ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16 - Page 104

moving to the next thread..i must tell i'm thoroughly enjoying this story every bit of it...

loved it.. so good story

"Damn, Di. I am almost tempted to tell Akash that we should postpone our honeymoon. I think it's too soon to show him my true colors, though" Aditi laughed.

Re-reading this but still it feels so fresh...

Read this story for the first time, just a week back. I was too engrossed in the plot then, to type and post a comment. So here I am, re-reading the tale just to post a footnote if you may, on each chapter.

Chap 1
A stirring encounter - Ms Drama Queen comes face to face with Mr Handsome Grouch...again. And the rest as they say is history.

Chap 2
Pull of the past - No period of time is long enough and no conflict intense enough to obliterate the pull they have for each other.

Chap 3
Wrong end of the stick - Arnav truly has a lot of growing up to do...cos seeing without validating is erroneous believing !!

Chap 4
Collision course - For me, no Arnav-Khushi tale is complete without the requisite bumping into each other. A husky 'Tum theek ho?'is as essential to the plot as panipuri is for survival !

Chap 5
Flowers, fairy lights and everything bright - That's what 'weddings' are made of; not 'marriages'. Marriages spell adultery...and pain more than flesh and blood can bear. i.e for The Raizada, atleast.

Chap 6
Vanity, not love is my folly - Mr Raizada despises her and despises the fact that even with all the despisal he is still affected by her. Pride and arrogance help him conceal the emotions she stirs in him, right ? well, ummm...

Chap 7
Vision awash with crimson - Red, the colour of blush, passion, desire, rage, Arnav and Khushi.

Chap 8
Perfection is ephemeral - Scrumptious meal, romantic ambience, an evening of reminiscence and a kiss that takes your breath away. A perfect date. Let's just enjoy it while it lasts...until the past rears its ugly head.

Chap 9
I'm only human - Anjali. Back then a 17 year old girl, who had lost everything she held dear, who just needed to be loved. Not coming clean with her brother was a selfish decision. A fatal error of judgement that destroyed a beautiful friendship.

Chap 10
Return to the scene of crime - Then she was a self-centered teenager, who gave a hoot about the repercussions of her calculated silence. Today the matured woman in her knows, her action (or the lack of it) was criminal.

I love this story of yours. Will continue with chap 11 in my next post. Have been somewhat busy lately.

Chap 11
All that's left is love - With misunderstanding out of the way and old friendship metamorphosed into supressed attraction all that remains is love and it WILL find a way.

Chap 12
A heart of gold - Only Khushi can find it in herself to feel sympathy for the very person who had subjected her to unwarranted hatred for so long.

Chap13
The game plan - As it is, there is no use quarelling with fate. And with co-ordinated efforts from such strong forces as Destiny, Anjali and Aditi, Khushi's defiance doesn't stand a chance !! The walls surrounding the once broken heart will be brought down.

Chap 14
Together ever-after - Ever after is just the beginning. With Life's tendency of catching us unawares, is 'happily' ever-after even possible? A promise of togetherness, in sickness and in health, well that is something they CAN promise each other.

Chap 15
Two souls, with but a single thought. Two hearts that beat as one.

Chap 16
Now way Jose - The story can't end here!! It has just begun. I am marching over to chap 17; and beyond !!

Chap 17
'Normal' is ambiguous - Childhood sweethearts, grown apart as a result of a scenario-grossly misconstrued...the ensuing feigned hatred... yet their love shining through. When there is nothing run-of-the-mill about their story, how can their romance be any different ?

Chap 18
I am home, atlast - Home, for him, has always been the arms of this innocent, loving and beautiful girl. In her, he has found solace... hamesha.

Chap 19
The most imperfectly perfect emotion - Love - it is complicated, uncontrollable, queer at times. It is hope, happiness and eternity. Total surrender...mind, body and soul to the one and only one.

Chap 20
You don't marry the person you can live with, you marry the person you can't live without.

Enjoyed this journey. My next stop would be "A Word's Worth". Until then, au revoir.

All your stories are really amazing but this one is so so beautiful.  i already  read this story 3 times and this is the fourth time i will reading...

Started to re-read this one, meera

Prologue: Interesting...Interesting..Interesting!!







Edited by Tapdance - 9 years ago

Chapter 9: That was a really wonderful  chapter!



Edited by Tapdance - 9 years ago