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Originally posted by: Mickeydeva
Thanks for the information iam waitinfg for Monday show & lets rocks
This didn't actually happen in the show. I just wrote this myself! its a fan fic! but i can't wait until monday's episode either!
Originally posted by: Mickeydeva
Thanks for the information iam waitinfg for Monday show & lets rocks
Sorry, you'll have to wait until part 5 for that 😛 This is revenge for all your suspense that you put me through hahaha. Waise, when are you updating yours?! I'm WAITING!
Originally posted by: name2saakshi
that isso awasome i love this 👏
Originally posted by: Anamika163
areh yaar.. mera toh co production hai.. aur mer partner itni aatrangi hai ki kya batau... we were supposed to update tonite... update discussion bhi hogaya hai... sirf likh na tha... lekin woh choti mereko chod ke bhag gayi...😆
LOL kahan bhag gayi? Kaan kheench ke waapas leke aa uss ko.. I WANT AN UPDATE TONIGHT! 😆
Originally posted by: Anamika163
haan baba agayi.. ab usko bheja hai likhne ke liye😆
awesome update... part2 & 3 r splendid !!!thanks 4 the pm & sorry 4 late reply !!!!
Hey Everyone,
The next few parts will be a series of flashbacks. I will tell you when to come back to present day. Also can you all go back and read this: OS: Teri In Baaton Mein Kuch Chupa Lage.. I'm continuing it from there because I don't want to retype everything. Hope you guys like it! Don't forget to like/comment!
ENJOY!
Part 4
*Flashback* (cont'd from OS: Teri In Baaton Mein Kuch Chupa Lage..)
They separate and Ram makes Priya sit down on the bed. He goes and kneels on the floor in front of her. He lifts her face to make her look at him.
Ram: Priya meri baat dhyaan se suno. Tum ne bahut kuch kar diya hai, ab meri baari hai. Ab yeh sab main sambhalunga. Maine, anjaane main ek bahut badi galti kar di hai. Mere naam ke ek thi company hai, jo maine tumhare naam kar di hai. Baaki sab kuch maine bahut pehle Niharika, Sid, Mamaji, Ishika aur Choti ke naam kardiya tha. Lekin un log ko yeh baat abhi tak pata nahi hai. Yeh baat sirf mere lawyer aur Vikram jaante hai. Aur Sirf Choti jaanti hai ke uss ke naam pe ek fashion house hai. Mujhe paison ke koi parwa nahi hai Priya, lekin main nahi chahta ke babuji ki company, aur uss ki mehnat ki kamai galat haathon mein aajaye. Aur ab main bhi apne bacche ko saari khushiyan dena chahta hu. Jab maine yeh saari companies in ke naam kar di thi, tab mujhe nahi laga tha ke meri kabhi shaadi hogi, mere apne bacche honge, lekin woh sab kuch ab badal gaya hai. Abhi kuch der mein, hum divorce papers sign kardenge, aur un sab ko lagega ke meri aadhi property tumhare naam ki gayi hai. Phir, tum Australia jaogi, Maa aur Apeksha ke paas. Aur main kuch dinon mein aajaunga tumhe settle karne aur phir wapas Mumbai aajaunga'
Priya cuts him off: Ram.. Nahin, main aap ke saath hi rahungi. Aap nahi jaante Niharika kitni khatarnaak hai. Please Ram, main aap se door nahin reh sakti.
Ram: Toh phir tum yeh sab kyun kar ne jaa rahi thi Priya? Kaise kar pati yeh sab? Kyun apne aap ko itni takleef de rahi thi?
Priya looks down and a few tears fall from her eyes. Ram cups Priya's face in his hands.
Ram: Priya, meri taraf dekho. (He wipes her tears) Meri poori baat suno. Sirf thode dinon ki baat hai. Jab main koi solution nikalunga, tab main tumhe wapas le ke aunga, Maa aur Apeksha ke saath. Phir hum ek sacche parivaar ki tarah rahenge. Ab suno, Main wapas yahan aajaunga, ek solution dhoond ne ke hum iss musibat se kaise baaz aaye. Agar Niharika ko pata chala ke saari property, sab kuch usi ke naam pe hai, toh woh kuch bhi kar sakti hai. Hum aisa kabhi nahi hone de sakte. Main har 2 mahine, Australia aunga ek mahine ke liye, tum sab se milne, business trip ke zariye. Niharika ko kabhi nahi pata chalega ke tum wahan ho. Usse lagega ke hum alag ho chuke hai aur woh jeet gayi hai, lekin jab mujhe saare sabut aur ek solution milega, toh woh teeno apni saari zindagi jail mein kaatenge. Main usse uss ki zabaan mein sabak sikhana chahta hu.
More tears fall from Priya's eyes. Ram wipes her tears again.
Ram: Priya, kya hum yeh kar payenge? Kya hum yeh ladaai saath mein lad ke jeet sakte hai? Tumhi meri taakat ho Priya, kya tum mera saath dogi?
Priya nods: Ram, main hamesha aap ke saath hoon. Hum yeh ladaai zarur jeetenge.
Ram gets up from the ground and sits next to her on the bed. He turns her slightly to face him and lifts her chin to make her look at him. He looks into her eyes.
Ram: Priya, tum jaanti ho na main tumse kitna pyaar karta hu. Main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta. Jab tak Niharika iss ghar mein hai, tab tak hum chain se nahi reh payenge. Main bardasht nahi kar sakta ke woh tumhe kuch bhi kahe. Humein thode din ek doosre se door rehna padega lekin hamare dilon ek dusre ke saath jud gaye hai. Hum ek doosre se door bhi hokar ek dusre se bahut kareeb hain. Uss ne hamein bahut dukh diye hai. Ab aur nahi.
He once again wipes Priya's tears and then wraps his arms around her and holds her tight. She tries to control herself, but just can't anymore. Would she be able to do it? Would she be able to be away from him for so long at a time while he tried to get rid of Niharika? Why did it feel like they had already lost, and Niharika had already won? They had just sorted things out and now they would have to separate again; for even longer this time. All these thoughts invade Priya's mind and she breaks down on Ram's chest. Holding him tight, she sobs with her head on his chest. He rubs her back, comforting her, with tears streaming down his face too. After Priya calms down, Ram separates her from himself. He shakes his head and wipes her tears and then his own.
Ram: Nahi Priya. Agar tum kamzor pad gayi, toh phir hum yeh kaise'? Priya, yeh baat kabhi mat bhool na ke main tumse kitna pyaar karta hu. I love you Priya.
Priya: I love you too Ram. Aap apna khayaal rakhenge na? Main yahan nahi hongi aap ko parathe khane se rok ne ke liye. (she gives a small smile)
Ram takes her hand and puts it on his heart.
Ram: Tumhi ne kaha tha na ke yeh dil itni asaani se dhadakna band nahi karega. Sach kaha tha Priya. Ab yeh dil sirf tumhare liye dhadakta hai. Aur tab tak band nahi karega, jab tak tum na kaho.
Priya puts her finger on his lips to stop him and then hugs him again, putting her head on his chest and listening to his heart beat. The rhythm of his heart beat was the most soothing thing in this world. She felt relaxed listening to it. It gave her a new strength.
Ram understood. He sat there, holding her for a long time. He wished time would freeze right then. The next few months would be really tough on both of them. They would have to be strong. Priya finally let go. She knew it was time.
She caressed Ram's cheek and looks into his eyes and sees them blazing with love for her. She sees the fear in his eyes of being apart from her. She sees that he was trying to be strong; for her.
He took her hand from his cheek and kissed it.
Ram: Chalein?
Priya nodded. She got up and went to the mirror to fix herself up. He came up behind her and encircled his arms around her waist. He moved all her hair to one side and kissed her bare shoulder. He made his way up her neck and up to her ear. He nibbled her ear a bit and whispered: I love you Priya. She turned around to face him: I love you too Ram. She closed her eyes as he kissed her forehead, and her eyes and her cheeks. Then he made his way down her jaw to her lips. He locked his lips onto hers. She held his collar for support while he pulled her closer and deepened the kiss. Both of them drowning themselves in the moment. Their last moment together for a while.
After a few minutes, Priya breaks the kiss to breathe. She turns around again, trying to hide her tears. Ram puts his hands on her shoulders and turns her around to face him again. He kisses her tears away and takes her hand in his. He picks up the divorce papers, and she picks up her suitcase. Her hand still in his, their fingers interlocked, he leads her to the door and they look at each other, before exiting their room. They let go of each other's hands and head out, into the living room, to give their decision.
They make their way to the hall. Ram calls out to everyone.
Ram: Maa, Dadi, Mamaji!
Everyone appears there within a couple of minutes.
Ram: Maa, maine divorce papers pe sign kar ne ka faisla kiya hai.
Niharika looks over at Priya and gives a slight smirk.
Niharika: KYa? Ram baby are you sure? Lekin tum toh usse pyar karte ho na?
Ram: Haan Maa. Lekin ab sab badal gaya hai. Agar Priya ko isse khushi milti hai toh phir theek hai, aisa hi hoga jaisa woh chahti hai.
Priya looks at Niharika and raises her eyebrows in excitement. Inside, she is feeling this immense pain. Although this is all an act, it still hurt so much.
Priya: Thank you Mr. Kapoor. Ab main jaaon?
Ram: Haan jao.
She takes her suitcase and walks out of the house with the divorce papers in her hand. She halts a cab and heads to the airport. Ram said he would meet her there shortly after.
Ram turns to face Niharika: Maa, mujhe office jaana hai. Ab jab yeh rishta khatam ho chuka hai, toh main apni zindagi ke saath aage bad na chahta hu. Main aap sab se baad me milta hu.
Niharika looks at Mamaji and gives a victory smile.
Outside, Ram gets in his car and heads straight to the airport, to see Priya off. He finds her waiting for him inside. He takes her suitcase from her and they walk to the security check in. She turns to face him to say goodbye, tears pricking her eyes again. He takes her into his arms one last time, oblivious to the people around them watching. He tries to separate her from himself but she wouldn't let go. She held onto him tightly. She didn't want to leave him. Finally, Priya lets go and they break the hug and Priya walks toward the gate. She turns around one last time and gives him a slight wave, with tears in her eyes. Ram stand there with tears in his eyes watching her as she walks away. He turns around and slowly starts walking back to the exit.
Priya is at the gate, about to go in, when she feels a sharp pain in her stomach. She clutches her stomach and ...
Priya: Raaam!
To be continued...😉
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