank is a reserved kinda guy..but he's really sweet...I was expecting Mayu to carry Nupur all the way till his vehicle..but that would've been too awkward for them at this stage esp Nupur with all the mysterious dreams she is having..waiting to know what happened..update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update shubhs!😃
well researchd... i felt as if i ws actually learning the tea processing!😆

gopi06 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely updt
loved nupur's beautiful dream
cont soon
thanks for the pm
Faria. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update.very nice