Maanvi: Kya yaar Virat? Problem kya hai tumhaari. Phir subha subha jagaadiya!
Virat: Maanvi'tum jab dekho mazaak karthi rehethi ho.
Maanvi: Uff'ab apni bakwaas band karo aur mujhey sonney do.
Maanvi pulls herself close to Virat again.
Virat: Maanvi-
Maanvi: Virat!
Virat: Theek hai. Mein Jeevika bhabhi ko boldetha hoon ki tum unssey nahi milnaa chaathi ho.
Maanvi: Di! Nahi nahi!
Maanvi suddenly sits up on the bed. She realizes she was in Virat's arms. Virat gets up.
Virat: Chaley?
Maanvi is staring into space recalling the memories of the past day and virat realizes the same.
Virat: Maanvi, kyu itna sochri ho? Mein hoon na yaha tumharrey saath?
Maanvi places herself in Virat's arms.
Maanvi: Virat'virat I'm sorry. Mein'mein kabhi tumhey dard nahi dena chaathi thhi. Virat mein bohoth dargayi thi. Mujhey laga ki tim bohoth jaldi phayslaa kar rehey thheyy. Virat dekho'mein jaanthi hoon ki tum mujhsey kithna pyaar karthey ho par' par mujhey cancer hai Virat aur-
Virat: Maanvi'.ab tho such boldo. Sab kuch bhul jao'yeh bimaari'yeh sab'sab bhul jao. Kya tum mujhsey pyaar karthi ho?
Maanvi looks down. Virat cups her face in his hands.
Virat: Maanvi?
Maanvi: Virat mein vo-
Suddenly Virat's phone rings. It is Viren on the other side.
Viren: Virat merrey bhay'.ab tho jaldi ghar aajao'bohoth time milgaya akkeyley tumhey tumhaari beygam ke saath. Jeevika puri raath Maanvi Maanvi bolthey bolthey soy nahi hai. Jaldi ajao yaar. Meri pathni ki tabyath kharaab math karo!
Virat: Bhay hum bas abhi hi arrey hai. Aap bhabhi ko cheyn ki saas leyney kilye boldijye. Achha bhay rakhtha hoon.
Viren: Theek hai. Jaldi aana.
Virat: Jee bhay.
Viren puts the phone down to see that Maanvi has once again fallen asleep.
Virat: Maanvi abh uttho aur challo, ghar challo.
Maanvi: Thora der aur.
She says this as she cuddles herself up in Virat's arms again.
Virat: Theek hai. Tho mein bhaya ko phone karkey boldetha hoon ki bhabhi ko ek aur raath sonney ke bina guzaarna hoga.
Maanvi: Sonney
key bina? Matlab? Matlab'.di puri raath soy nahi hai!
Virat: Jee ha!
Maanvi: Chalo! Chalo! Abhi chalo! Mujhey apni di sey milna hai ! Chalo!
For just one time before leaving Virat wants to hug Maanvi'within a few hours they are going to be home and they will have no privacy. Virat takes Maanvi in his arms. It seems like everything was going on the wrong track but now it's all right. It seems like the puzzle pieces have finally fit together. Finally Virat and Maanvi leave the hotel. Since the car isn't working they take a bus and experience a very bumpy ride. Finally they arrive home.
*** At the Vadhera house ***
Jeevika: Maanvi! Maanvi! Tu kayssi hai? Tujhey kuch hua tho nahi na? Patha hai meri jaan nikal gayi thi! Kuch bolkeyy nahi jaasakthi thhi tu? Kya zaroorath thhi akeyley jaaney ki? Maanvi'tu theek hai na? Tu kuch bolthi kyu nahi-
Maanvi: Di di di di di di di di ! Aap mujhey bolney ka moka dengi tabhi na mein bolungi! Mein bilkul theek hoon! Aaj thaq mujhey lagtha thha ki mein bohoth bari drama queen hoon. Par aapney tho mujhey bhi haraa diya! Kya baath hai di?!?! Aapko puri raath na sonney ki zaroorath kyat hi? Jaaye jaakey soyyey! Mujhey dekhliya na ab jaye! Soye!
Jeevika: Arrey pagli'aapney behen kilye ek raath tho kuch bhi nahi'saath janmey bhi mein raatho uthkey bithaasakthi hoon. Yeh tho phir bhi kuch nahi.
Maanvi and Jeevika share an embrace.
Maanvi: Di'aapko patha hai kal mein bohoth phoolon sey milli. Aur sab ka yahi kehena thaa ki Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behena Hai'meri Di!
Jeevika: Aur tujhey patha hai Maanu kal mein bohoth thaaron sey milli. Aur sab ka yahi kehena thaa ki Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behena hai'meri Maanvi!
Maanvi: Wow di! Phoolon ney mujhey kaha aur thaaron ne aapko! Bilkul same to same answer mila na hum dono ko! Aakhir behen hai hum..!
Jeevika and Maanvi: Khoon ka rishta hai hummara!
Jeevika and Maanvi lean their heads in together smiling.
Viren: Mrs Phikar Minister'.kya mein bhi aapni Saali Sayba sey do baaathey karlu ya aapko kuch aur kehena hai?
Jeevika and maanvi laugh.
Maanvi: Gigu!
Maanvi goes to hug Viren.
Viren: Maanvi'thek hai na?
Maanvi smiles nodding. Beeji comes to see Maanvi.
Maanvi: Beeji!
Beeji: Kaha chali gayi thi tu ha? Theek hai na beta?
Maanvi: Ha Beeji'mein bilkul theek hoon.
Beeji: Sab theek hai na Maanvi:
Maanvi understands beeji is trying to ask her about her cancer. Virat understands too.
Maanvi: Ha beeji sab theek hai.
Beeji hugs Maanvi.
Jeevika: Virat'thank you so much. Meri behen ko merrey paas vapus layney kilye.
The 'Hua Kya Hua Kya Hua Re Bol Deewani,' music starts playing in the background.
Virat: Bhabhi'.na jaaney kithney ladkio ko meyney bachay hai. Yeh tho phir bhi aapki behen hai.
Maanvi (thinking in her head): Aacha bacha tho yeh baath hai. Mujhey jealous karney ka koshish karrey ho. Dekhna kaysey tumhaari band bajaathi hoon mein.
Virat and Maanvi are speaking through their eyes'Jeevika and VIren realize that something has definitely happened between them.
Virat and Maanvi smile. They have a new sense of understanding between them. It is as if within their hearts a world of trust and hope has formed a place. Virat was unable to hear whether Maanvi loved him or not and he was waiting for the time when she would finally confess her feelings towards him. Maanvi doesn't know whether Virat and her will ever be able to be together again however, it seems as if everything is going to be OK. It seems as if life has finally taken a turn in the right direction. The direction which leads to happiness.
As happy as Virat and Maanvi are'they are unaware of the troubles Maya can create to get Maanvi out of Virat's life. Maya will do anything to pierce herself across Virat and Maanvi's life'.whether she will succeed or not is up to how strong Virat and Maanvi's relationship will get and how much trust the will have between them.
***
A little while later after Maanvi has had some rest she comes out of her room in the kitchen to see that Jeevika di is cooking.
Maanvi: Di!
Jeevika: Manu'tu'tu kamrey me jaakar so'abhi ja! Ja!
Jeevika touches Maanvi's forehead.
Jeevika: Dekh Maanvi abhi tak tera bukhaar bhi nahi uthra! Tu jaana Maanvi'please Maanvi-
Maanvi: Di'.apko patha hai na! Mujhey patient jaysey rehena achha nahi lagtha'bohoth soliya!! Please na di...nahi jaana'
Jeevika: Accha Maanvi theek hai. Par tu mujhsey vaada kar ki agar phir their tabyath kharab huyi tho tu jaakey sojayegi.
Maanvi: Ha di! Sojaungi..! Aap bhi na'ithna chinta kyu karthi hai?
Jeevika: Kya na karu'.behen hai tu meri !
Maanvi and Jeevika smile and hug each other. Suddenly Jeevika realises that she has yet to ask Maanvi why she just disappeared yesterday.
Jeevika: Maanvi'acha yeh batha'tu kal kaha challi gay thi? Aur kyu?
Maanvi looks down not wanting to respond. What will she say to her? That she ran away because Virat loved her but she couldn't accept his love because she had cancer? She couldn't tell her di that'.she couldn't.
Jeevika: Maanvi ?
Maanvi: Ha? Um'di vo'.vo'di! Dekhya na dood ubalgaya! Di merrey liye pakorrey bana dijye na'bohoth bhuk laga hai! Please di'!
Jeevika turns the stove off and focuses all her attention on Maanvi.
Jeevika: Maanvi'dekh tu baath ko ghuma math'batha mujhey. Maanvi tu bathaathi kyu nahi?
Maanvi: Di yeh beykaar ki baathey chorye na-
Jeevika: bekar ki bathey'? Tujhey yeh bekar ki baath lagri hai. Maanvi dekh mujhey saaf saaf bathadey ki kya hua tha'Maanvi chintha hothi hai mujhey teri'batha-
Viren: Jeevika?!?!
Viren's voice is coming from a distance.
Maanvi: Aaj mein dekh kar rahoongi ki jab aap aur jigu akeyley hothey hai tu kya kya karthey hai!!!
Maanvi goes and hides behind the kitchen bench. Viren enters the kitchen.
Viren: Ay hay'kya banaari hai meri pathni?
Jeevika: Viren ji vo'dekhye aap kuch math karnaa Maan-
Viren: Kuch na karu'.nahi nahi'kithney din hogaya. Thora romance karney do na!
Viren pulls Jeevika into his arms. Maanvi starts silently laughing.
Jeevika: Viren ji'um'.kitchen'.mera matlab'kitchen theek nahi hai na romance karney kilye'koy aajayga'dekhleyva'issiliye-
Viren: Issiliye hummey kamrey mein jaaney chayeh! Very good point!
Jeevika: Viren ji nahi mein-
Viren: Chalo! Chalo na! Chalo'
Before Jeevika leaves Maanvi and her look at each other in that *little sister'big sister* way. Viren takes Jeevika upstairs as Maanvi laughs. A second later Virat comes in the kitchen.
Virat: Kya baath hai partner'bari zor sey hassri ho-
Maanvi: Kyu? Tumhey meri hassi sey problem hai-nazar laganney ay ho?
Virat: Nahi partner'nazar laganney nahi'nazar sey dekhney aya hoon!
Maanvi: Nazar sey nahi tho kya naakh sey dekho gey?
Virat: Partner'maana parrey ga'bohoth hi imaginative thinking hai tumhaari! Socho agar dunya naakh sey dekh paatha'
As soon as Virat stops speaking Maanvi has a flashback
*** FLASHBACK ***
Virat: Bhabhi'.na jaaney kithney ladkio ko meyney bachay hai. Yeh tho phir bhi aapki behen hai.
Then Maanvi remembers what she had said to herself.
Maanvi (thinking in her head): Aacha bacha tho yeh baath hai. Mujhey jealous karney ka koshish karrey ho. Dekhna kaysey tumhaari band bajaathi hoon mein.
*** FLASHBACK ENDS ***
Meanwhile Virat has started playing with a bowl of flour.
Maanvi: Um'Virat?
Virat: Ha'bolo?
Maanvi: Zara vo aata dena tho'
Virat: Kyu?
Maanvi: Mujhey aata chaheyeh tumhey koy problem hai? Accha chalo bathaa hi dethi hoon, aaj mein sab kilye roti manaongi.
Virat: Tu chef ka professions kabse take up karli yaar?
Maanvi: Dekho'.jithna kaha jay uthna hi karo'mujhey aata chahiyeh mujhey do!
Virat: Jo hukum saiba'.
Virat lifts up the plate with aata and takes it to Maanvi'
Virat: Yeh lo!
He holds out the plate to Maanvi.
Maanvi thinks in her head'.mujhsey paanga leyney challey thheeyy Virat'tumney kya kaha thha? Ha, yahi na ki na jaaney kithna ladkio ko tumney bachaya hai. Mein tho phir bhi di ki behen hoon na. Chalo'aaj mein saabith karhi dethi hoon ki Maanvi Chaudry koy ayssi vayssi ladki nahi'khaas ladki hai!
Virat: Heeelllooo? Kya hua bandariya?
Maanvi thinks in her head: accha bacha'ab mujhey bandariya? Yeh jo tumharaa Bandar jaysey chehera hai na'abhi saaf karkey dikhaathi hoon!
Maanvi takes her hand out to take the plate of aata but instead she places her hand underneath it and flips the plate up'.all the flour lands on Virat's face!! Maanvi lets out a huge laugh as Virat is shocked to see his reflection on the oven's door with all the aata over his face. Maanvi is laughing her head off.
Virat: Maanvi Chaudary!!!
Maanvi: Kyu'.kya kaha thha tumney? Ha'ki -Maanvi clears her throat and tries to put on Virat's voice- Bhabhi'.na jaaney kithney ladkio ko meyney bachay hai. Yeh tho phir bhi aapki behen hai. Yahi kaha thaa na? Ab dekha'mein kithni khaas ladki hoon!
Virat: Accha beta'..yeh lo'..
Virat grabs the remaining aata on the plate and spread it all over Maanvi's face.
Maanvi: Virat!!!! Tumhaari himath kayssey huyi'Maanvi Chaudary ki cheherey pe aata lagaaney ki himath kaysey huyi tumhey?!?!?!
Maanvi starts chasing Virat around the kitchen. She continues to do so for a while until both of them hear someone's footsteps. The grab a towel and wipe that flour off of their faces. Swamini has entered the kitchen. She looks at all the flour all over the floor.
Swamini: Yeh kya haal mana key rakhdiya hai? Saaf karo yeh sab'.Maanvi mein tumsey baath kari hoon'saaf karo. Batameez.
Before Virat can defend Maanvi Swamini leaves the kitchen. Maanvi grabs a towel and begins wiping the floor.
Maanvi: Tumharrey vajey sey'Virat Vadhera mujhey phir death sunni pari'.
Virat: Sorry partner'par such mein'.aata nahi pochna chahiyeh tha cheherrey sey tumhey'jab laga va thha tho bohoth hi sundar lagri thhi'tumhari shakal dekh key shayad bua tumhey nahi daat thi!
Maanvi: Accha bacha.
Maanvi gets up and starts chasing Virat around the kitchen yet again. Suddenly Maanvi begins to feel dizzy and Virat realizes.
Virat: Maanvi? Maanvi?
Virat catches unstable Maanvi in his arms and lifts her up.
Virat: Bittu? Bittu?
A servant of the house come in the kitchen seeing Maanv in Virat's arms.
Bittu: Jee sahib.
Virat: Zara yeh aata ko saaf kardey nap lese.
Bitu: Jee sahib.
Virat takes Maanvi up in his room with him trying to make sure that nobody is around to see that Maanvi is sick yet again.
Back in the kitchen Swamini enters once again.
Swamini: Bittu?
Bittu: Jee memsaab.
Swamini: Tum yeh sab kyu saaf karrey ho? Meiney tho Maanvi ko kaha tha.
Bittu: Vo memsaab'.Maanvi ji behosh hoayi thhi. Virat unhey godh mein uthaa key legaya abhi'
Swamini leaves the kitchen. She is scared that if she doesn't do something to break Virat and Maanvi up soon they relationship will get too close. But what can she do?
PRECAP: Virat runs after Maanvi extremely quickly. He grabs her and pushes her against the wall.
QUOTE: The more things you hide inside your heart'the heavier it will get. Even though it may seem like it is better to keep some things hidden, the truth has to come out some day, so why not today?
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