Hey Hi once again... just read few parts as got some time. Not many but precisely just two parts... I know I'm quite lagging behind with you updating in quite a good speed... but hopefully will able to be in sync with the recently posted updates...π
I must say both 5 & 6 parts had so much variations in it... each character contrasting the other, simultaneous stories running parallel ... & hopefully will intersect at some point. I really can't figure out at present where all of this is leading, but I guess at some point all of these will make some sense & have a meaning of all that is transpiring at the moment. Your way of narrating each character, views & the whole concept... though is quite confusing & unpredictable, but must admit that it makes me wanting for more just to reach the real sense to it, has me hooked onto it. You potray & present all in a platter in the raw form which you make others to serve themselves in ways that appeal to them yet at the same time you have a complete control on the actual content to be served.. ... & has me completely hooked on to this FF... ( Am I even making sense with all my analouges ... or is it all a big Jargon...πππ)
Geet here is a mixed bag of all surprises, unpredictable & blunt all rolled into one. I guessed it right she mistook MSK to be DSK... & cretaed all the mess. Wonder why does she dislike Dev this much. Her writing of the "FRANK" diary & her writings in it... I was π€£... To confess most of the times I too fall prey to those mentioned spelling errors...π³π³. Her inner voices were too good. But she's a mystery here...
Dev is an interesting character now... quite well shaping up. I know that try as hard I won't be able to correctly figure out the actual dynamics & bonding between the two brothers... & somewhere I guess there is going to be a completely different perspective of their relation...π
What's with ASR here???? & the Brij connection in all of this????
Guess will have to read the next parts... will do so & comment later...π
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