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Posted: 11 years ago

v nyc part... love to read hw ram take care of priya... πŸ˜³


thank u so much 4 the pm & sorry 4 late reply... love u di... πŸ€—



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: salsaly


v nyc part... love to read hw ram take care of priya... πŸ˜³


thank u so much 4 the pm & sorry 4 late reply... love u di... πŸ€—




Thank you Saly!!! Love the pic as usual! 
Postign the next part right now! 
Love you too and no worries, read it whenever you have time! I know you'r a busy gal πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thank you Saly!!! Love the pic as usual! 
Postign the next part right now! 
Love you too and no worries, read it whenever you have time! I know you'r a busy gal πŸ˜Š


welcome di... πŸ€—
if possible will read ryt after u update... waiting !!!


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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys!

Here is Part 6! We are still in flashback mode lol.  But I'm sure you guys will absolutely LOVE this part.  I know it won't ever happen and it's a little cheesy lol but I think it's my favourite part yet! I hope you guys like it! Don't forget to like/comment!! 

ENJOY!


Part 6

*Flashback continues*


Ram drives for about 5 minutes before he realizes Priya isn't wearing her seat belt.  He stops the car on the side of the road and looks at her angrily.

Priya: Kya hua? Aap itne gusse se kyun dekh rahe hain? 

Ram: Tum apna seat belt kyun nahi pehni ho? 

Priya: Mujhe bahut irritate kar raha hai.  I don't like it.  

Ram: I don't care.  Theek se pehno. 

Priya: No Ram, please.

Ram comes really close, leans over her and reaches over to pull the seatbelt.  He looks her straight in the eye and locks the seatbelt in place. 

Ram: I'm sorry Priya lekin its not only about you anymore.  Ab tumhari ek nayi zimmedari hai aur main tumhe apne aur hamare bacche ki jaan khatre mein nahi daalne doonga.  Sorry. 

Priya looks away and faces the window.  How had she done that? Why had she done that? 

Ram notices her reaction and the guilt in her eyes.  He turns her face to look at him but her eyes are still lowered.  

Ram: Priya, meri taraf dekho.  (She looks at him).  Ab tumhe apna khayal rakhna padega.  Main nahi chahta ke kabhi bhi tumhe aur hamare hone wale bacche ko kuch ho.  Main nahi jee sakta tumhare beger.  Tum toh yeh jaanti ho na.  

She nods 

Priya: I'm sorry Ram. 

He smiles and starts driving again.

Priya: hum kahan jaa rahe hain? Yeh Lonavala ka raasta nahi hai.

Ram: It's a surprise 

Priya: Bataye na

Ram shakes his head:  Tum thodi der so kyun nahi jaati?  Waise bhi tumhe araam ki zarurat hai.

Priya: Nahin, mujhe neend nahi aati.

She pouts and looks out the window again.  Ram puts his hand on top of hers and smiles to himself. He continues to drive.  Within a few minutes, Priya falls asleep with her head tilting towards him.  Ram looks at his sleeping wife and smiles again. 

Ram: Priya, tum bilkul pagal ho.  Lekin that's why I love you. 

He makes a stop at a store along the way to pick out a gift for Priya.  After all, she was going to be the mother of his child.  He needed to get her a nice gift!  He lets Priya stay sleeping in the car and comes back 10 minutes later.  Then he continues to drive.  After a few of hours, they reach their destination. 

Ram: Priya, utho.  Wake up.

He shakes her hand a little.  She doesn't budge.  He leans over and rests his forehead on hers.  Priya feels his warm breath on her face and instantly opens her eyes to find herself looking straight into his dark chocolate brown eyes.  She loses herself in his eyes and smiles a dreamy smile. 

Ram, whispers: Hum paunch gaye hai.  Lekin tumhe apni aankhen band karni padegi okay?

She nods and closes her eyes.  Ram comes to the passenger side and helps her up.  He stands behind her and keeps his warm hands on her eyes.  He tells her where to walk.  When he has positioned her exactly where he wants her to be, he removes his hands from her eyes and encircles his arms around her waist.  He nuzzles her neck.  

Ram: Ok, Apni aankhen kholo Priya.

He watches her smiling, while she opens her eyes and a wide smile flashes across her face.  They were standing at the Mah-Guj border looking at the sunset in front of them.  She looks down and sure enough, one foot was in Mah and the other was in Guj.  She turns her face to slightly look at Ram.

Priya: Ram, thank you! Lekin hum yahan kaise aaye.  Bahut door hai na.  Aur Lonavala toh wahan doosri taraf hai!

Ram lets go of her and comes and stands in front of her.  He kneels down in front of her on one knee, holds her by the waist and pulls her a little closer.  He moves her saree a little and kisses her bare stomach very gently, right on her belly button.  His warm soft lips against her bare skin sends chills down Priya's spine.  She feels herself losing her senses and puts her hand on the back of his head for support.  She runs her fingers through the hair on the back of his head. 

Ram, while looking up at her: Kyun ki main yeh jagah hamare bacche ke saath share karna chahta tha.  Hum kuch dinon mein Australia jaane wale hai.  Aur main nahin jaanta kitne din ke liye hum log wahan honge.  Lekin main hamare bacche ko saari jagah dikhana chahta tha jahaan hamari yaadein judi hai.  (Then he looks down and gently presses his cheek against her bare stomach).  Aap sun rahe ho na?  Yeh wahi jagah hai, jahan main aapki Mama ko leke aaya tha unki ek wish poori karne.  Woh chahti thi ke woh ek hi time pe do alag alag jaga mein khadi ho, jaise ke abhi.  Abhi, aap Mah aur Guj ke theek beech mein khade hai.  Woh hamare zindagi ke sab se khubsoorat 6 din the.  Aur ab woh bhi badal ne wala hai kyun ki aap jo hamari zindage mein aane waale hai. 

He kisses her stomach once more, sending more chills down Priya's spine, and then stands up.  Then Priya puts her hand on her stomach. 

Priya, while looking at her hand on her stomach: Aap jaante hai, yahi woh jagah hai, jahaan maine pehli baar realize kiya tha ke main aap ke Papa se kitna pyar karti hu.  Kyunki uss ne ghanton tak drive kiya, sirf meri ajeeb wish poori karne.  Mujhe ehsaas dilaya ke main bhi special hoon.  Iss duniya mein koi hai jo sirf mere liye bana hai.  Sach kaha aap ke Papa ne, woh hamari zindagi ke sab se khubsoorat 6 din the.  Aur ab, aap ke aane se woh sab kuch badal ne wala hai.  Ab hamari zindagi mein aur bhi khubsoorat pal honge. 

She looks up at Ram: Thank you Ram, Australia se pehle mujhe yahan laane ke liye.  

She stands on her tippy toes, holding his collar for support and plants a kiss on his cheek.  He puts his arms around her and pulls her closer into a hug.  

A couple of minutes later, she separates herself and turns around to look at the view again.  Ram stands next to her, takes her hand, their fingers interlocked and holds it up to his heart.  They stand there for a while, both slightly teary-eyed, enjoying the view and remembering the last time they were here.  

He helps her back to the car, one hand firm around her waist and her hand in the other.  And then gets in on the driver side.  He sits for a minute and looks at Priya.  

Priya becomes a little uncomfortable: Kya?

Ram signals her to put on her seatbelt with his eye.  She sighs and puts it on.  He smiles to himself and starts driving back. 

Priya: Ab hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Ram :Ek aur surprise 

And he winks at her.  They drive, enjoying the silence between them.  After a couple of hours, they reach their next destination.  By now, it's really dark out. 

Priya: Ram, hum kahan aa gaye?

Ram leans over and whispers in her ear: Meri next favourite jagah.

He gets out of the car and goes to the passenger side and opens the door.  He extends his hand to Priya, who hesitates for a second wondering what he is upto, but then gives in and takes it.  He holds her hand and leads her to a secluded area on the beach.  Priya's eyes widen as she sees whats in front of her.  Set up on the beach, was a candle light romantic dinner for 2.  And a little farther, off to the side, was a blanket set up on the sand. 

Priya walks ahead to look at the view.  She could see and hear the waves crashing on the sand.  Ram is mesmerized by her beauty in the moonlight.  He is watching her while she stands and looks at the view.  She turns to look at Ram with a teary smile.  

Priya: Yeh sab aap ne kiya? 

Ram just smiled.

Priya: Bahut khubsoorat hai! Thank you!!

Ram comes closer to her.  He kneels down on one knee and extends his hand to her.  She gives her hand to him and he slips a beautiful ring on her finger and kisses her hand.  He stands up.

Priya: Ram'. Yeh.

Ram: Ab meri khubsoorat biwi aur meri poori zindagi ke saath saath tum mere hone wale bacche ki Maa bhi ho na, toh ek gift toh banta hai.

He extends his hand to her again.

Ram: Kya main apni khubsoorat biwi aur mere bacche ki Maa ke saath dance kar sakta hu?

Priya gives him her hand. 

Priya: Lekin music?

Ram: Priya, apni aakhen band kar ke dhyan se suno (She closes her eyes).  Tumhe kya sunai deta hai? 

Priya: Lehron ki awaaz.  

Ram: Toh iss se accha music hume kahan se milega? 

Priya opens her eyes and looks into his eyes.  She blushes a little and lowers her eyes.  He comes a little closer and holds her by the waist.  She puts her hand on his shoulder.  He holds her really close and they start swaying to the rhythm of the ocean.  He tightens his grip a little and pulls her even closer.  She rests her head on his chest and he rests his cheek on her hair.  The scent of her hair was making him dizzy.  Both of them were enjoying this closeness. 

Ram: Priya'

Priya: hmmm'.

Ram: Tumhe Choti ki birthday party yaad hai?

She nods, without lifting her head.  He felt it. 

Ram: Tumhari wish yeh thi na ke main salsa seekhun? 

She nods again, still in the same position. 

Ram: Lekin tab main tumhare liye nahin, tumhare saath dance karna chahta tha.  Toh aaj, thank you, ke tumne meri wish poori ki.  

She looked up at him, touched by what he said.  He had never said that to her before.  They danced for a few more minutes, lost in each other's eyes, enjoying the closeness between them.  

Then Ram led her to the dinner table. He made her sit down and then went and sat down himself.  She opened the cover on her plate to find a bowl of soup.  She looked at Ram and made a face. 

Priya: Kya Ram, itna acha aur romantic dinner aap ne set up kiya aur yeh khana laaye? Soup?

Ram: Sorry Priya, aaj se tumhe bahut strict diet khana hai.  Doctor's orders.  Uss ne kaha light khana hai. 

Priya put the lid back on.  Nahin, main nahi khane waali.

Ram: Come on Priya.  Agar tumne yeh khalia, mere paas ek aur surprise hai tumahare liye. (And he winks at her) 

Priya pouted and picked up her spoon and ate the soup in silence, making faces after every bite.

Ram smiled at his wife's childishness.  

After they ate, they decided to take a long walk on the beach.  In the moonlight, they walked hand in hand along the water.  After a few minutes of walking, they came across Priya's favourite kulfi stand, whom Ram had paid to set up there.  She looked at Ram and smiled excitedly. 

Priya: Ram dekho! Kulfi! Mujhe khani hai!

Ram laughed Surprise!

She hugged him tightly and then approached the vendor.  She picked out exactly what she wanted and so did Ram.  They stood there, watching the water and eating their kulfis.  Then they walked back to the car.  Priya was heading to the car when Ram held her hand.  

Ram: Aaj ke liye, ek aur cheez plan ki hai maine.  

He led her to the blanket.  She looked at him with a puzzled expression.

Ram: Taare nahin gin ne?

Priya smiled and hugged him again.  He helped her lie down and then lied down next to her.  He took her in his arms and she put her head on his chest and they both looked up at the stars.  It wasn't about counting them anymore.  It was about enjoying the process now.  Lying down, on the beack, in each other's arms, gazing up at the open sky and stars.  What could be better than that?  They laid there in each other's arms silently for a while, enjoying the sound of the waves.  

Priya: Ram, aakhri baar aap ne mere haath apne dil pe rakh ke pucha tha ke mujhe kuch mehsoos hua aur maine kaha tha ke mujhe aap ki dil ki dhadkan mehsoos ho rahi hai. Lekin ab, mujhe lagta hai ke mujhe apne haath se zyada, apne sar aap ke dil pe rakh ke aap ki dil ki dhadkan sunna aur mehsoos karna accha lagta hai. 

With that she closes her eyes and focuses on the rhythm of his heartbeat.  He smiles, tightens his grip around her, and kisses her on her head.  They continue to lay there for a few more minutes.  

Ram: Ab chalein? Bahut raat ho gayi hai? Lonavala bhi toh jaana hai. 

Priya nods and sits up.  She is about to get up when he stops her.  

He lies down in her lap, with his head facing her tummy.  Priya is surprised by his action but she doesn't say anything.  He moves her saree out of the way a little, exposing her bare waist again, and again kisses her right on the belly button.  She puts her hands around his head, caressing his hair.  

Ram: Meri choti gudiya, yeh woh jagah hai jahan hum aaye the aap ki Mama ki pehli wish poori karne.  Usse taare ginne the.  Aur phir woh chahti thi ke main dance karna sikhun.  Yeh beach, hamari ek aur favoruite jaga hai.  Aap ki Mama ko yahan aa ke kulfi khana bahut pasand hai.  Aaj hum ne aap ko woh saari jagah dikhayi jahaan hamari yaadein judi hai.  Tab ek aur wish bhi thi jo adhoori reh gayi thi.  Aaj woh wish bhi poori ho gayi hai.  Aur woh wish hai aap.  Aap Mama ki akhri wish the jo main tabhi poora nahi kar saka.  Lekin aak woh aakhri wish poori ho gayi hai. 

Priya froze.  A couple of tears rolled down her cheek as she saw the change in her man.  How could he care for her and love her so much?  The guilt of the whole divorce drama came back to her mind.  Even though she had done it for him, it still hurt her every bit to say all the nasty things she said. 

He kissed her belly button again and then sat up and looked at her.  She had tears in her eyes.  

Ram: Priya, aaj maine tumhari saari wishes ko ek baar phir se poora kiya.  Tab ek wish adhoori reh gayi thi.  Tum kisi ko zindagi de na chahti thi na? Tum Maa ban na chahti thi?  Aaj woh wishlist ke saare wishes poore ho gaye hai.  Thode dinon mein, hum Australia jaane wale hai.  Main nahi jaanta hum kitne din wahan honge, lekin main chahta tha ke hum yeh saari jagah ek baar phir hoke aaye, jahaan humne hamari zindagi ke sab se khubsoorat pal bitaaye hai.  Yeh wohi jagah hai jahaan hum ne hamare rishte ki shuruaat kit hi, pehle dost ban kar, aur phir sahi maayne mein pati-patni ban kar.  Hum ne kaha tha na ke who 6 din hamari zindagi ke sab se khubsoorat pal the.  Lekin un wishes mein se, yeh (he puts his hand on her tummy), tumhari aakhri wish ko poora karne mein, thoda waqt laga tha, lekin yehi sab se khubsoorat hai.

More tears stream down Priya's face.  She is totally speechless.  How could someone love her so much? She just doesn't know what to say. 

Priya, chokes out: I love you Ram, and hugs him tight. 

Ram: I love you too Priya.  He kisses her on the head and holds her for a few more minutes. 

Ram: Ab chalein?

She nods and he helps her get up.  He holds her hand and leads her back to the car.  They drive off to their final destination of the night; the lonavala farmhouse.  

After a long day, Priya falls asleep on the way with a smile on her face.  When they reach, he looks at his peacefully sleeping wife.  He doesn't want to wake her up so he lifts her in his arms and carries her inside.  He takes her to the room and puts her down gently on the bed.  He plants a soft kiss on her forehead and another on her belly button.  

Ram: Goodnight Gudiya, Goodnight meri choti Gudiya.  

He puts the comforter over her and goes to change.  Then he comes out and gets into bed next to her.  Priya automatically repositions herself and cuddles close to Ram.  She sleeps with her head on his chest.  He closes his arms around her and holds her tight.  He kisses her head and then he reaches over and turns off the lamp.  They both sleep in each other's arm after a long day full of reliving their old memories...

Edited by azk92 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Amber as usual. Excellent 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM Amby...awesome update...thanks for bringing back the old scenes...really superb...πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ‘
Edited by TVserialfreak - 11 years ago
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πŸ‘wow, so beautiful Amber. superb update, thank you, please update soonπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWW!!!! thats too good

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amby, this is too much yaar.. you are spoiling me!!

Priya wondering how can someone love her so much.. πŸ˜

Punya  wondering how can someone write so well? πŸ˜

Fab fab fab!! This revisiting of memories was the best update so far, Amby! πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
U r one in a million Amby. Beautifully completed the circle..