Burning in your Love (Parts 14 to 19)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#681

again its great...thnks 4 pm...

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Paru

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Posted: 13 years ago

#682

It was a lovely update Smita ... You described the rituals beautifully 😃

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#683

Such details Smita, beautiful. I felt that I was actually watching the weding taking place. Awesome.

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LAKSHMI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#684

so so so beautiful...loved it tooo much...
very beautiful very awesome...

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smile1412

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Posted: 13 years ago

#685

Speechless again!!!!! Yeh dil maange more!

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More-than-himM

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Posted: 13 years ago

#686

ur a born writer

beautifuuly explained

u knw it was like a total reality i was so absorbed into this😳

when is the next update?😉

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udaymanyata07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#687

👏👏thanks...great job...brilliant.aweosme...👏👏

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#688

just read the second part n it was awsuum..loved t

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Shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#689

great update smita

esp the vows written too gud continue soon

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#690

awesome update, smita... loved how you related all the vows to a previous incident / memory... now this marriage is based on trust, love and also friendship... the best lines today are: She had finally found her real home, in his heart. She was no longer an orphan...

lovely to see khushi so demonstrative... she doesn't want to let go of any chance to hug him or be close to him