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Jyo.

@Jyo.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Dark-Hues

@Dark-Hues

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

Reserved! 🤗

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God! This is something really really so excruciating and dipped in the poignancy of love and devastation. I really never want Khushi to walk away from his life , though yet my mindset flickers and says what if it gets a shape of loneliness , 'coz they're star crossed. But its true even if to hate , even if to rip each other , even if to whimper , even if to humiliate still they're incomplete souls without one another. THEY ARE DESTINED TO BE.

Just a few verses of mine :

I can't easily forget the pain I have in me

Can you hear my silent calling
Can you taste my soul tears ?
Do you know how much i love you?

I took my walls down for you

Because my heart is bleeding now
Love is lost to the gushes
Everlasting loneliness is my darkness.

My love for you ; standstill and breathing

Tweety, you've written it so beautifully. 🤗

Love the song so much. <33

Edited by PinkCinderella - 13 years ago

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

that was so emotional

khushi's thoughts were written very beautifully

arnav again believed shyam😡

nice one

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

res!😉

*edited*

Hey,

Thanks for the wonderful OS.

I Love this song and am so happy that you used it. <3

You wrote it out amazingly well.👏

Loved It..!!😊

lOve,

.aNaMiKa.

😛

Edited by ArshiRaiguptha - 13 years ago

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Manal Ali

@.YixingsManal.

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

"Khushi, I can't... I won't be able to live without you. I won't..." He whispered, his voice hoarse. She looked at him, smiling still, her voice dripping with sarcasm as she spoke. "You survived without me before I came into your life, I am sure you will continue to live now as well."

OMG OMG u know thru out i was like this' 😔 ' Jyo HOW Beautifully it was written ! how well My ALL time Fav Song was used <3 ! i could actually feel khushi's sarcasm ! but WITH LOADZ Pain :( !! how ASR is begging her :( !! but amazing man :(

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

This was *sigh* beautiful! <3 it really was, it was a surprise to see that you write as well as create siggies! 😆 I don't know why but I'm really feeling the sad sad OS's nowadays! 😳 But anyway lets come to the song first! FLIPPIN AMAZING RIGHT? I love their music anyway but that song was really nice! one republic are an amazing band, and how you incorporated the song into the music was really good, the individual segments weren't awkward but the flowed quite nicely and now coming to the actual OS I like this Khushi, 😃 I think in a way she needs to turn into something like this in order for Arnav to realise what he is missing, because right now he isn't missing much 😆 And Arnav, poor poor Arnav. The whole thing was capture magnificently. The Khushi bits against Arnav's were b e a u t i f u l! <3

-Aashifa 😃

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

so emotional dear.i think that there is a blast on the way on the show too.arnie will again misunderstand khushi and then she would walk out of his life.when arnie knows the truth,he would have to try like hell to bring khushi back(just my opinion.but don't know what the cvs have planned)

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

What is all this flawlessness? :|

I love it, I really do, but I have to study <3 I actually want to see some of this angst in this show :P

ILY TWINOOO :D And this is as flawless as you are bb ;)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome os loved the song thats one of my fav loved the os well written even in the end he still did not trust her he really did not deserved her thanks for the pm