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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

gud girl

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kriyaanshmahima

@kriyaanshmahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

kaisa kaam???

u going kya ??? 😭

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kriyaanshmahima

@kriyaanshmahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

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Heyaa guys..!!!

umm its mahima... yaad hun na...??

a big sorry guys for nt updating this long...

well i have my reasons too...

actualyafter holidays i felt sick and moreover i hurt my leg badly dat it got fractured.

ab bhi its nt fyn but mom allowed me to take my lappy..

ask my sissy. me toh ek nanhi si kali... hamesha bimaar padh jaati hun...

well im gonna b active BUT till d end of september updates will b less...

sorry but exams are up.!!!

from 12 our pracs are starting and from 17 SA1.

So excuse us both for this...

Opps main toh bhul hi gayi dat i have to update

well here u all go

P.s. - do read d last chappy before reading it. i noe u all must have lost d track of d story 😳

P.P.S - See guys i know u all are confused that why kriya hates to see anything related to her mom. the answer is really very easy that b'coz of smriti's decision kriya had left the 2 most imp. things of her life which affected her a lot. so after loosing her memory she still doesnt feel attached to her mom and hates seeing her b'coz theres always a fear inside her that she will snatch some other imp. thing from her life too. soo its the only reason for her hatred

Part 4

Finaly after an hour kriya wake up... the first one to enter her room was swayam...

Swayam - hey you fyn na kritz...???

Kriya - umm ya sam im fyn...no need to worry...

Swayam - what happened ?

Kriya - umm nothing...as usual flashes...

Swayam - as of...?

Kriya - umm

Swayam - mujhse chupaayegi ?

Kriya - aisa nahi hai swayam... wo kya hai ki when i came to my room i was getting flashes as such food figh and a girl and a boy in fore exit... so i sat near the bed but then everything balck out...

Swayam - its kk...araam kar le... btw u didnt met my friends yet na...?

Kriya - yup tune nahi milvaaya

Swayam - aww chal ruk laata hun sabko

he said giggling..and called all in...

Swayam - well isse mil ye reyaansh hai. v all call him rey.. this is sharon neha vicky ...

and he introduced everyone to kriya... meanwhile swayam got a call and aashi entered. as soon as she saw her she just went and hugged her..!!!

Kriya - ahh..!!! kamini chod mujhe..

Aashi - kya yaar itna kyun daraati hai mujhe tu..

Kriya - WTH leave me... maarne ka plan hai kya..?

Aashi - uff ab main apni behen ko pyaar bhi nahi kar sakti...

there rey and swayam stood (diff. places)

rey was smiling seeing kriya's smile and pout and swayam..!!! ah he was smiling to see her bestie and his sister soo close to eachother...

Finally in d evening all left to their respective room.

Kriya got mix up with everyone...rey was still in her room...

Rey - you still have it...

Kriya - what is it rey..?

Rey - umm this...

He said pointing at a showpiece...

Kriya - dont noe why but its soo close to me.. but aapko iske baare mein kaise pata...

Rey - umm nothing... i once saw it with swayam..

Kriya - oh...!!!

Rey - i should leave.. its late.. good night... sweet dreams baatcutter

He said the last word so that no one could hear that but kriya did..

After rey left her room.

Kriya - baatcutter...???

She said closing her eyes...

She again got some flashes but this time much clea then before...

a boy and a girl... both dressed in black and the girl kissing the boy...

it was really very clear and she could identify that d boy was rey but who was that girl...??? what is it..???

is it something realted to her past...???

or is it something else...???

uff she was having soo many questions in her mind but NO ANSWERS...

Days passed... kriyaansh were coming close with each passing day...

Finally the day arrived for which we was waiting since a long time..

He took kriya to a place beautifully decorated wilth her fav flowers white and red balloons with smoothe romantic music in the background..

Kriya smiled and both went and have their dinner...

After dinner..

Rey move forward and bowed infront of her and forwared his hand...

Rey - shall we..?

He said looking at her face opps correction.. looking in her eyes

Kriya sliped her hand in his hand and both started to sway on the rythum of the soft romantic music.. with each turn rey brought her more close to him...

He spoke in her ears - i love u baatcutter...!!!

and he kissed on her nape...

Kriya blush slightly and replied "I love u too rey..!!!"

Rey pulled back and give her a butterfly kiss

Thats it..!!!

All her memories started to flow.

It was as if she was seeing a movie... the movie of her life..!!!!

She closed her eyes as tears made their way out...

Rey looked at her confused...

Kriya - chabilal...

she said opening her eyes yet tears were not stoping...

Rey looked at her totally shocked and d very next second he slapped her...!!!!

Kriya - rey im sorry..!!!

Rey - ye is liye nahi tha baatcutter that u lied ye is liye tha coz u forgot me 😭

Kriya - rey im sorry...

Rey - promise phir kabhi nahi bhulogi..?

Kriya - promise...

And they hugged eachother tight..!!!!

phew finish...!!!

finaaly his SS comes to an end

hush thak gayi main

now long comments please

- Mahima

Edited by kriyaanshmahima - 12 years ago

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: kriyaanshmahima

u will get it soon maybe tomorrow

will update this one

and is it our destiny will b continued with a change.

moreover a surprise w8ing 4 all of u from me and sissy 😃

@ sissy - kk 😃

ok:)