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PROLOGUE


 


"Siddharth,have you heard?
The king has given orders for Abhayendra to be jailed..he's locked up Maithili..He's going to kill them!" she whispered panicking in the stables. "Siddharth-
please- you need to help me, we have to convince the king- "


"Piyali, I didn't expect this
from you," said Siddharth, sounding surprised. " You loved him too, didn't you?
What better way? Maithili and Abhayendra...separated forever...Why are you
bothered? The king only wants them separated.." Piyali stared for a long
moment at the man she had come to regard as her best friend, her brother, her
confidante. Where was he? She'd never seen this man before, the one who'd' "You
told the king, " she whispered shakily. "You, Siddharth? You? Your own brother?"


 


"Shut up, Piyali, " he whispered harshly. " He's not my
brother.

Crack.
She'd slapped him with all
the force she could muster. " You did this- you plotted this?" she whispered in
horror. " No, Siddharth, please, just once, tell me you didn't do this. Please-"

 

"I did," he confirmed, his
face devoid of emotions now. "Why are you upset? You loved
him too, didn't you? Loved him so much that you nearly killed yourself for him.
But he didn't thank you, did he? Why do you let Maithili come between you two?
Why is it wrong for me to love Maithili? All is fair in love and war, Piyali...

"No!" she choked out, tears
blurring her eyesight. "She didn't come between us! I was a fool- to set my
eyes on him. The princess' lover? I am
nothing, Siddharth, nothing to him, and never shall be! And you," she rounded
on him, " Do you honestly believe that even if you rescue her from all this,
she'll change her heart and love you instead? No! She loves him! They were
meant to be together, Siddharth. Why do you use such ways to get what you want
? Why do you want to do this to them? They could die, all right?"

 
"I didn't want her to be
locked up," muttered Siddharth, running a hand through his hair. "I only wanted
him to be separated..." Pia let out a wounded cry of fury.
"Your own brother, Siddharth?
All this, for a girl who doesn't love you back? You back stabbed him- so
easily? How could you? Yes, I love him. Yes, I'll love till my dying breath.
But I would never, never dream of forcing my love on him. Like they way you're
doing to my mistress. Maithili has been nothing but sweet to me. She doesn't
deserve this!"
She turned away from him,
saying in a clear voice, "I'm going to help! I couldn't care less whether you
were there or not. But I won't let them get separated. No , never! I hate you,
Siddharth. If you can do this to your own blood, what trust do I have on you? I
am but a girl who you considered your sister. I trusted you, Siddharth! I
trusted you!"

 


Still crying, she turned and
ran from the stables, not looking back at Siddharth. His face had gone very
white.

As she ran through the
cobbled pathways, she tightened the veil around her face. And Pia Dobriyal
remembered'. Abhay telling her they could never be together. Abhay telling her
he would always be there for her. Abhay pushing back her hair. Abhay touching
her face.Abhay... Pia cried in earnest, wishing with all her heart she had
never loved him. As she reached the doors of the palace, she took a deep breath
and wiped her tears as best as she could...
 
 

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2976436?pn=41

Chapter 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2976436?pn=51

Chapter 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59258248

Chapter 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59605304

Chapter 9:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2976436?pn=80

Chapter 10:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/60706081

Chapter 11:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2976436?pn=98

Chapter 12:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2976436?pn=109

Chapter 13:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2976436?pn=119

Chapter 14:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2976436?pn=126

Chapter 15


Chapter 16

Book 2


Other works:

SS : Magnetic Dipoles

FF :Who Am I? (joint with -juhi-lily-)

OS: What could have been

OS: Parallels

OS: A ray of sunlight


 



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Posted: 11 years ago
Green signal...gaadi aage badhao...πŸ˜†...
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Originally posted by: zoozoo123

Green signal...gaadi aage badhao...πŸ˜†...



Thanks Vidu...I was terrified writing thisπŸ€—
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Nice prologue
cntinue soon
last part was in past rite? Edited by hema_rawat - 11 years ago
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omg you were terrified while writing this naa?!?! aww. you know i had my heart inside my mouth literally when i wrote the first update of my FF..lol..my fingers were shaking while writing. anyway. shreyoo...the concept is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! i friggin love it! wow. love sid , love piya...i saw krishna in sid when piya in horror saw through his plot lines..whoa , woman. please continue with this idea or i will headbang you with spams. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! 
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Originally posted by: austenrox

omg you were terrified while writing this naa?!?! aww. you know i had my heart inside my mouth literally when i wrote the first update of my FF..lol..my fingers were shaking while writing. anyway. shreyoo...the concept is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! i friggin love it! wow. love sid , love piya...i saw krishna in sid when piya in horror saw through his plot lines..whoa , woman. please continue with this idea or i will headbang you with spams. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! 



Krishna who? Oh thanks you love it so much... I waited like two months carrying the idea around till I took the plunge. πŸ˜†
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Kya baat !! Kya baat !! Kya baat !!
entertainment shuru kia jaye... πŸ˜†

SUPERB!!!!! Continue :)
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Originally posted by: luckdiya

Kya baat !! Kya baat !! Kya baat !!
entertainment shuru kia jaye... πŸ˜†

SUPERB!!!!! Continue :)



Mithun ki cheliπŸ˜† Ok I am glad you like it!
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--



Krishna who? Oh thanks you love it so much... I waited like two months carrying the idea around till I took the plunge. πŸ˜†

arey baba , lord krishnaa! he was one mastermind dude. i mean he knew there was this unsaid spectrum of feelings of Karna and Draupadi..Draupadi considered him as her brother from childhood...he was the one who told her to support her brother in the swayamvar when her brother insulted Karna being a chariot's son and therefore , not being capable to be a participant of Draupadi's swayamvaar..she insulted him when Karna  defended himself despite having feelings for him..they were one unfulfilled love story..always...she tried to find the misled feelings for Karna in Arjun so that she could get over those feelings..but sadly she never did as Arjun stopped loving her the minute she was said to be the wife of the five panvas...Krishnaa knew Karna's one weakness as he got to know that Karna is Kunti's illegitimate son...told him that if he joins his brothers for war..Draupadi would also be his wife..and that was one temptation that was the hardest to surrender for Karna..but he did cause his loyalty knew no bounds...Krishna help Arjun kill Karan only when Karna was it his weak point...though Krishna and everyone else knew that Karna was a better fighter than Arjun..Arjun was not the best..but Krishna knowing Karna was a part of them...sacrificed him leaving Draupadi almost dead with horror. thats one reason why i cannot stand Lord Krishnaa.
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Originally posted by: austenrox

arey baba , lord krishnaa! he was one mastermind dude. i mean he knew there was this unsaid spectrum of feelings of Karna and Draupadi..Draupadi considered him as her brother from childhood...he was the one who told her to support her brother in the swayamvar when her brother insulted Karna being a chariot's son and therefore , not being capable to be a participant of Draupadi's swayamvaar..she insulted him when Karna  defended himself despite having feelings for him..they were one unfulfilled love story..always...she tried to find the misled feelings for Karna in Arjun so that she could get over those feelings..but sadly she never did as Arjun stopped loving her the minute she was said to be the wife of the five panvas...Krishnaa knew Karna's one weakness as he got to know that Karna is Kunti's illegitimate son...told him that if he joins his brothers for war..Draupadi would also be his wife..and that was one temptation that was the hardest to surrender for Karna..but he did cause his loyalty knew no bounds...Krishna help Arjun kill Karan only when Karna was it his weak point...though Krishna and everyone else knew that Karna was a better fighter than Arjun..Arjun was not the best..but Krishna knowing Karna was a part of them...sacrificed him leaving Draupadi almost dead with horror. thats one reason why i cannot stand Lord Krishnaa.



I didn't know this story... Sid does have some similarities...😳