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SURPRISE!!!!
Hey guys am back with the surprise..i promised u rite that i will give surprise as promised here goes my surprise of kriyaansh only kriyaansh!this is dedicated crazy frnds of me n fans of my ff..they are none other than sapna,annie,yogini...This is a gift for them as they completed 100 pages of my ff!wooohooohooo🥳
So here goes my update...
Actually kria and rey are good friends ..kria loves rey n vice versa...Kria thinks that rey doesnt love her coz he is a casinova..rey knew that she loves him but doesnt tell it...So he is fed up with her ,as she is not letting her feelings out..so one day he thinks of a plan!
One day kria goes to shopping in a mall...She was checking out ome bangels...Rey was standing far away from her and admiring her he was lost in her dreamland..
Rey*dream land*:awww kitni cute hai ye!!i wish ye meri ho jaye!!!god plz hum dhono ko mila dhono!!...So miss kriya ghai mei araha hun Reeyansh singhania opps tumhara rey...aaj toh tumko mujse koyi nahin bacha saktha!...ok ab reeyansh chal nikal aur usko yakken dhiladho ki woh thuje bahutpyar karthi hai...
She was checking out some bangles...he was standing quite opposite to her and was complementing a girl
Rey:wow these bangles are soo gud on you!
Kria :ye kuch suna suna sa awaz lag raha hai...lagtha hai rey!*soon a wide smile appears on her face when she turns back her smile diaappears,she finds him with another girl*
Rey:wow these bangles are awsum on u!
Kria*angry*:ye uss ladki se kyun baat kar rahi hai?!!besharam! kahi bhi ladiki dekho waha pissalgayi sabun ki tarah!
Rey was seeing her from corner of his eye n smiling to himself
Rey*in his mind*:muje pata hai baatcutter ki tum mujse bahut pyaar karthe ho..
Shop keeper to kria:madam kya mei ye banglesh pack karun?madam?madam?
Kria*annoyed*:KYa hai?!!!
Rey heard her shouting .but he acts as if he dint hear anything
Shopkeeper:madam mei sirf ye puch raha tha ki mei ye bangles pack karun ki nahin?
Kria:Muje nahin chahiye!*shouts*
HE again smiles to himself:Baatcutter ,bichara shopkeeper*in his mind*
She goes near rey but doesnt meet him,she acts as if she dnt know he was there...Rey see's her n finds that she was waiting for him to notice her..
Rey:kria tum?
Kria*shocked*:Rey aap ?yaha kaise??(acting)
Rey*murmurs*:itni achi acting?
Kria*confused*:kya apne kuch kaha?
Rey:nahin kuch bhi toh nahin!
Kria:okok...aap yaha ??ye kaun hai??...pointing out towards the girl
Rey:woh pata nahin kuch random si ladki hai..actually mei aapne behan ke liye kuch bangles n dresses karedhne aya tha uske bday arahi hai na isliye..toh maine isse help manga ki eek bar woh bangles pehankar dhikaye so that i could take them...
Kria:oh...waise hoon na!...by saying this she snatches the bangles from the girl's hand
Girl:arey?
Kria*fake smile*:oh sorry aap chal sakthe hai...mei hun na
Rey was just smiling at her jealousy
Rey snatches bangles from kria's hand and gives it to the shopkeeper
Rey to shop keeper:excuse me ye pack kardho!
Rey to girl*with a gentle smile*:thank u soo much for tryin the bangles!
Girl:oh ur welcum handsome...She says n goes away
Kria was shocked as the girl was flirting with him openly that too infront of her...kria's anger was increasing
Rey:kya hua?
Kria:aapne muje woh banglesh try karne se kyun mana kardhi?
rey:woh ussne already try kiya na
Kria:phir bhi *pouts*
Rey:arey tum toh banglesh dekh rahi thi na ...dekho dekho...
She was distracted n she started wearing all the bangles n showing him with a wide smile on her face..he was just lost in her cuteness..
she was trying some black bangles actually they wer not fitting ..so shopkeeper came forward to help her,when the shopkeeper was about to touch her hand...rey snatched her hand and started fitting the bangles.atlast the bangles were fitted they were looking soo good on her hands..and the twinkling sound was dragging him to kria's land.
Kria:rey muje ye bangles bahut pasandh aya...
Rey*dreamingly*:muje bhi...
LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA STARTS...
shopkeeper breaks their llhh😆
shopkeeper:sir ye bhi pack kardhun?
Rey:haan ya
Kria:ek min ..dhono alag alag pack karna aur alag bill banadho .mix maat karo...
shopkeeper:ok
Rey:nahin!!dhono same cover mei pack kardho!aur ek hi bill banalo!
Kria:par rey...
Rey:chup kria muje kuch nahin sunna hai!
kria:ok...
They come outside the shop...
Kria:mei ja rahi hoo...
Rey:kahan?
Kria:ghar
Rey*sad*:kyun?
Kria:woh meri shopping ho gayi na isliye...
Rey*puppy face*:muje chod kar jaoogi?
kria:ab aise face banan bandh karo ..ok mei araha ho chalo ab!
Rey:thank u thank u thank u kria *he hugs her in excitement ,she was shocked*
he comes to his senses n breaks the hug.they felt awkward for a moment ..rey breaks the silence..
Rey:toh chale?
Kria:haan...
They go to dress shop,as rey wanted to take his sis some branded clothes..😊
Rey to shopkeeper:excuse me kuch ladies dresses dhikao!
Shopkeeper:kiske liye sir ?
Rey:meri sis ke liye
Shopkeeper:iske liye sir?*pointing towards kria*
Before rey could ans .kria shouts
Kria:nahin!nahin!nahin!!ye mera bhai nahin hai!!!hum dhono bhai behan lagthe hai tume?aap andhe ho kya?
Shopkeeper:sorry madam
Rey*smiles*:its ok...
Girl :hey hi rey!!!
Rey :hey hi kaise ho???
They hug each other ..(just a friendly hug thats it)
Kria:dekho ye kaise hug kar rahe hai pyaar se ...jab muje hug kiya toh kitne awkward feel kar rahe the..!!huh!!!
Girl:am good .wat abt u?*she see's kria* girlfriend?
Rey:nahin...she's me friend
Girl:waise bahut dhin ho gaye hai !after such a long time we are meeting!
rey:yaa
Shopkeeper:sir ?
Rey:haan
Shopkeeper:sir aapki sister kaisi dhikthi hai woh apne bata toh mei kuch dress dhika sakthi hoon...
rey:haan woh...see's kria n points out the girl n says iski jaisi hai..
Rey to girl:hey if u dont mind can u try this dress?
girl:yah sure rey!tumhara liye toh kuch bhii
kria interrupts:rey mei try karthi hoon na?isko kyun thakleef dhe rahi ho?
Rey:no kria ye try kar legi ...tum jao aur kuch aur dresses tumhare liye dekho na!
Girl:ok rey mei try karke aati hun...
Rey:ya sure...
Kria goes away from ther with full anger.rey notices it n comes near her
Kria was standing at a distance n seeing here n there rey comes from behind
Rey:kria...
Kria:kya hai?*without turning back*
Rey:kria kya hua?
kria was feeling nervous as he is soo close to her ..his breath was hitting her neck...
Rey:kria thum bhi aapne liyekuch dress try karlo na
Kria:its ok muje nahin chahiye...
Girl comes out wearing the dress which was given by rey
girl:Rey kaisa hai?
rey:wow!beautiful !mind blowing!
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girl:rey muje jana hai meet u later...she was about to hug him when kria interupts in middle give her shake hand and bid bye to her
Rey:excuse me !ye dress pack kar lo!
kria:rey meine aapkeliye dho shirts dhekha hai eek bar try kardho na...
Rey:as u say baby!
Kria blushed as he used the word "baby"
But again she maintained her anger as he ignored in selecting the dress n trying it for his sis...
While they wer going near the trail room...rey goes inside and he wantedly forgetsto takethe shirt inside..
After going in he immediately removes his shirt n shouts "kris meine shirt lena bhool gaya tha plz akar dhedho na"
kria:rey bahar ake le lo...
Rey:kria meine shirt nahin pehna...kya aise bahar aau?
kria:nahin nahin mei la rahi hoon ruko!(she doesnt allow him to come out as all girls will start drooling over him)
She holds the shirt in her hand n forwards her hand...He caught hold of her hand n pulls her inside the trail room n locks it
Kria:rey yeh aap kya kar rahe ho??koyi dhek lega!!
He covers her mouth from shouting non-stop
Rey:kitna baat karthi ho tum!!ur such a baatcutter !!!
LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA starts...
She comes to her senses as he was not wearing shirt
Kria*closing her eyes*:rey aapne shirt nahin pehna !!first pehnlo!!
Rey:kyun hotlag raha hun?
She opens her eyes n see's him with a open mouth as how could he flirt so openly
he comes close to her n pins her to the wall
Rey:kria tum mujse pyaar karthe ho na?
kria:na...nahin!
Rey:kria jhoot mat bolo!aur kitna chupathi ho mujse?muje pata hai ki tum mujse pyar karthi ho!
kria:nahin rey aisa koyi baat nahin...aap to mere dosth ho..
Rey:acha agar mei tumhara dosth hun toh jab mei un ladkiyon ko chua ya usse baat kiys toh tumhe kyun jealues feel hua??tumko kyun itni gussa agayi?batao
kria:woh...woh...
Rey:woh kya kriya?
Kria:muje gussa nahin agayi ...aap muje galat samaj rahe ho...
Rey:mei sab kuch sahi samaj raha hun kria!
Rey:so tumhe koyi farak nahi padtha ..tum mujse pyaar nahin karthi ho?
Kria:nahin!
Rey*coming closer*:agar mei itni pass hun toh bhi koyi farak nahi padtha thume?
kria:nahin...
Rey*comes even closer*:abhi bhi?...now he was soo close that there lips were mms away from each other kria was unable to breath but she however replies"na...nah..nahi"
Rey places a hard kiss on her cheek n see's her ...now she was out of control she placed her hands on his shoulders n his hand was making designs...
he kisses her neck and she moves to the right giving him more place to explore...he started placing wet kisses all over her neck...her hands massaging his hair..this was driving hijm more crazy...
He slightly moves back n see's her ...She was lost...
He slightly moves towards her lips n places his lips on her's n gives a light kiss..when he was about to move back she pulls him into a passionate kiss..he was shocked by her sudden action..Now she was going wild she pinned him to the wall n kissed him hard on his lips...it turned into a wild one...she started kissing his neck ,chest ,shoulders and again thier lips found each others..Now he pinned her to the wall and slightly moved back
kissed n bit her ear ,she moaned in pleasure...he whispered "i love u kria..willu marry me?"
She was shocked by his way of proposal...
She replied"i love u too rey...n yes " she said it in a very seductive tone this was enough for rey to lose control over him...he again kissed her passionately for how long god knows...They pulled back to grasp some air n looked into each other'z eyes...they can find the passionate love n hunger for each other in their eyes...
KRia:aapne muje woh dresses aur bangles try kyun nahin karvaya?
Rey:woh actually mei apni behan ke liye dekh raha tha ...toh meine uun gils ko apna behan samaj liye..iss liye unhe try karvane ke liye kaha tha..!
Kria just smiles...
Rey was again coming forward to kiss her she stops him n says...
Kria:abhi shaadi nahi hui!!
Rey:tum chaho toh aj hi mandhir jakar tumse shaadi karlungi ...phir...*mischevious smile*
Kria:aap toh besharam ban rahe ho!
Rey:Kya karun jab mei tumhare saath hotha hun toh besharam ki baate chod detha hun...
Kria:rey pehle shirt pehanlo aur chalo bahar chalthe hai ..warna log kya sochenge?
Rey:jo bhi sochna hai sochne dho unlogon ko !muje koyi farak nahi padtha!
Rey wears his shirt n they were about to go wen rey pulls her into a tight kiss n leaves her after somethime
Rey:kria?
kria:haan rey
rey:kria ek doubt?
Kria:kya rey?
Rey*innocently*:first night kaha par celebrate kare?
Kria*blushes*:rey aap bhi na ...
she smiles n runs away even he smiles n follows her...
As they leave the trial room ..an old man saw them coming out together
OLDman:AAJ KAL KE BACHE !!
----THE END-----
so howz it guys??
Hey guys am back with the surprise..i promised u rite that i will give surprise as promised here goes my surprise of kriyaansh only kriyaansh!this is dedicated crazy frnds of me n fans of my ff..they are none other than sapna,annie,yogini...This is a gift for them as they completed 100 pages of my ff!wooohooohooo🥳
So here goes my update...
Actually kria and rey are good friends ..kria loves rey n vice versa...Kria thinks that rey doesnt love her coz he is a casinova..rey knew that she loves him but doesnt tell it...So he is fed up with her ,as she is not letting her feelings out..so one day he thinks of a plan!
One day kria goes to shopping in a mall...She was checking out ome bangels...Rey was standing far away from her and admiring her he was lost in her dreamland..
Rey*dream land*:awww kitni cute hai ye!!i wish ye meri ho jaye!!!god plz hum dhono ko mila dhono!!...So miss kriya ghai mei araha hun Reeyansh singhania opps tumhara rey...aaj toh tumko mujse koyi nahin bacha saktha!...ok ab reeyansh chal nikal aur usko yakken dhiladho ki woh thuje bahutpyar karthi hai...
She was checking out some bangles...he was standing quite opposite to her and was complementing a girl
Rey:wow these bangles are soo gud on you!
Kria :ye kuch suna suna sa awaz lag raha hai...lagtha hai rey!*soon a wide smile appears on her face when she turns back her smile diaappears,she finds him with another girl*
Rey:wow these bangles are awsum on u!
Kria*angry*:ye uss ladki se kyun baat kar rahi hai?!!besharam! kahi bhi ladiki dekho waha pissalgayi sabun ki tarah!
Rey was seeing her from corner of his eye n smiling to himself
Rey*in his mind*:muje pata hai baatcutter ki tum mujse bahut pyaar karthe ho..
Shop keeper to kria:madam kya mei ye banglesh pack karun?madam?madam?
Kria*annoyed*:KYa hai?!!!
Rey heard her shouting .but he acts as if he dint hear anything
Shopkeeper:madam mei sirf ye puch raha tha ki mei ye bangles pack karun ki nahin?
Kria:Muje nahin chahiye!*shouts*
HE again smiles to himself:Baatcutter ,bichara shopkeeper*in his mind*
She goes near rey but doesnt meet him,she acts as if she dnt know he was there...Rey see's her n finds that she was waiting for him to notice her..
Rey:kria tum?
Kria*shocked*:Rey aap ?yaha kaise??(acting)
Rey*murmurs*:itni achi acting?
Kria*confused*:kya apne kuch kaha?
Rey:nahin kuch bhi toh nahin!
Kria:okok...aap yaha ??ye kaun hai??...pointing out towards the girl
Rey:woh pata nahin kuch random si ladki hai..actually mei aapne behan ke liye kuch bangles n dresses karedhne aya tha uske bday arahi hai na isliye..toh maine isse help manga ki eek bar woh bangles pehankar dhikaye so that i could take them...
Kria:oh...waise hoon na!...by saying this she snatches the bangles from the girl's hand
Girl:arey?
Kria*fake smile*:oh sorry aap chal sakthe hai...mei hun na
Rey was just smiling at her jealousy
Rey snatches bangles from kria's hand and gives it to the shopkeeper
Rey to shop keeper:excuse me ye pack kardho!
Rey to girl*with a gentle smile*:thank u soo much for tryin the bangles!
Girl:oh ur welcum handsome...She says n goes away
Kria was shocked as the girl was flirting with him openly that too infront of her...kria's anger was increasing
Rey:kya hua?
Kria:aapne muje woh banglesh try karne se kyun mana kardhi?
rey:woh ussne already try kiya na
Kria:phir bhi *pouts*
Rey:arey tum toh banglesh dekh rahi thi na ...dekho dekho...
She was distracted n she started wearing all the bangles n showing him with a wide smile on her face..he was just lost in her cuteness..
she was trying some black bangles actually they wer not fitting ..so shopkeeper came forward to help her,when the shopkeeper was about to touch her hand...rey snatched her hand and started fitting the bangles.atlast the bangles were fitted they were looking soo good on her hands..and the twinkling sound was dragging him to kria's land.
Kria:rey muje ye bangles bahut pasandh aya...
Rey*dreamingly*:muje bhi...
LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA STARTS...
shopkeeper breaks their llhh😆
shopkeeper:sir ye bhi pack kardhun?
Rey:haan ya
Kria:ek min ..dhono alag alag pack karna aur alag bill banadho .mix maat karo...
shopkeeper:ok
Rey:nahin!!dhono same cover mei pack kardho!aur ek hi bill banalo!
Kria:par rey...
Rey:chup kria muje kuch nahin sunna hai!
kria:ok...
They come outside the shop...
Kria:mei ja rahi hoo...
Rey:kahan?
Kria:ghar
Rey*sad*:kyun?
Kria:woh meri shopping ho gayi na isliye...
Rey*puppy face*:muje chod kar jaoogi?
kria:ab aise face banan bandh karo ..ok mei araha ho chalo ab!
Rey:thank u thank u thank u kria *he hugs her in excitement ,she was shocked*
he comes to his senses n breaks the hug.they felt awkward for a moment ..rey breaks the silence..
Rey:toh chale?
Kria:haan...
They go to dress shop,as rey wanted to take his sis some branded clothes..😊
Rey to shopkeeper:excuse me kuch ladies dresses dhikao!
Shopkeeper:kiske liye sir ?
Rey:meri sis ke liye
Shopkeeper:iske liye sir?*pointing towards kria*
Before rey could ans .kria shouts
Kria:nahin!nahin!nahin!!ye mera bhai nahin hai!!!hum dhono bhai behan lagthe hai tume?aap andhe ho kya?
Shopkeeper:sorry madam
Rey*smiles*:its ok...
Girl :hey hi rey!!!
Rey :hey hi kaise ho???
They hug each other ..(just a friendly hug thats it)
Kria:dekho ye kaise hug kar rahe hai pyaar se ...jab muje hug kiya toh kitne awkward feel kar rahe the..!!huh!!!
Girl:am good .wat abt u?*she see's kria* girlfriend?
Rey:nahin...she's me friend
Girl:waise bahut dhin ho gaye hai !after such a long time we are meeting!
rey:yaa
Shopkeeper:sir ?
Rey:haan
Shopkeeper:sir aapki sister kaisi dhikthi hai woh apne bata toh mei kuch dress dhika sakthi hoon...
rey:haan woh...see's kria n points out the girl n says iski jaisi hai..
Rey to girl:hey if u dont mind can u try this dress?
girl:yah sure rey!tumhara liye toh kuch bhii
kria interrupts:rey mei try karthi hoon na?isko kyun thakleef dhe rahi ho?
Rey:no kria ye try kar legi ...tum jao aur kuch aur dresses tumhare liye dekho na!
Girl:ok rey mei try karke aati hun...
Rey:ya sure...
Kria goes away from ther with full anger.rey notices it n comes near her
Kria was standing at a distance n seeing here n there rey comes from behind
Rey:kria...
Kria:kya hai?*without turning back*
Rey:kria kya hua?
kria was feeling nervous as he is soo close to her ..his breath was hitting her neck...
Rey:kria thum bhi aapne liyekuch dress try karlo na
Kria:its ok muje nahin chahiye...
Girl comes out wearing the dress which was given by rey
girl:Rey kaisa hai?
rey:wow!beautiful !mind blowing!
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girl:rey muje jana hai meet u later...she was about to hug him when kria interupts in middle give her shake hand and bid bye to her
Rey:excuse me !ye dress pack kar lo!
kria:rey meine aapkeliye dho shirts dhekha hai eek bar try kardho na...
Rey:as u say baby!
Kria blushed as he used the word "baby"
But again she maintained her anger as he ignored in selecting the dress n trying it for his sis...
While they wer going near the trail room...rey goes inside and he wantedly forgetsto takethe shirt inside..
After going in he immediately removes his shirt n shouts "kris meine shirt lena bhool gaya tha plz akar dhedho na"
kria:rey bahar ake le lo...
Rey:kria meine shirt nahin pehna...kya aise bahar aau?
kria:nahin nahin mei la rahi hoon ruko!(she doesnt allow him to come out as all girls will start drooling over him)
She holds the shirt in her hand n forwards her hand...He caught hold of her hand n pulls her inside the trail room n locks it
Kria:rey yeh aap kya kar rahe ho??koyi dhek lega!!
He covers her mouth from shouting non-stop
Rey:kitna baat karthi ho tum!!ur such a baatcutter !!!
LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA starts...
She comes to her senses as he was not wearing shirt
Kria*closing her eyes*:rey aapne shirt nahin pehna !!first pehnlo!!
Rey:kyun hotlag raha hun?
She opens her eyes n see's him with a open mouth as how could he flirt so openly
he comes close to her n pins her to the wall
Rey:kria tum mujse pyaar karthe ho na?
kria:na...nahin!
Rey:kria jhoot mat bolo!aur kitna chupathi ho mujse?muje pata hai ki tum mujse pyar karthi ho!
kria:nahin rey aisa koyi baat nahin...aap to mere dosth ho..
Rey:acha agar mei tumhara dosth hun toh jab mei un ladkiyon ko chua ya usse baat kiys toh tumhe kyun jealues feel hua??tumko kyun itni gussa agayi?batao
kria:woh...woh...
Rey:woh kya kriya?
Kria:muje gussa nahin agayi ...aap muje galat samaj rahe ho...
Rey:mei sab kuch sahi samaj raha hun kria!
Rey:so tumhe koyi farak nahi padtha ..tum mujse pyaar nahin karthi ho?
Kria:nahin!
Rey*coming closer*:agar mei itni pass hun toh bhi koyi farak nahi padtha thume?
kria:nahin...
Rey*comes even closer*:abhi bhi?...now he was soo close that there lips were mms away from each other kria was unable to breath but she however replies"na...nah..nahi"
Rey places a hard kiss on her cheek n see's her ...now she was out of control she placed her hands on his shoulders n his hand was making designs...
he kisses her neck and she moves to the right giving him more place to explore...he started placing wet kisses all over her neck...her hands massaging his hair..this was driving hijm more crazy...
He slightly moves back n see's her ...She was lost...
He slightly moves towards her lips n places his lips on her's n gives a light kiss..when he was about to move back she pulls him into a passionate kiss..he was shocked by her sudden action..Now she was going wild she pinned him to the wall n kissed him hard on his lips...it turned into a wild one...she started kissing his neck ,chest ,shoulders and again thier lips found each others..Now he pinned her to the wall and slightly moved back
kissed n bit her ear ,she moaned in pleasure...he whispered "i love u kria..willu marry me?"
She was shocked by his way of proposal...
She replied"i love u too rey...n yes " she said it in a very seductive tone this was enough for rey to lose control over him...he again kissed her passionately for how long god knows...They pulled back to grasp some air n looked into each other'z eyes...they can find the passionate love n hunger for each other in their eyes...
KRia:aapne muje woh dresses aur bangles try kyun nahin karvaya?
Rey:woh actually mei apni behan ke liye dekh raha tha ...toh meine uun gils ko apna behan samaj liye..iss liye unhe try karvane ke liye kaha tha..!
Kria just smiles...
Rey was again coming forward to kiss her she stops him n says...
Kria:abhi shaadi nahi hui!!
Rey:tum chaho toh aj hi mandhir jakar tumse shaadi karlungi ...phir...*mischevious smile*
Kria:aap toh besharam ban rahe ho!
Rey:Kya karun jab mei tumhare saath hotha hun toh besharam ki baate chod detha hun...
Kria:rey pehle shirt pehanlo aur chalo bahar chalthe hai ..warna log kya sochenge?
Rey:jo bhi sochna hai sochne dho unlogon ko !muje koyi farak nahi padtha!
Rey wears his shirt n they were about to go wen rey pulls her into a tight kiss n leaves her after somethime
Rey:kria?
kria:haan rey
rey:kria ek doubt?
Kria:kya rey?
Rey*innocently*:first night kaha par celebrate kare?
Kria*blushes*:rey aap bhi na ...
she smiles n runs away even he smiles n follows her...
As they leave the trial room ..an old man saw them coming out together
OLDman:AAJ KAL KE BACHE !!
----THE END-----
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