FF: Har Pal Ka Intezaar... Part 16 (Pg. 72) (30.6) - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jakther

Amby ji aur kitna tarpayo gi humein , main aur wait nahi kar sakti hu, please jaldi update de dou nah, meri intejar ki imtehaan maat lou,barna main apni ashli chehere pe aa jaungi, taab dekh lena ok, & it's a dhamki, sooo continue soon😆


Tu mujhe dhamki de gi? MUJHE?! LOL 🤣
now i will make you wait for sure hahaha. bach ke rehna. update main likh rahi hoon hahaha, yeh dhamki nahi chalegi. 
waise, whatever happened ot your FF.. Ram ki entry? Yaad hai? 😛 Jaldi se likhna shuru kar de warna i will stop posting 😛😉 Ab dekh kaun dhamki de ta hai 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh man!! I literally had tears reading this FF!! Its awesome Yaa!! Totally Love IT!! U are just too good Amby!! Seriously!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey everyone!!

Here is part 5! Still in flashback mode.  Sorry i know the medical stuff isn't entirely right, and i know I'm a pre-med student and i should know this stuff and I do but Ekta has really messed up my brain about med stuff in dramas and anything is possible LOL so bear with it hahaha.  Hope you all like it! Don't forget to like/comment! 

ENJOY!


Part 5

*Flashback Cont'd*


Ram immediately turns around and sees Priya standing by the gate, holding her stomach. 

Priya: Raaammm!! 

He rushes towards her, pushing through the crowd.  She feels dizzy and the room starts spinning.  Everything goes black.  She shuts her eyes tight and starts falling to the ground, unconscious, when Ram catches her in his arms.  He sits on the ground with her in his arms and taps her on the cheek. 

Ram: Priya, Priya utho, Kya hua Priya utho damn it.

She doesn't move.  With tears stinging his eyes, he picks her up in his arms and takes her to his car. He gently puts her in the back seat and drives to the hospital.  

At the hospital, he walks in carrying Priya, who is still unconscious.  He sees Natasha's doctor, the gynecologist, and tries to tell her what happened.  But he cannot speak. 

Ram: Doctor, Priya, airport, pet mein dard, behosh. 

Doctor: Mr. Kapoor, aap chinta mat kijiye, main unhe examine kar rahi hoon. 

Ram: Doctor, aap please kisi ko mat batayega ke main aur Priya yahaan aye the' 

Doctor: Theek hai Mr. Kapoor. Main kisi ko nahin bataungi.  

They get Priya on a stretcher and take her inside. The Doctor follows Priya to examine her.  They give her IV fluids and bring her back to consciousness and then run some more tests.  After a while, Priya is conscious, sitting in her bed.

Priya: Doctor, kya hua? Main yahaan kaise paunchi? Mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai? 

Doctor: Aap ke pati ne aap ko yahaan leke aaya.  Unho ne kaha ke aap airport pe behosh ho gayi thi 

Everything comes rushing back to Priya.  The divorce, her leaving, the tears.  And then the sudden pain in her stomach and how she just blacked out.  She put her hand on her stomach.  She has this new, unrecognizable feeling now.  Not a bad one, just a different one.  Like something good is about to happen.   

Priya, stammering: Dd..Doctor, mujhe kya hua tha? 

Doctor: Koi ghabrane ki baat nahi hai Priya.  In fact, khushi ki baat hai.  Congratulations, tum maa ban ne waali ho.  

Tears start rolling out of her eyes: Kya? Kya kaha aapne?

Doctor: Maine kaha ke tum Maa ban ne waali ho.  You're pregnant.  6 weeks.  Lekin is waqt tum bahut kamzor ho isiliye hume tumhe aaj raat yahin rakhna padega jab tak tumhari taakat wapas nahi aajati.  

Priya: Aapne Mr. Kapoor ko bataya hai? 

Doctor: Nahin, main tumhe pehle batane ka intezaar kar rahi thi.

Priya: Ok, aap please unhe kuch mat batayega.  Main khud bataungi

Doctor: Sure, main unhe andar bhej deti hoon.  Lekin tumhe araam karna padega Priya.  Aur stress bilkul nahi lena.  Already, tumhari pregnancy high risk hai tumhari umar ki waja se aur stress se tumhari aur bacche ki jaan ko khatra pad sakta hai.  Isiliye tumhe apna poora khayaal rakhna padega. 

Priya: Jee Doctor..

The doctor leaves the room.  She comes out to Ram, who is sitting on a chair outside with his chin resting on his folded hands, tears in his eyes, and looking tensed.  What if something happened to Priya, what would he do? How would he live?  She was his life damn it! Was it such a good idea to send her to Australia now? Of course it wasn't a good idea but they had to do it.  No, they didn't.  Maybe he should just hand everything over to Niharika and let her win. 

Just then, the doctor came out and Ram stood up immediately.  

Ram: Doctor, Priya kaisi hai? Woh theek to hai na? Kya hua usse? 

Doctor: Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai Mr. Kapoor.  Woh bilkul theek hai.  Bas thoda sa chakkar aa gaya tha shayad garmi ki waja se.  Aap usse mil sakte hai.  Usse hosh aagaya hai.  

Ram: Thank you Doctor. 

He enters the room to find Priya sitting in bed with an IV in her arm.  He squints seeing the IV, because he hated needles.  The thought of Priya needing to go through that made him upset.  

He comes and sits down on the stool beside her bed.  He takes her hand in both of his and kisses it and keeps it held up to his lips. 

Ram: Priya, tum theek to ho? Ab kaisa lag raha hai? Tum jaanti ho main kitna dar gaya tha? 

He looks down and tears start falling from his eyes. 

Priya, without saying a word, takes her hand out of his.  She lifts his chin and makes him look at her.  Then she wipes his tears.  She takes his hand and puts it on her stomach and puts her own hand on top of his.  Ram looks at his hand and then up at her and gives her a questioning look.  

Priya: Kuch mehsoos hua Ram?

Ram shakes his head.

Priya smiles: Lekin mujhe ho raha hai.  Mujhe iss ka hone ka ehsaas hai Ram.  Yeh hamara sapna hai, Ram, hamari pyaar ki nishani. 

Ram looks at her with a puzzled expression for a second before his eyes widen and a huge smile breaks out on his face. 

Ram: Sach Priya? 

She nods a teary smile.  He takes his hand back and gets up from the stool and sits on the edge of the bed.  He leans over towards her and takes her into his arms, his eyes filling with tears.  Tears of happiness this time.  He holds her tight.  Both of them in each others arms, tears of happiness, celebrating their new little bundle of joy on its way.  All of a sudden Ram remembers what had happened a few hours earlier.  The smile wipes off his face.  What were they going to do? He couldn't let her go to Australia alone!? No! He couldn't let her be on her own for even a second in this state.  He separates her from him and looks into her eyes.  They had a new glow in them now; a new added emotion, a new role and a new responsibility; as a mother.    

Ram: Priya, ab hum kya karenge? Main tumhe Australia akele nahin jaane de sakta. 

Priya: Ram, sab kuch theek ho jayega.  Main bilkul theek hoon.  Kuch nahi hoga mujhe.  Thode ghanton ki toh baat hai na, phir wahan par Maa aur Apeksha bhi honge.   

Ram: Nahi.  Bilkul Nahi.  Main tumhare saath chalunga.  

He brings his face down really close to hers, and looks deep into her eyes.  

Ram: Main tumhare saath har jitna ho sake rehna chahta hu Priya.  Main yeh khushi ke pal ko jeena chahta hu, tumhare saath.  Yeh hamara sapna hai na. 

He plants a soft kiss on her lips. 

Ram: Main kuch intezaam karta hu.  Lekin filhaal ke liye, tumhe araam ki bahut zarurat hai ok.  

He helps her lie down and kisses her on the forehead.  Then he plants a gentle kiss on her stomach.  Priya shivers a little and feels the butterflies in her stomach.  She smiles. His touch always made her react the same way.  It wasn't just about him and Priya anymore.  Now, he loved his unborn baby too.  And right now, he was taking birth inside of Priya. 

Ram: Main abhi aata hu.

Priya nods and Ram steps out to make a phone call.  First he calls the head of the company in Australia and tells them that he's coming there for a couple of months.  And If anyone asks, tell them there was a big problem that needed to be dealt with immediately.  Then he calls Niharika.  

Ram: Maa, mujhe aaj hi Australia jaana hai.  In fact, main abhi airport ke liye nikal raha hu.  Main Daljeet ko bata dunga mere liye kuch kapde aur doosri cheezon ka intezaam kar de.

Niharika: Kya? Kyun kya hua? Tum achanak kaise jaa sakte ho? I mean, Priya abhi abhi gayi hai aur tum? Acha kitne din ke liye jaa rahe ho. 

Ram closed his eyes as he said: Exactly.. Woh chali gayi.  Bas, khatam.  Chapter closed.  Wahan company mein kuch problem hai jisse abhi ke abhi handle karna padega.  Bahut serious problem hai aur kuch cheezein ko re-establish bhi karna padega.  Shayad ek ya do mahine lag jaaye.  Aur waise bhi, I need a break from Mumbai.  Mujhe thoda waqt chahiye mera dimaag saaf karne ke liye.  Main aap ko bata dunga jab main wahan paunch jaaoon.  Meri flight abhi ek ghante mein nikal ne waali hai. Mujhe jaana hai.  Main aap ko kuch dinon mein phone karunga.  

Niharika: Okay baby, apna khayaal rakhna. 

Ram: Bye

He hangs up the phone and comes back to Priya's room.  She was sleeping peacefully, closer to the one side of the bed, with one hand on her stomach and a small smile on her face.  He leaned down and planted another kiss on her forehead.  And then sat down on the stool next to the bed.  

Ram, in his thoughts: Thank you Priya.  Aaj tumne mujhe apni zindagi ka sabse badi khushi aur sabse bada taufa diya hai. 

He put one hand across her waist and rested his head on her stomach and fell asleep with a smile on his face.  

A few hours later, Priya woke up to find Ram asleep on her stomach, with his mouth slightly open.  She smiled and caressed his hair lightly.  She stayed in that position, so to not disturb him, and watched him sleep for the next few hours.  She loved watching him sleep.  He was so innocent and so peaceful while sleeping. 

The next day, Priya was released from the hospital.  The doctor approved their trip to Australia, provided Priya took care of herself and promised not take any stress.  Since she was still very weak, Ram decided to postpone the trip for a couple of days until she regained her strength.  Because they couldn't go home, or to any hotel, he decided that they would stay at their farmhouse in Lonavala for a couple of days, before taking a flight to Sydney.  He would be with her, every second, every step of the way.  He would take care of her.  

Ram helped her off the bed, with one hand firm around her waist and the other holding her hand.  They walked to his car and he helped her get in the front seat, and they set off on their journey'

To Be Continued...😉

Edited by azk92 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww!!! Just classic!! Seriously man!! Wanna see this in the show too!!

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Super,super ,super like.its amazing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It is very nicely written. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg! Amazing update! 😳 I seriously want all ur FFs to come true on the show! 😉 Awesome writing!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey.. I suspect u knw magic r smthng? I cn actualy picturise ths hpning in the shw.. Wow.. Jst wow.. Awesme.. Hungriliy waiting fr ur nxt update!!! <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nothing to say Amby just

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful Amber, extraordinarily beautiful. Continue dear.