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Posted: 12 years ago
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THE THING WE DO : " LOVE " ( PART 41)

 
DEAR readers!
this is in continuation of my previous thread :
A THING CALLED " LOVE" ( PART 1-39)
here is my INDEX:
PLEASE add as watched topic, so you know when I update. ( thanks)
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

She thinks to herself. ( while in the shower)

 

" I have seen his anger,

I have seen his pain

But I am not sure, if I can handle his LOVE.

If he loves me like this for ever, I will surely die out of surprises.

My poor mind cannot take so much LOVE'Oh!

 

"ARNAV JI

WHERE ARE YOU?

ARNAV JI?

 

If you were here, I would have kissed the daylight out of you.

What have you done to me? What have you done ? my JAAN?

 

Even when you are not with me. I can feel you in myself

I can feel your heart beat, in my own heart.

I can feel your hands around me.

Why aren't you here to hold me in your arms ?

I am craving, dying for your hands.

Umm'..wish you were here'.(lol..not in the shower with me, but just here in the room)

( may be in the shower as well'.)

 

(Khushi becomes red in shyness, even when she is alone in the shower)

 

Stupid meeting. !!

uff !! Alex

why did he plan the meeting today?"   

 

 

 

( 2.30 PM )

 

 

Khushi is back in her hotel room.

Her entire room is filled with bags and packets.

Sarees, dresses, new bags and shoes all over the bed and counter.

Mrs Gomez is placing the things in the right order.

 

 

Khushi:

"Mrs Gomez.!

I am not sure why I had to buy all these?

What is the plan?

 

Can I please have the phone now and call ARnav ji?

I really need to talk to him , its had been 5-6 hours and I haven't heared from him.

I beg you, please give me the phone.

 

You keep on texting his office and updating.

I feel a bit weird.

 

See I did, whatever he asked me to do and ordered you to make me, do.

I never have seen so much money in my life. Or have shopped so much only in a day.

 

BUT NOW.

Can I please have a call?

Umm..or a text?

 

How do you work this phone?

Where are the buttons?"

 

Khushi starts to explore the Iphone.

 

Mrs Gomez:

"Mam!

Let me show you how."

 

Khushi texts Arnav, in hope that there might be a reply.

 

 

//   TEXT: # 1

 

"ARNAV JI!

I HAVE DONE SHOPPING AND ALSO ATE BREAKFAST AND LUNCH.

WHERE ARE YOU?

I AM WORRIED SICK FOR YOU.

WHEN WILL YOU BE BACK?

PLEASE COME BACK SOON." //

 

She then stops and texts again.

 

//  TEXT   # 2

" BYE: YOUR KHUSHI !" //

 

She smiles whole heartedly as the last words.

Khushi:

"how easy it is to text, wish I could say it out loud to him.

But no..i guess I can later, not now.

Wonder when he will get time to read my texts".

 

BEEP!!

BEEP!!

 

THE phone vibrates!

 

Khushi jumps up

So does Mrs Gomez,

 

BEEP!!

BEEP!!

 

The phone falls down from Khushi's hand.

Mrs Gomez picks it up and opens it up, at a staring and impatient Khushi messes up the touch screen.

Khushi SHOUTS AT TOP PITCH

 

Khushi:

"TEXT!!!!

TEXT ALERT!!

HOW DO YOU OPEN THIS?

WHY ARE THERE NO BUTTONS?

I DO NOT LIKE THIS STUPID PHONE.

 

NOW MRS GOMEZ!!

NOW!!

OPEN, OPEN PLEASE.

OH MY GOD!

HE MUST BE WAITING TO HEAR FROM ME.

AND HE REPLIED IN A SECOND."

 

BEEP!!

BEEP!!

 

KHUSHI:

"2 TEXTS'.OPEN

 NOW ..PLEASE..I BEG "

 

Mrs Gomez:

" Here you go Mam!

I cannot believe Sir got time to check your message and texted you within a second!

He must be waiting!

But he specifically told me, not to let you text or call.

Hmm..WEIRD!"

Oh sorry!

Mam!

I did not mean to say the word weird'.'..sorry."

 

Mrs Gomez gets red and leaves the room, almost running, leaving the phone in Khushi's hands.

 

A lightning stricken, hysterically happy Khushi jumps on the bed and opens the text.

 

(KHUSHI THINKS)

 

" Oh god!

Why did I listen to Mrs Gomez?

I should have understood.

He was waiting the entire day for a word from me.

 

Why did I listen to her and keep his order?

My Jaan!

Must be waiting with the phone in hand, just to get my call or text.

Uff!!! Why am I so dumb?"

 

 

 

TEXT // 1

KHUSHI, I SAW YOU LYING down on the floor, beside me, so picked you up on the bed. I had a meeting, Alex texted me about it at very last moment. I did not wake you up. I left Mrs Gomez in charge. How are you feeling? I am SORRY about last night. I shouldn't have taken your passport and ticket. I will try to wrap up the MGT asap. Take care of yourself. WILL BE BACK SOON.

 

 

TEXT //2

 

 

 

KHUSHI:   And thanks for the text.   LOVE:   ARNAV

 

 

 //

 

 

Khushi now read the 2 texts for the 13 th time. She was almost flying out in joy.

She screams in ecstasy.

 

 

 

Mrs Gomez came running.

 

 

Khushi jumped out of the bed and ran to Mrs Gomez to give her a bear hug,

Mrs Gomez was now at total lost of expression or words.

 

 

Khushi:

"Oh Mrs Gomez!

Please relax.

YEAHHH!!!!!

 

I am HAPPPY.

I cannot express how HAPPPY I AM.

I LOVE YOU MRS GOMEZ.

HE WROTE: LOVE ARNAV

HE ADMITTED AGAIN IN WRITING''.

MY FIRST LOVE LETTER...

NO, MY FIRST LOVE TEXT !!!!!

YESSS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

 

( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EmALkxgbf94&feature=fvsr)

( Dear reader ! turn the music on, for full experience of the senses )

 

 

Khushi:

 

RUNS TO HER AND SMACKS''.Kisses Mrs Gomez in both cheeks and almost begs''

 

" Mrs Gomez ji !

YEAHHH!!!!

 AM HAPPYYY"

LETS DANCE'..

 

DO YOU HAVE ANY MUSIC in your  phone?

DO YOU HAVE ANY SALAMN KHAN SONGS?

DO YOU HAVE A LAL CHUNARI?

 

DO YOU THINK ARNAV JI WILL LIKE A    " YELLOW SUIT?"

I THINK HE WILL LOOK LIKE SALMAN JI?

 

Don't you think?

I cannot express how HAPPY I feel after a long, long time.

 

YES..

 

YES'

 

YES'."

 

( AFTER 15 MINUTES )

 

The ipad is connected to YOUTUBE,

The connected to the TV.

THE sound is blasting off.

The windows are echoing.

 

Khushi is on the bed and Mrs Gomez on the floor.

A red chunari on Khushi's head and hands.

A yellow chunari on Mrs Gomez.

 

A VERY dazed and red Mrs Gomez and Khushi are dancing at "Chunari Chnari'"

Khushi showing Mrs. Gomez how to move her waist and make an eight with the hip.

 

Khushi is jumping on and off the bed and then dancing around on the couches and then jumped on the table.

Running wild in the living room and spraying the flowers on the floor, ( filmy style)

 

Then kissing the air, HANDS ON THE AIR 'HIPS IN THE AIR''''DUPATTA ON THE GROUND'. and :

 

Then looking at the TV and SHOUTING , ( IMITATING SALMAN JI! )

SINGING AT TOP OF HER VOICE:

 

" Ajana !!!   chule mere chunri saman

Kuch nah bolu tujhe meri kasam

AYE jawani saar pe mere

Tere pe kya kaaro

Jawani pe raham!"

 

Haii'haii'.."!!!!!

Chunai chunari!!!"

 

Chink ne chik ne badan se tere'.sar sar chunri sarke'.

 

Kuch nah bolu tujhe meri kasam!!!!"

 

Tere ape yaa karu jawani pe raham!!!

AJANA chule meri chunri sanam'.kuch nah bolu tujhe meri kasam!!!"

 

She dances along singing at top of her lungs'

 

 

SUDDENLY, TURNS AROUND TO SEE MRS GOMEZ, STANDING AS A STATUE. EYES GLUED TO'.THE'

 

KHUSHI COMES RUNNING TO HER TO ASK

 

" WHY?

WHAT THE

Mrs Gomez !!!!

DANCE NAH'.MOVE YOUR HIPS LIKE THIS'''.  ?"

 

Takes her hand and starts to twirl around the room AND DANCES ALONG WITH HER RED CHUNRI''''.

JUMPS UP ON THE TABEL AND SHOUTS AND SINGS'..

 

 

 

 

and then HALTS''.TO SEE:

 

 

ARNAV STANDING AT DOOR''''''..

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by sheun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No words...it was just wonderful😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

U have really made my day sheun.

 A THING WE DO: LOVE... the story line is as sweet as the title

Khushi, i love uso much... u r teh sweetest grl in this world...ye more sweeter than jelebies😉
Edited by sammymas - 12 years ago
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" I have seen his anger,

I have seen his pain

But I am not sure, if I can handle his LOVE.

If he loves me like this for ever, I will surely die out of surprises.

My poor mind cannot take so much LOVE…Oh!

Khushi dear, you dont know what Arnav is capable of yet. He loves you more than YOU CAN EVER IMAGINE.

You just enjoy it, while it lasts (which shall be for eternity 😆)


AWESOME is the word for you Sheun !!👏
Reading this has been a relief. Loved it to the core ⭐️

Hope we get much more parts like this ! Great job done !!😊




Edited by sanjanaarhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
loved it
you had me laughing at khushi and mrs.gomez dancing away like there is no tomorrow.
then mrs. gomez frozen being caught by arnav.
loved the update.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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what do i say? as usual...LOVED IT...LOVED IT...LOVED IT...
YESSS
Darjee??
Ipad?
Malhotra?
Manish?
Lillies?
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
Chunari Chunari...heheheheheheee...btw...i love that song too...being a salman fan myself...
can't blame khushi for going crazy to see his love towards her...
absolutely LOVED IT...
he is probably just standing there admiring his silly khushi...
OHHH I almost forgot...
LOVE: ARNAV...Oh YAY YAY YAY...
I think i am done...lol...or not...LOVED IT LOVED IT...
Poor Mrs. Gomez...stuck between...chirpy khushi and silent ASR...
Bhagwan bachaye USSSEEEYYY 
OK I M DONG NOW! i think...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for updating..I wait for your updates everyday..super cute..always love it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG this was really a funny update especially the last part juz imagine Arnav is standing there & looking at his pagal wife dancing & the whole room is upside down I know he will 4 sure burst out not anger but laughter ( I guess) 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow... hilarious... mind blowin update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it 
as usual awesome update
thankx for the pm