| MG:The Painting |Part2 : pg 16, 29.05.12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: SylvaniaLUX

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Madhuri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Amazing start

Loved the concept

Update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: SylvaniaLUX

This sunday I promise

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
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Pehle apne girebaan me jhaank ke dekh😡😡

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
me tool

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Pehle apne girebaan me jhaank ke dekh😡😡

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kamini saare mere dialogue mereko chipkaing tu😡

ohh ..btw...jhaka na😎

its damn sexy...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

even if i do say so myself😈

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Shalini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

lovely start. what is cooking in maan's mind, i really hope he doesnt hurt our sweet geet.

PS: you can write to save your life, this was a very nice part 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
me :D me first :D yayyy😃😆

and u decided to write again...that's awesome :D

this OS seems very interesting and mysterious...the big mystery of why he wants that painting so badly...hmmm...hmmm...hmmm...but i like the MSK attitude he has😳

and Geet Handa...seems like she is already falling for him *reya singing mahiii mahiii in her best voice*...lolzzz😆

waiting for the next part...great start :)

Reya <3

Thenx Reyu😃

No mystery ain't that big, you will find out😉

Originally posted by: geetsweet
continue soon

will do😃

Originally posted by: WhitePearls
Hmm😆 Di u wrote that and then u say u cant write LIAR😡 First Rate at that😛
Me likes the painting, kind of😆 but i am trying to figure out why would he really do so much jut marring for that😆 I mean, Geet ke liye kare ton samjh mein bhi aaye😆😉

As for arrogance, woh toh bhai first part mein hi blink kar gayi😆 he is so full of himself😆

Coming to Geet, she doesn't like parties, I don't too (after coming to Ganganagar, meri age not a single soul!) give me a hug Geet..😭

Hmm... Me ready with all colourful cuss words for Mr-I-want-Painting-at-any-DAMN-cost... 😛 He hurts Geet, me will hop in and bash him... 😛 even smack him in my dreams... then i will target you😛

PS: Me lubed it😳

Maan ko gaaliyan dena sirf aur sirf mera adhikaar hai😆

so chup bilkul chup😉

thanx baby😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
are u kidding when u say u r no writer...somebody needs to punch u to bring u out of this misconception...that was beautiful...sounds interesting...
she seems to be naive and he seems to be grey character...

what is so special about the painting that he wants it by hook or crook...

i hope this isnt a sad ending story or else i will chase u to the end of the world and kill u...😡

BTW thats me reva..😆

Pagal hai kya?😲

why would I write a dukhi story on Maaneet?

Woh to Reyu ka copyright hai😡

Originally posted by: sdlife19
nice and continue soon

Thanx, will do soon😃

Originally posted by: ruchs
Simply awesome'😳

Loving this connection between Maaneet due to a painting!!!😳

Please continue soon...😳

Thanx, will do soon😃

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
the painting attracted him n now the painter too...

cant wait for the next part...

thnx for PM...

The painting did first, now the painter as well😉

u r welcum😃

Edited by -Manashi- - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: drashmeet12
Amazing dear..
cntnue soonn

Originally posted by: todayzstar
Awesomee..⭐️
continue soonn

Originally posted by: sowmyadharini
awesome..

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi
amazing dear..love it..
loved ur writing...
brilliant concept...
eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: shelly_08
DAAARRRUUUNNN :D :D :D

Originally posted by: priti11
loved it...

Thanx girls🤗

next update on sunday pakka😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
😲

Mera bina😲

tune post kiya😡😡

chudail rukh nahi sakti thi mere liye😭😭

TTTH😡

Sabse pehle tujhe hi bataya, tu daant todne mein busy thi😡

Aur waise bhi this was meant to be a surprise, so SHUT UP😡

Originally posted by: Boogle.Schiz
May I start off with saying the painting is absolutely beautiful. But why does Maan want it so bad?

Who says you can't write? It was great :)

Thanx Faa🤗

Why does he want, you have to wait for a couple of updates😃