Abhiya ff:Fading Darkness.NEW THREAD LINK PG 1 - Page 12

Originally posted by: koli97

nice start...plzzz pm ur update...interesting...😊

thank u dear.glad u like it😊..will surely pm u

Originally posted by: shria

awsome update tora..😃 lots of mystery😉upate soon😛

thanx shria..yup..there r a lot of mysteries😊

Originally posted by: anjali0111

awesome update!!!

you explained every character very well. thanx anji. 😊

so chand n abhay wants to take revenge from dobriyals using pia...but i guess pia is not arnab n madhu's  daughter...right??? .hmm..u r sort of right..wont say more. 
n arjun is responsible for alisha's death but i think there is lot more to it. u r right here 
why chand doesn't consider  abhay as his son??? .that is another secre..a shocking one..u will know soon.. 😉

very interesting story...continue soon

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That was a very good insight.
Every c toharacter apart from Piya seems have something to hide
Piya is an innocent going to get cross fire,
continue soon Tora,
Loved this one

Originally posted by: Eowyn

That was a very good insight.
Every c toharacter apart from Piya seems have something to hide
Piya is an innocent going to get cross fire,
continue soon Tora,
Loved this one

thanx nidha.😊..yup they all have secrets to hide..

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ahh...tht was a fantastic update dear..👏
So abhay pia met atlast! Bt there meeting was quite diffrnt !!! 😳 oops abhay was so rude! Bt that's his signature style!!! Poor pia! Dosnt knws dat is wud b prince is dark!!!
hm..abhay hates nt nly arjun bt pia as well and pia cn sense it too!! Hm..wat will abhay do next? Will he directly ask for pia's hand? 😉 o..i knw i am gettng impatient lol bt i want to see their relatinshp moving fast! 😉 as i love dis arrogant abhay and his hate missions, which always end up into love missions actually!! 😆 😉 jombe bhalo!!! M too xcited!!!
bt donno y i hav a feeling arjun is nt bad at heart nd may b he hasnt dne anythng! Mayb its all a big misunderstandng!! And so am already feeling bad for hm,cz if pia gets hurt arjun too will feel the blow!!! Though i myt b wrong!
Damn tora ur updat made me emotinl! And i so dnt lik gettng emotional!!
Bt y is madhu so mad at pia? Wats the reasn? Is it coz of chand's wife?so am i on the ryt path? 😕
A/w.. Update soon awaitng the nxt chappy! And ya y is the updat so small? Mak it two pages next time! 😉 😛
Edited by lost_in_love - 11 years ago

Nice update. I liked Abhiya's meeting. At first I thought Piya might think Abhay's angry because she called him bhai but she realised he doesn't like her. I feel bad for Piya she has been crying so much on her birthday because of Madhu and then Abhay hurt her too. Cont soon n thx for pm:)Edited by .tanu. - 11 years ago

whoa nice abhiya meeting.. abhay is cold very much cold but his behavior someware passionate. and intense.. awesome update tora.. 

Well tora, that was a beautiful bit of writing. I really liked how you portrayed abhay and piya's emotions here. But i wonder ... Was Arjun really the bad guy that Abhay thinks he is?