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Hinal.94

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Posted: 12 years ago

Character Sketch

Geet singh khurana-the story is about how she has lived her life with all the common difficulties faced by all girls in normal life

Maan singh khurana-a business tycoon who has also helped geet in her struggles of life after their marriage

Mahi singh khurana-maan n geet's daughter.she is well protected n pampered child of khurana household

Meera kapoor-geet's elder sister.Very possesive about her sister but troubles her also equally.Carefree nature but cant see geet in trouble.

geet n meera r best friends n also the worst enemies when comes to fights

Yash kapoor-meera's husband n maan's business partner.Very caring n a lucky-go-happy guy

Shriya and Sameer-meera n yash 10 yr old twins.Very close to geet n mahi also

Shilpa malik-geet's younger sister but not so close to geet n meera bcoz of her 9 yrs age gap between her n meera n 7yrs between her n geet but geet loves her also equally.

Armaan malik-husband of shilpa n family doctor of khurana family.Presently working with maan for his own hospital.

Sameera Khurana-Maan's first wife n was geet's best friend when geet came to delhi.

Prem Ahuja-Geet's friend when she was in bangalore.

Yug Mehta-Geet's twin.Right now lives in London with his wife Vrinda

Vrinda Mehta-Geet's friend from school n Yug's wife.

Roopali-Geet's friend n neighbour

Pooja-Geet's friend n neighbour n stays with roopali both are inseparable

others later

Guys I would like to tell that im going to add our CC Maaneet Express members in the story n would write their names as I call them if u guys get confused plz tell me i would write their username in the character sketch

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting.
Ohh yug n vrinda too...wow

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 12 years ago

Maan singh khurana

Gurmeet Choudhary in tv show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

Geet singh khurana

Mahi singh khurana

Meera kapoor

Yash kapoor

Shriya kapoor

Sameer kapoor

Shilpa malik

Armaan malik

Maan,Geet n Mahi

Sameera Khurana

Prem Ahuja

Yug Mehta

Vrinda Mehta

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PART 1

31st May,Bangalore

A young lady in a beautiful saree is seen running behind a 5 yr girl.She is calling "Mahi,stop right there or you are not going to get to play with Shriya and Sameer.Then dont come to me and cry"

Hearing this Mahi stops running and Geet goes to her and says,"Beta,ghar ma lagan che ne toh avithna bhaga bhagi na karie[in gujarathi]"[Beta,there is a marriage happening in the house na,so you should not run like this"

Mahi"Ok mama,mein Shriya aur Sameer ke saath khelene terrace me ja rahi hu"

Geet 'Nahi beta abhi nahi baad mein sab mehman chale jaye uske baad khelene chali jana"

Mahi"Par mama,agar Shriya aur Sameer phir apne ghar chale gaye toh"

Geet"Nahi beta woh log aapne ghar nahi ja rahe"

But still Mahi was not convinced.

So Geet "Acha beta aap jake papa ko puch lo ke Shriya aur Sameer hamare saath Delhi aa sakte hai ke nahi"

Hearing this Mahi's face brightens up and she runs in search of her papa.

Mahi finally sees her papa talking to his business friends and goes there.

Mahi "Papa"

YES HER PAPA IS THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Maan "Yes Shona"

Mahi "Papa,can Shria and Sameer come with us to Delhi?"

Hearing this Maan frowns and seeing this tears threaten to fall from Mahi's eyes.

Seeing this Maan goes on his knees and holds his ears and says SORRY and wipes her tears and says "Mahi,I thought we would go to Shriya and Sameer"s place as you have holidays now but you want to bring them to Delhi.

Ok they will come with us to Delhi and we will plan to go for a holiday with Shriya and Sameer.Is it ok,Shona?"

Hearing this Mahi is very happy and she hugs Maan and then runs off to tell this news to Shriya and Sameer.

Maan then sees Geet smiling with tears looking at Mahi

PRECAP-

The wedding

Next - Part 2

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Amita Tibrewala

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome start

please update soon and pm me

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Hinal.94

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PART 2

After sometime panditji calls Geet and tells "Beta shubh moharat shuru ho chuka hai.Aap dulhan ko neeche mandap me leke iye"

Geet "je panditji" and goes in search of Meera who is busy welcoming the groom,so she decides to bring the bride herself.

Geet goes to her Baa-Bapuji's room which is used by Shilpa as the bride's room and sees that Shilpa is looking very beautiful in the bridal dress.

SHILPA'S BRIDAL DRESS

She goes to the dressing table and opens a drawer and brings something out and goes to Shilpa and puts kala tika and says "Nazar na lage meri behn ne"[nazar na lage meri behen ko]

Then she gives Shilpa 2 gold bangles and says,

"Shilpa,ye kangan hamari Maa ne hamari shaadi ke liye banwaya tha aur ab se ye teri amanat hai" and made Shilpa wear it.

THE KANGAN GEET'S MOM HAD GOT DONE FOR ALL 3 OF THEM

Shilpa though did not like the kangan as it did not match her bridal dress wore it as she knew it was her mom's blessings for her and they left the room and come down near the mandap.

YES IT WAS SHILPA'S MARRIAGE WITH ARMAAN AND IT WAS HAPPENING IN BANGALORE AS SHE WANTED THE MARRIAGE IN HER'S AND HER SISTERS BIRTHPLACE BANGALORE.

Then the rituals started.Yash and Maan did her kanyadaan and Meera and Geet did her ghatbandan.Then the pheras started in which Mahi,Shriya and Sameer enjoyed throwing the rose petals on the couple.Then the wedding rituals were completed and Shilpa and Armaan took the panditji's blessings and then came to Meera and Yash who hugged both of them and also Maan and Geet.But when they were about to come out of the madap,Armaan realised that his shoes were missing.

Maan looked at Mahi who told him in signs that she had hiden the shoes.Shilpa and the others got to know this and then

Armaan "Princess plz mere jhoote wapas do" pleading with his eyes.

Mahi rolled her eyes knowing her Maasa very well and said "First give me my gift then u will get ur shoes back"

Armaan then pleaded with his eyes to Geet who said "Armaan just give her what she wants"

So Armaan asked "what do u all want?"

ARMAAN'S SHERWANI

MAAN'S SHERWANI

GEET'S SAREE

MEERA'S SAREE

YASH'S SHERWANI

SHRIYA'S LENGHA

MAHI'S LENGHA

SAMEER'S SHERWANI

PRECAP-

What will Mahi,Shriya n Sameer ask?

Next - Part 3

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Part 3

Armaan:"So what do u guys want?"

Shriya:"Maasa I want a new doll house set"

Sameer:"Maasa I want the latest version of PSP"

Mahi:"Maasa I want ke hum sab Darjeeling aur Shillong jaye iss vacation ke liye plzzz"

Hearing this Geet:"Aree S hona hum iss vaction mein nahi next vacation mein saath jayenge"

Maan:"Shona maasi aur maasa ki abhi shaadi huvi hai na isiliye hum next time jayenge"

Mahi:"Thik he papa hum sab saath mein next time jayenge" n faked a smile.

She agreed bcoz she knew her papa would never refuse her if she was right but she was feeling bad as she had made ADI sit with her n they both had done research about Darjeeling n Shillong before coming to Bangalore for the wedding.

She then brought Armaan's shoes which she had hid behind Maan's chair n said:" Ye liye maasa aapke jhoote"

Armaan:"Shriya I will buy u a new doll set tmrw n Sameer even ur PSP"

Hearing that her maasa was not giving her anything her face fell.

Seeing her gloomy face,Shilpa tried to change the topic so:"Aree Mahi u told me na ke aaj after the wedding u have a surprise for me.So what is the surprise plz tell na I am waiting for it very eagerly"

Then Mahi remembered about the surprise n told all of them to come to the other hall which was quite bigger than this one after 10 mins n she along with Shriya n Sameer ran off to the other hall.

THE OTHER HALL,TEN MINUTES LATER

As Yash n Meera entered their fav song started being played which changed to Maan n Geet's fav as they entered n finally to the newly wedded couple Armaan n Shilpa's fav song.

they then saw that there were 3 mats spread for each couple to sit along with cushions to make themselves comfortable.

Yash made himself comfortableusing the cushion n Meera kept her head on his shoulder.

Maan hugged Geet from backn leaned on the wall n sat.

Armaan Hugged Shilpa n they sat like that n when all were comfortable the lights got dim n a video started being played.

The video had some of Meera,Geet n Shilpa's childhood pics n then it changed to Yash n Meera's wedding pics n then pics when Shriya n Sameer were born n some of their moments like the first walk n they playing.Then the video showed Maan n Geet's wedding pics n then when pics after Mahi was born n some of her moments n finally the video showed pics of Armaan n Shilpa's engagement,sangeet n even marriage n then all the Members of Maaneet Express video recording was played in ehich they wished Armaan n Shilpa a successful married life n then the video stopped playing n a song started being played on which Mahi,Shriya n Sameer danced.

After the dance finished the lights came back n all were in tears seeing the video n the dance.

Then Mahi hugged Maan n Geet,Shriya hugged Meera n Yash n Sameer went n hugged Shilpa n Armaan n they after hugging told HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY.

[you all must be confused as why Sameer went n hugged Shilpa n wished her HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY actually in our family it is said that Maasi is next to our own Maa so I thought why not use the saying here.Hope all of u r not confused anymore]

Then again the 3 went behind the screen n then suddenly the lights went dim n a spotlight started moving n then came out Rakhi di with Sid jiju,Hima di with Venkat jiju n Ram n Hari,Avani di with Raj jiju,Muskan di with her husband,Shruti di with her husband, Khushi di,

Keya ,Ansah ,Dia ,Jyoti, Roopali ,Pooja, Muski ,Wardah ,Sana ,Ash Susana, Samara ,Reva,

Sanya, Priya, Eva, Swati ,Sonali, Parul, Pratima n Kate n then the lights came back n then all the 3 couples went to meet them.

After all the greetings was over they called out for Mahi,Shriya n Sameer.

Shriya n Sameer came n they told that Mahi told them that she will come back in 15 mins.

AFTER 20 MINUTES,

All were getting tensed as why Mahi had not returned even after 20 mins.

Maan told Geet that he was going to search for Mahi.

Maan searched the whole house but did not find her.

PRECAP-

Where is Mahi?

Next - Part 4

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PART 4

Maan searched the whole house but did not find Mahi.Then he went to the terrace to check there n saw Mahi sitting there with her teddy Softy n talking t it.Maan sighed in relief n then he saw that Mahi was crying so he ran to her n took her in his arms.

He soothingly rubbed her back so that shewould calm doen.After sometime Mahi calmed down n he asked her worriedly:"Shona aap kyu ro rahi ho?"

Mahi:"Woh papa 'sob' mujhe na Sweetu aur 'sob' MK ki yaad agayi 'sob' mama ko aapni friends ko milte dekh 'sob' karke aur aaj Sweetu aur MK se baat bhi nahi huvi na 'sob'"

Maan:"Olle mera baby.Shona aap mujhe bata de thi mein aapko Sweetu se baat karva deta"

Mahi:"Nahi papa 'sob' aap aaj subah se Shilpa maasi ki shaadi se tayari mein 'sob' busy the aur waise bhi mein unko todhi der mein 'sob' phone karne wali thi"

Maan:"Thik hai hum abhi Sweetu se baat karte hai.Thik hai".

saying so he made Mahi sit on the slan n took out his mobile n dialed Sweetu's house number n gave to Mahi.

Mahi then started talking to Sweetu n she told about her day n the surprise n all other things.

Meanwhile Maan was listening to her talks n lovingly caressing her face.

After Mahi finished her phone call, she gave the mobile back to Maan n then kissed his cheeks n hugged him n said:"U r the best papa in the world.I love u papa"

Maan:"N u r the world's best daughter n I love u too"

He then carried Mahi n turned towards the door n saw that Geet was smiling with tears in her eyes.

She went near them n took Mahi from Maan's arms n kissed all over her face.

Mahi:"Mama aap ro kyu rahi ho?"

Geet:"Kuch nahi Shona"

Maan understanding Geet's anxiety hugged them both.Then they went down n then Shilpa hugged Mahi n then told:"Thank u so much baby for the surprise.I loved it sooo much"

Mahi:"Maasi thank u mujhe nahi sab ko boliye kyunki agar yeh nahi aate toh ye surprise hi nahi hota"

Ansah:"Arre Mahi ye sab toh tunhara plan tha.Hum sab toh tere plan ko sunne ke baad hi yaha aane ka plan kiya"

Jyoti:"Ha Mahi hum sab toh yaha tumhare bulane pe hi aaye hai.Warna yaha par koi ha jisse aapni friends ki parwa tak nahi hai aur aapni behen ki shaadi ke liye bhi nahi bulaya hume"

Geet:"Arre Jyo gussa kyu ho rahi hai?Tunne hi toh kaha tha ke tu Mumbai ja rahi hai aapne bhai ke saath"

Jyoti:"Geeet mein tujhe ye baat isliye baati thi kyunki Mahi ne mujhe phele hi ye plan bata diya tha aur tujhe plan na pata chale karke tujhe jhoot bola tha par tu invitation card nahi bhej sakti thi kya?"

N the usual fight started between the two.The others rolled their eyes n after 5 mins Rakhi di stopped them n said:"Geet aur jyoti bas karo yaar.Tum dono toh kahe pe bi shuru ho jaati ho.Arre Geet tujhe toh yaad hona chailye na ke teri 5 saal ki beti hai aur aaj teri choti behen ki shaadi hai"

Hearing this Geet made a pouting face n seeing that Jyoti couldn't resist n laughed n hugged her.

Seeing Her Jyo Maasi hugging her Mama,Mahi also went n hugged both of them.

PRECAP-

Some flashbacks about Geet's life

Next - Part 5

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part 5

After the Bidaai finished all returned to the hotel as they had to return early the next morning.

NEXT MORNING,

Geet n Meera bid goodbye to all the Maaneet Express friends.

Then later Maan,Geet,Mahi,Yash,Meera,Shriya,Sameer along with Armaan n Shilpaleft for the airport.

Then Armaan n Shilpa boarded the flight to Shimla for their honeymoon n the others left for Delhi.

DELHI AIRPORT,

Geet remembered the first time she had come to Delhi to find a job after comlpleting her architecture course in Bangalore.

FLASHBACK

Geet was very nervous in the flight as she was going away from home like this alone for the first time but calmed down as Shilpa was accompaning her for a few days as she had holidays.

They were staying in a flat which was Geet's uncle's but now was in Geet's name as he had passed away.

They reached the flat n then freshened up n then they went to Akshardham Mandir to get blessings for her new life.

There Shilpa had gone inside the temple but Geet was outside buying some items for the puja.There she saw a pregnant lady who was having difficulty in holding the puja ki thal so Geet went to her n asked her:"Excuse me,kya mein aapki koi madat kar sakti hu?"

Lady:"Can u plz help me to climb the stairs n carry this puja ki thal.Actually my husband has gone to attend a important call so can u help me n sorry for the trouble" n smiled at Geet.

Geet:"Surely" n she takes the puja ki thal n helps the lady to climb the stairs.

As Geet enters the temple along with the lady,Shilpa comes to her n says:"Geet didi aap kaha reh gayi thi mein tabse aapka intezaar kar rahi thi"

Lady:"I'm sorry Geet ji I caused u n ur sister trouble"

Geet:"Plz dont say sorry n u have caused us no trouble but I have felt happy by helping u"

Shilpa seeing the lady understood that her Geet didi was helping her n said:"Plz dont say sorry"

Geet:"Hey Babaji mein toh aapka naam hi puchna bhool gayi?"to the lady

Lady:"Mera naam Sammera hai"

Geet:"Sameera ji hum puja kar lete hai phir baaki bate karenge"

Sameera:"Thik hai" n they do the puja n then Shilpa n Geet help Sameera to walkdown the stairs.

They went n sat on the benches there.

Geet:"Sameera ji kya mein aapse kuch puch sakti hu?"

Sameera:"Ha pucheye na"

Geet:"Aapki age kitni hai?"

Sameera:"Geet ji mein toh 21 years ki hu par aapne ye sawal kyu pucha?"

Geet:"Woh aapko dekh kar mujhe aapni badi behen ki yaad agayi isiliye aur woh bhi 21 years ki hai aur unsko na twins hai.Ha uar aap mujhe Geet ji mat boliye.Aap mujhse badi hai toh Geet hi boliye"

Sameera:"Thik hai Geet.Acha tum Delhi mein hi rehti ho kya?"

Geet:"Nahi actually hum dono aaj hi yaha aye hai aur kya mein aapko Di bula sakti hu?"

Sameera:"Ha kyu nahi mujhe toh aaj ek choti behen mil gayi" n hugged Geet.

Shilpa:"Arre aap dono toh mujhe bhool hi gaye" n faked anger.

Geet:"Arre meri himmat ke mein apni Shilpa ko bhool jao" n hugged her.

Shilpa:"Kya Di aapne mera introduction hi nahi karvaya"

Geet:"Oh sorry Shilpa,Sameera Di yeh Shilpa hai meri choti behen"

Shilpa forwarded her hand n said:"Hi Sameera Di Im Shilpa"

Sameera shook her hand n said:"Hi Shilpa" n hugged her.

They were talking when Sameera's phone rang.She picked it up n talked for 5 mins.

Sameera:"Sorry Geet n Shilpa had to attend the call as it was my husband's call"

Geet:"Koi baat nahi Di"

Sameera:"Guys kyu na hum mere ghar chale abhi mere husband ek important meeting ke liye gaye hai aur mein akeli hu"

Geet:"Lekin Di hum kese aap ke ghar asakte hai?"

Sameera:"Arre Geet kuch nahi hoga plz chalo na"

Shilpa:"Ha Geet Didi chalte hai waise bhi hamare paas activa hai he toh ghar jane mein bhi koi pareshaani nahi hogi"

Geet:"Thik hai" n so the three left for Sameera's house.

SAMEERA'S HOUSE

LIVING ROOM

KITCHEN

BEDROOM

NURSERY

Sameera ordered the servants to bring some snacks n they sat in the living room chatting.

Suddenly a black BMW Z4 stopped in the driveway n a young man got down from the car n walked into the house n as he entered the living room,the servants all became silent n then Sameera got up n went near the man n smiled at him n then hugged him.

Sameera:"Aap mandir se bina baitaye kyu chake gaye?"

Man:"Sorry Sameera woh ek important meeting agayi thi toh jana pada plz maaf kardo"

Sameera:"Thik hai.Aye mein aapko kisi se milana chati hu" n pulled the man to where Geet n Shilpa were there.

Sameera:"Geet,Shilpa inse milo yeh mere pati aur yeh [pointing towards Geet n Shilpa] inse milye yeh hai Geet aur yeh hai Shilpa jinhone aaj mandir mein meri help ki"

Man:"Hi Geet.Hi Shilpa thank u for helping my wife today.Im Maan,Maan Singh Khurana"

Geet:"Mr.Maan Singh Khurana???" n her jaws dropped open.

PRECAP-

More about Maan,Geet n Sameera

P.S-The BLACK BMW Z4 is my sister Roops fav.

Next - Part 6

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