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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb dear, loved it. continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awsum luvd all da updates
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey

gr8 parts..
cont.sooon
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 11

Present

As they came down they saw Mithun n Mahi fighting n Maan rolled his eyes knowing that they wouldnt stop n so he took the newspaper n sat in the living room n got busy in reading it.

Meanwhile Geet got worried n she rushed to them n said "Kya baat hai??? Kyu jhagda kar rahe ho???"

Mahi "Dekho na Mumma Bhai mujhe TV dekhne se mana kar diya" n pouted.

Mithun "Haan Mumma mujhe IPL ke highlights dekhne hai. Kal flight ke wajhe se main match nahi dekh paya"

Geet "Oh ho Mahi tu "usse dekhne de na. Tu apna program baad main dekh lena"

Mahi "Mumma aap hamesha bhai ki side hi lete ho. Jao mujhe nahi baat karni aap logo se" n turned away. Mithun n Geet looked at each other n gave a evil smile n went towards Mahi n said "Mahi tu sach main humse baat nahi karegi???"

Mahi nodded n before she could do anything she started laughing loudly n said "Mumma stop. Bhai bas karo. Acha main aapse baat karungi" between her laughs.

Geet n Mithun had started tickling Mahi when she refused to talk n were giggling along with her. Maan all the while had his ears to their conversation only n he closed the newspaper n walked to them n said "Yeh kya ho raha hai???" a bit sternly. Mahi winked at Geet n Mithun n they understood n went to Maan n started tickling him. He couldnt stop laughing n then he began tickling Mahi n then Mithun n Geet n they had a gala time. 

After they stopped n their breathing was normal Geet said "Waise Mahi tujhe kaunsa program dekhna tha??? Doremon ya Shin Chan???"

Mahi "Arre Mumma woh toh chote bache dekhte hai. Main toh Drashti Huvi Sabki Pyaari dekhne wali thi. Aapko pata hai aaj na Gurmeet aur Drashti dance karne wale hai. Haiii woh kitna handsome hai" n had a dreamy look on her face.

Maan who heard her got alert n said "Geet yeh kaise shows dekhne deti ho tum Mahi ko??? Zaroor tum bhi uske saath yeh shows dekhti hogi"

Geet got into her sherni mood hearing n said "Aap ka matlab kya hai??? Main bacho ko yeh sab shows dekhne ko shikati hu???"

Maan "Aur nahi toh kya jab bhi dekho tum bas TV main wohi show laga ke behti hoti ho"

Geet "Oh hello main koi wohi show nahi dekhti. Main toh bas jab time milta hai tab hi dekhti hu aur mere pass na TV dekhne ke alawa bhi bohut kaam hote hai. Aapki tarah nahi ke office jao kaam karo aur ghar aake paper ya phir koi magazine leke bhet jao aur aapke papers aur magazines main kaise kaise adhi nangi ladkiyo ki photos hote hai. Chi chi babaji naam lene main bhi sharam araha hai"

Maan "Geet main un photos ko nahi balki news ko padhta hu aur main kya karu agar newspaper walo ne aisi tasveere chapi hai toh"

Geet "Haan haan aap kyu kuch karenge aapko toh bohut mazaa aata hoga na aise tasveere dekh ke. Ab aap mujhe kaha pyaar karte hai. Ab toh main purani hogayi hu na isiliye" n started crying.

Maan carressed his forehead in worry n said "Nahi jaan aisa kuch nahi hai. Main aaj bhi tumse uthna hi pyaar karta hu jitne ke phele karta tha"

Meanwhile Mithun n Mahi had again began fighting for the remote n then getting angry they throw the remote n left from there.

Hearing the loud noise Maan n Geet turned towards it n realised that they were fighting like kids n the kids had already left from there. Maan pulled her towards him n said "Geet tumhare aaj kal mood swings kuch zyada nahi badh gaye kahi tum pregnant toh nahi ho na???"

Geet got very shy hearing him talk so shamelessly n said "Chup besharam. Aur haan main pregnant nahi hu. Mujhe aur bache nahi chaiye. Mere 3 bacho ko sambhalne main hi mera waqt nikal jata hai ab ek aur nahi chaiye mujhe"

Maan "3 bache????"

Geet "Haan hai na Mithun, Mahi aur aap" n pushed him n ran away.

Maan "Arre Geet ruko tumhe mujhe bacha kaha. Ab tum nahi bachogi" n thought of an evil plan.

As Geet entered the kitchen n calmed down her breathing her mind went to what she said to Maan "3 Bache" n her thoughts went back to that unfortunate day which changed her perfect life to Imperfect...

Past

Geet was 5 months pregnant n she was very happy. She n Prem had planned a dinner in a restaurant n had a great time there talking about their baby n teasing each other.

As they were returning it was quite late n as they were crossing a signal,some drunken young guys driving a car jumped a signal n drove away rashly. Prem who was driving tried to hit the break seeing the car but before he could do so his car hit a tree n Prem went out of the windshield n Geet hit the dashboard n both fainted.

As Geet woke up after few hours she felt that something was missing n as she touched her baby bump she felt no movement in the baby n she panicked. Rani who was in her room saw Geet gaining consiousness n called the doctor. 

Geet "Chachi Kya huva??? Main hospital main kaise??? Aur mujhe baby kyu feel nahi ho raha??? Chachi Prem kaha hai??? Aur baby theek toh hai na???"

Chachi was trying very hard to stop her tears n said "Geet abhi tu araam kar aur doctors ko tujhe check karne de uske baad main tujhe sab batati hu"

The doctors came n checked her n said that she was fine n the wounds would need something to heal n she could be discharged that evening.

After the doctor went,Veer entered the room n Geet said "Chachi - Chachu ab bataye kya huva??? Plz mujhe bohut ghabrat ho rahi hai"

Chachi "Geet tere aur Prem ka accident hogaya tha aur uss accident main tune Prem aur aapne bache ko kho diya"

Geet was shocked to hear it n said "Nahi Chachi Prem ko kuch nahi huva. Usne mujhse wada kiya tha ke woh mujhe kabhi chod ke nahi jayega. Woh na mujhse naraz hoga kyuki maine aapna aur baby ka khayal nahi rakha lekin main usse mana lungi par aap usko bula dijye na Chachi."

Chachu "Geet aapne aap ko sambhalo beta. Tumhe himat se kaam lena hoga"

Chachi hugged Geet while Geet cried after reality sinked into her that her Prem n her baby were no more. After a while she slept off crying n Chachi cried seeing Geet like this.

After this incident Geet was never like before. She had lost all her hopes but she saw a ray of hope when she was in Jaipur with Meera when she delievered twins n Geet was there to help her take care of them. She showered all her love on Shriya n Sameer n then she slowly started to come back to her routine. After a few months her Chachu n Chachi passed away n she shifted to Delhi to start a new life but Shilpa had to stay back as her studies were going on. 

As she finished telling all this to Sameera she saw that Sameera had tears in her eyes. Geet gently wiped them n said "Di aap roye mat. Yeh toh meri kismat main likha tha toh aisa hi huva"

Sameera "Geet tum bohut hi bahadur ho ke tumne itna kuch sehne ke baad bhi aapni muskurath nahi koi" n she cried out in pain "Ouch "

Geet "Kya huva di??? Aap ko kahi pe pain ho raha hai kya??? Main doctor ko bulao???"

Sameera nodded in no n took Geet's hand n kept on her baby bump n Geet then felt the kick n she had tears in her eyes remembering her baby but wiped them n said "Wow di Baby toh bohut zor se kick marta hai. Dekhna bada hoke yeh footballer banega" n hugged Sameera.

Sameera hugged her back n prayed in her mind "Hey bhagwan Geet ne bohut kuch seh liya hai ab aur dukh mat dena usko"

N then they went down n Sameera rested for a while n then she spent lot of time talking to Geet about everything n anything n 2 days passed n then Maan returned n Geet went to her flat n caught up with Roops, Pooja n Shilpa. She used to visit Sameera whenever possible n used to take care of her n unknowingly Maan started trusting Geet with Sameera's responsibility.

As she thought about those days,she had a smile on her face n when Meera entered the kitchen she saw Geet smiling n said "Kya baat hai Geet kya yaad kar rahi ho???"

Geet "Kuch nahi di bas purani yaadein yaad agayi. Aapko yaad hai hum dono kaise jhagde rehte the aur dono mil kar Shilpa ko kitna tang karte the"

Yug who had entered the kitchen then said "Aur mere upar jo pranks khele woh???"

Geet smiled n said "Aur tum hamesh bewakoof ban jate the" n showed him her tongue. Yug smiled n then they had a group hug.

Precap - 
Past
Sameera in hospital n Mithun's birth.
Next - Part 12
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Ok so dat is hw geet is here alright so nw do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
mind blowing update
loved it
continue soon


thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...

loved Geet-Sameera's bonding in past...

loved how she accepted Mithun as her son...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Awesome update dear!!!
Loved Sam nd Geets bonding...
Maaneets Fight ws good...
plzzz cont soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome
loved it
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome and lovely update
 
thx for pm