ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16 - Page 48

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ashvez thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Meera...I have to thank my lucky stars to stumble upon ur FF.This is one of those Ff which is very well written and has an edge to the story keeping us all glued with anticipation for the next chapter and the new revealation.
Just finished reading all the chapters...was amazed and spellbound with the detailing ,the carving of the characters , the emotions.And Ofcourse very impressive Khushi and Arnav.Love the way you started off with them being connected as best friends and some teenage misunderstanding, separates them and the ghosts of the pasts never leave them.
What would be more thrilling to see is when Anj is going to meet Khushi and more importantly when all of them which includes Arnav would come to know that it was Payal all along and not Khushi...Nevertheless, it doesn't put Khushi in a better place as Shyam still got married to Khushi's Sis and Anj was hurt...in what measures we have yet to see.
That would be some turning point and with your smashing writing skills I am sure you would just make us blown away.😊

Would love to get PM from u on ur updates.Thank You.

Ash.
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Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE=meera30]

Chapter 8

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WOWWW That was breathtaking... 😲😃
Love the way you write!!! 👏
please continue!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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yippee... you updated??? love you... i was juz thnkng wen would u update and there comes ur pm... loved the update... lovd it lovd it... and juz lovd it... 
and ya.. once again... 

my comment first!!! yipppeee!!! 
Edited by ArshiRaiguptha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was very emotional...I hope Anjali finally manages to talk to her brother...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the pm.
i was wondering wht anjali's reaction wld be on seeing khushi- liked it , hoefully she wld clear the misunderstanding.

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Posted: 12 years ago

emotional and heartwrenching update!

loved the way u wrote it!

hope anji takes a stand and talks about it to arnav!:D

beautifully written!

anji and khusi warming each other up was really cute and sweet! 



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Posted: 12 years ago
Heart-wrenching😭..hope anjali manages to b strong n tells arnav evrythn so dat he dsnt msundrstnd khushi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic chapter! pls continue soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww. I wish Anjali confesses to her brother at least now. 

It was a lifetime of hurt that lay between Arnav and her.

Best lines ^^^ :)