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s s nair

@..SSNAIR..

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

😊nice one, well written... 😊

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

This was really very touching. Its a father's feeling who has lost his precious daughter & he is helpless. I hope God will hear his prayers & plea & help his titliya 2 b back home safely.

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

I have goose-bumps! goose-fricking-bumps! this was too good! way beyond words, the essence of both Khushi and Shashi was bought to light! I absolutely adored this :D really! This was an amazing realization of Khushi-Shashi.

*Tears up*

-Aashifa

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@boyznaka

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

This was so, so very beautiful. The song makes me cry! I loved it! :) 🤗🤗 👏

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

It was so beautifully written !
You made me cry yaar !

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Wow gargee u made it entirely different way thought it was arnav...but it was shashi...intense one...

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sugar_bag

@sugar_bag

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

i am your fan gargee..cv's should take few tips from you..

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

An awesome song used beautifully, Gargee. . . .

The bond between a father and his daughter, is such an intriguing one, filled with so much love. . . . .

Thankuuu! For writing such an amazing piece. . . .

And thanks for the pm too!

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

U knw wat..i was listening to dis song wen i logged in to IF n saw n read ur os..d song cdnt hv been more apt..vry touching..heart wrenching..desperate love of a father,eager to protect his little bird..
m really in need of tissues nw..
vry well written..hats off 4 ur brilliant work!

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Freakin god that was SO touching. Deeply emotional. I feel like I've taken a tri[ to hell back. Shit the helplessness and the darkness, I felt like it penetrated me too. To lose your daughter...

VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN! this is a magnificent masterpiece. God, it's amazing/.

Yaar, I hope you can pay for all the tissues I've used. I've reread it like 10 times already and each time the emotions still kill me. BRILLIANT! I LOVED IT!!!

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