FF: Har Pal Ka Intezaar... Part 16 (Pg. 72) (30.6) - Page 56

Suman

@_CandyCream_

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow! We're back to the present!! Awesome update!! ⭐️ It was soo romantic! ❤️ Rain romance was just beyond words!!😍 They really should have a rain sequence in the show too! 😳 The songs selected were so beautiful! (Thanks for the links!)

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

wow... full pf romance.thanks

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Chitra RaviKiran

@chitloner

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: azk92

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Thanks Chitra Di


Oh yes, it's coming in the next update lol. 


Sorry, might not be what u expect cuz there's some pretty hot stuff out there right now and I am still a shy writer..You know with age and embarrassment and weak theory and practicals and all hahaha...And i like romance more..😉..Tried my best LOL. Let's see how it turns out.. Will post it later! Hang tight!

I am sure it will be great. Romance doesn't mean outright s**. It can be something very sensible too.
Haven't read it yet. Will comment after reading.

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Punya

@PunyaS

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Oye Amby!! ye kya tha???!! heart attack degi mujhe!! LOL 😆 Its so damn hot here in delhi upar se you out with ur hottie update!! Uff!!! I need a cooler right now! 😆

Honestly speaking, I don't know where to start.. what to say..

You attempted this update very gracefuly.. Loved your depiction. You chose beautiful words to describe a beautiful scene. (I have read some of the hot ones in IF but couldn't digest them.. am too orthodox, I think..hahahha.) But you Amby, you have really given us a delicate and lovely piece. The way you brought out the passion and desire was subtle yet strong. It didn't hit me hard or made me squirm. Rather, I was flowing with the flow of your writing.

Really, marvelous first attempt at writing a passionate scene. LOVED it!!

And yeah.. dedication to all of us.. you made me so proud girl!! get ready to sign autographs soon.. hahahaha..

Take care and god bless ya!!

🤗

P.S. - I totally agree with MP. ur update makes the original look...ummm... BLEAHHH!! 😆

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LalitaLahiri

@LalitaLahiri

Senior Member

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amby,

Beyond a certain point, cant really respond. What do I comment? ... I would rather say, that I dont want to write anything... after the nonsense we're getting from ekta...thsi was like..heaven...and I want to shut off my laptop and get back to RaYa dreams..made possible by YOU.

God bless (BigS style 😉)

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Anamika

@Sakshi_Deewani

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

hey Amby.. sorry for late reply.. this is my reply for part.. 15... i hv no words to praise u yaar👏👏 this is magical... o maar gaye yaar deewane... tere lover purane... die hard fan tere hai... tu hi kadar na jane😆 bravo babe... running to read part.16😳

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Anamika

@Sakshi_Deewani

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

read part.16.. before commenting i hv a query.. that Anu in the names u mentioned... is it by chance me??😕 ok now about da update... wooohhhooo...!! that was one long love making scene gal🤪 very hot☺️☺️ yet very aesthetically written😍😍 loved every bit of it... u should write scenes lyk this more often... u knw wht i mean??😉😆 keep it up yaar...👍🏼 waiting for the next part😳

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey that was awesome and a superb update... 😊

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name2saakshi

@name2saakshi

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

sizzling hot passionate in i love raya super lovely update

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crystal30

@crystal30

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Angie🤗u made my weekend!!! Way too romantic, absolutely Raya way..loved it, loved it

Perfectly written, wht a way to start the b'day😳

Thank you

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